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Date Night (Rough, Oct. 10)

Date Night (Rough, Oct. 10)

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Faryn Pearl
Lauren McKinley
Monica Davila
John Sanford

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Mike Kachur

October 11, 2021
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  1. Scene 001 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: Alright, Dan-o. You can

    do this. You've been on first dates with 61 Sparklr girls now...
  2. Scene 002 Panel 1

  3. Scene 002 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: Number 62 has gotta

    like you.
  4. Scene 002 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Your hair looks nice--

  5. Scene 002 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: You've got a fresh

    shave,--
  6. Scene 002 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: --and nothing on your

    clothes!
  7. Scene 002 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: Man, I'm gonna rock

    this date tonight!
  8. Scene 002 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: ...I hope.

  9. Scene 002 Panel 8 Dialog DAN: Just need to make

    sure I don't--
  10. Scene 002 Panel 9 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  11. Scene 002 Panel 10 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  12. Scene 002 Panel 11 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  13. Scene 002 Panel 12 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  14. Scene 002 Panel 13 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  15. Scene 002 Panel 14 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises mixed

    with ethereal screaming)
  16. Scene 002 Panel 15 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises mixed

    with ethereal screaming) Notes A-B cycle
  17. Scene 002 Panel 16 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises mixed

    with ethereal screaming) Notes A-B cycle
  18. Scene 002 Panel 17 Dialog SFX: *SNAP*

  19. Scene 002 Panel 18

  20. Scene 002 Panel 19 Dialog DAN: --do that.

  21. Scene 002 Panel 20

  22. Scene 002 Panel 21 Dialog DAN: Okay, that one wasn't

    too bad...
  23. Scene 003 Panel 1

  24. Scene 003 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: At least it wasn't

    in front of--
  25. Scene 003 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: At least it wasn't

    in front of--
  26. Scene 003 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: At least it wasn't

    in front of--
  27. Scene 003 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: At least it wasn't

    in front of--
  28. Scene 003 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: At least it wasn't

    in front of--
  29. Scene 003 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: --SARAH!

  30. Scene 003 Panel 8 Dialog SARAH: Oh, hey, you're Dan!

  31. Scene 004 Panel 1

  32. Scene 004 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: I was kinda worried

    you'd be a weirdo--
  33. Scene 004 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: but I'm glad you're

    just a normal guy.
  34. Scene 004 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: Yeah, haha.

  35. Scene 005 Panel 1

  36. Scene 005 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: Normal guy!

  37. Scene 005 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Completely...

  38. Scene 005 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: --utterly...

  39. Scene 005 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: --normal...

  40. Scene 005 Panel 6

  41. Scene 006 Panel 1

  42. Scene 007 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: So, how long have

    you lived in Bostimore?
  43. Scene 007 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: Oh, about four months

    now.
  44. Scene 008 Panel 1

  45. Scene 008 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: There's so many cool

    seafood places, but--
  46. Scene 008 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: --I don't know how

    long it takes to try 'em all.
  47. Scene 009 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH (O.S.): (Laughs) Do you

    like seafood?
  48. Scene 009 Panel 2

  49. Scene 009 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Oh--

  50. Scene 009 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: --yeah!

  51. Scene 009 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: (Stammers)

  52. Scene 009 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: Totally!

  53. Scene 010 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: (chuckles)

  54. Scene 010 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: It's great!

  55. Scene 010 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: (Laughing)

  56. Scene 010 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: (Laughing)

  57. Scene 010 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: (Laughing) It totally doesn't--

    Notes A-B cycle
  58. Scene 010 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: (Laughing) It totally doesn't--

    Notes A-B cycle
  59. Scene 010 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: --kick up my--

  60. Scene 011 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: --gag reflex like I'm

    a dumb baby or something because--
  61. Scene 011 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: --gag reflex like I'm

    a dumb baby or something because--
  62. Scene 011 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: --I'm an adult.

  63. Scene 011 Panel 4

  64. Scene 011 Panel 5

  65. Scene 011 Panel 6 Dialog SAN: So, you're ok with

    just a--
  66. Scene 011 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: --pizza, right?

  67. Scene 012 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: Oh, for--

  68. Scene 012 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: --sure.

  69. Scene 012 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: (Sips water)

  70. Scene 012 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: With shrimp, right?

  71. Scene 012 Panel 5

  72. Scene 013 Panel 1

  73. Scene 013 Panel 2

  74. Scene 013 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Uhhhh...

  75. Scene 013 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: (uncomfortable moan)

  76. Scene 013 Panel 5 Dialog DAN (quietly, to himself): C'mon,

    not here, not now... anywhere else...
  77. Scene 013 Panel 6 Dialog SARAH: You OK?

  78. Scene 014 Panel 1

  79. Scene 014 Panel 2 Dialog SFX: (Snapping, crackling noises)

  80. Scene 014 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

  81. Scene 014 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

    Notes A-B cycle
  82. Scene 014 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

    Notes A-B cycle
  83. Scene 014 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

    Notes A-B cycle
  84. Scene 014 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

    Notes A-B cycle
  85. Scene 014 Panel 8 Dialog SFX: (Snapping, crackling noises)

  86. Scene 015 Panel 1 Dialog SFX: (Snapping, crackling noises)

  87. Scene 015 Panel 2

  88. Scene 015 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Hrrgh--

  89. Scene 015 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: I'm sorry!

  90. Scene 015 Panel 5

  91. Scene 016 Panel 1

  92. Scene 016 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: Aww, Dan...

  93. Scene 016 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: It's okay.

  94. Scene 016 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: I don't think any--

  95. Scene 016 Panel 5 Dialog SARAH: --less of you.

  96. Scene 016 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: Wait...

  97. Scene 016 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: You don't?

  98. Scene 017 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: Dude, I've seen way

    worse from other guys on Sparklr!
  99. Scene 017 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: One guy doing something

    embarrassing isn't horrible.
  100. Scene 017 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Not if my cousin

    from Florida is on there.
  101. Scene 017 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: (Laughs)

  102. Scene 017 Panel 5 Dialog SARAH: (Laughs)

  103. Scene 017 Panel 6 Dialog SARAH: (Laughs)

  104. Scene 017 Panel 7 Dialog SARAH: (Laughs)

  105. Scene 018 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: You know, I think

    it's--
  106. Scene 018 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: --great when guys are--

  107. Scene 018 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: --okay--

  108. Scene 018 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: --with their imper--

  109. Scene 018 Panel 5 Dialog SARAH: --fections and embrace them.

  110. Scene 019 Panel 1

  111. Scene 019 Panel 2

  112. Scene 019 Panel 3

  113. Scene 019 Panel 4

  114. Scene 019 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: You really do?

  115. Scene 020 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: I really REALLY do.

  116. Scene 020 Panel 2

  117. Scene 021 Panel 1

  118. Scene 021 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: Oh--

  119. Scene 021 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: heh heh

  120. Scene 021 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: Cool.

  121. Scene 021 Panel 5

  122. Scene 021 Panel 6

  123. Scene 021 Panel 7

  124. Scene 021 Panel 8

  125. Scene 022 Panel 1

  126. Scene 022 Panel 2

  127. Scene 022 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: (Giggles)

  128. Scene 022 Panel 4 Action Notes Sarah's neck opens up.

  129. Scene 022 Panel 5 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  130. Scene 022 Panel 6 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  131. Scene 023 Panel 1 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  132. Scene 023 Panel 2 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  133. Scene 023 Panel 3 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  134. Scene 023 Panel 4 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  135. Scene 023 Panel 5

  136. Scene 023 Panel 6

  137. Scene 023 Panel 7