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"Date Night" Roughs

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September 12, 2021

"Date Night" Roughs

ROUGH version of a storyboard I'm working on.

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Mike Kachur

September 12, 2021
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  1. Scene 001 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: Alright, Dan-o. She's almost

    here, and you're gonna do great!
  2. Scene 002 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: Your hair looks nice--

  3. Scene 002 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: You've got a--

  4. Scene 002 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: --clean, zit-free face,

  5. Scene 002 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: --and nothing on your

    clothes!
  6. Scene 002 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: Man, I'm gonna rock

    it tonight. just as long as I don't--
  7. Scene 002 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  8. Scene 002 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  9. Scene 002 Panel 8 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  10. Scene 002 Panel 9 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  11. Scene 002 Panel 10 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises)

  12. Scene 002 Panel 11 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises mixed

    with ethereal screaming)
  13. Scene 002 Panel 12 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises mixed

    with ethereal screaming) Notes A-B cycle
  14. Scene 002 Panel 13 Dialog DAN: (Hideous guttural noises mixed

    with ethereal screaming) Notes A-B cycle
  15. Scene 002 Panel 14 Dialog SFX: *SNAP*

  16. Scene 002 Panel 15

  17. Scene 002 Panel 16 Dialog DAN: --do that.

  18. Scene 002 Panel 17

  19. Scene 003 Panel 1

  20. Scene 003 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: Okay, it was just

    6:30, so she should hopefully be--
  21. Scene 003 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Okay, it was just

    6:30, so she should hopefully be--
  22. Scene 003 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: Okay, it was just

    6:30, so she should hopefully be--
  23. Scene 003 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: Okay, it was just

    6:30, so she should hopefully be--
  24. Scene 003 Panel 6 Dialog DAN+SARAH: Oof!

  25. Scene 004 Panel 1

  26. Scene 004 Panel 2

  27. Scene 004 Panel 3

  28. Scene 004 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: (GASP) Dan!

  29. Scene 005 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: Oh, uh, hey.

  30. Scene 005 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: Oh, it's great to

    finally meet you!
  31. Scene 005 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: You, too, Sarah.

  32. Scene 005 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: Lotta guys on Sparklr

    turn out to be weirdos, but I'm so glad you're a normal person. Notes A-B cycle
  33. Scene 005 Panel 5 Dialog SARAH: Lotta guys on Sparklr

    turn out to be weirdos, but I'm so glad you're a normal person. Notes A-B cycle
  34. Scene 006 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: Yeah, heheh... Notes A-B

    cycle
  35. Scene 006 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: Yeah, heheh... Notes A-B

    cycle
  36. Scene 006 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: A normal person. Notes

    A-B cycle
  37. Scene 006 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: A normal person. Notes

    A-B cycle
  38. Scene 007 Panel 1

  39. Scene 007 Panel 2

  40. Scene 007 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: This is--

  41. Scene 007 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: --the place.

  42. Scene 007 Panel 5 Dialog SARAH: (EXCITED GASP)

  43. Scene 008 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH (O.S.): It's so lovely!

    DAN (O.S.): Yeah, I gasped my first time here, too.
  44. Scene 009 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: It's the perfect vibe!

  45. Scene 009 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: Totally.

  46. Scene 010 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: I've been coming here

    a lot lately. Notes A-B cycle
  47. Scene 010 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: I've been coming here

    a lot lately. Notes A-B cycle
  48. Scene 010 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH (O.S.): You mean with

    other girls on Sparklr? Notes A-B cycle
  49. Scene 010 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH (O.S.): You mean with

    other girls on Sparklr? Notes A-B cycle
  50. Scene 010 Panel 5 Notes A-B cycle

  51. Scene 010 Panel 6 Notes A-B cycle

  52. Scene 010 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: Nope! Nope! Just family

    and friends! Notes A-B cycle
  53. Scene 010 Panel 8 Dialog DAN: Nope! Nope! Just family

    and friends! Notes A-B cycle
  54. Scene 010 Panel 9 Dialog SARAH (O.S.): Oh, alright. Notes

    A-B cycle
  55. Scene 010 Panel 10 Dialog SARAH (O.S.): Oh, alright. Notes

    A-B cycle
  56. Scene 010 Panel 11 Notes A-B cycle

  57. Scene 010 Panel 12 Notes A-B cycle

  58. Scene 010 Panel 13 Notes A-B cycle

  59. Scene 010 Panel 14 Notes A-B cycle

  60. Scene 011 Panel 1

  61. Scene 011 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: So, how--

  62. Scene 011 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: --long have you--

  63. Scene 011 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: --been living in--

  64. Scene 011 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: --Bostimore?

  65. Scene 011 Panel 6 Dialog SARAH: Uh, about--

  66. Scene 011 Panel 7 Dialog SARAH: four months now.

  67. Scene 011 Panel 8 Dialog SARAH: It's a pretty--

  68. Scene 011 Panel 9 Dialog SARAH: --cool place!

  69. Scene 012 Panel 1

  70. Scene 012 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: There's so many seafood

    places--
  71. Scene 012 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: --I don't know how

    long it takes to try 'em all.
  72. Scene 013 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH (O.S.): (Laughs) Do you

    like seafood? Notes The green border is how I want to reframe this shot I already drew.
  73. Scene 013 Panel 2 Notes The green border is how

    I want to reframe this shot I already drew.
  74. Scene 013 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Yeah! Totally! Notes The

    green border is how I want to reframe this shot I already drew.
  75. Scene 014 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: Ha ha. Notes A-B

    cycle
  76. Scene 014 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: Ha ha. Notes A-B

    cycle
  77. Scene 014 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: (Laughing) I love it!

    Notes A-B cycle
  78. Scene 014 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: (Laughing) I love it!

    Notes A-B cycle
  79. Scene 014 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: (Laughing)

  80. Scene 014 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: (Laughing)

  81. Scene 014 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: (Laughing)

  82. Scene 014 Panel 8 Dialog DAN: (Laughing) It's so delicious--

    Notes A-B cycle
  83. Scene 014 Panel 9 Dialog DAN: (Laughing) It's so delicious--

    Notes A-B cycle
  84. Scene 015 Panel 1 Dialog DAN: --and totally doesn't upset

    my stomach or anything...
  85. Scene 015 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: It's great.

  86. Scene 015 Panel 3

  87. Scene 015 Panel 4

  88. Scene 015 Panel 5 Dialog SAN: So, you're ok with

    just a--
  89. Scene 015 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: --pizza, right?

  90. Scene 016 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: Oh, for--

  91. Scene 016 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: --sure.

  92. Scene 016 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: (Sips water)

  93. Scene 016 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: With pineapple, right?

  94. Scene 017 Panel 1

  95. Scene 017 Panel 2 Dialog SFX: (Snapping, crackling noises)

  96. Scene 017 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

  97. Scene 017 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

    Notes A-B cycle
  98. Scene 017 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

    Notes A-B cycle
  99. Scene 017 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

    Notes A-B cycle
  100. Scene 017 Panel 7 Dialog DAN: (Monstrous roaring and screeching)

    Notes A-B cycle
  101. Scene 017 Panel 8 Dialog SFX: (Snapping, crackling noises)

  102. Scene 018 Panel 1 Dialog SFX: (Snapping, crackling noises)

  103. Scene 018 Panel 2

  104. Scene 018 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: Hrrgh--

  105. Scene 018 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: I'm sorry!

  106. Scene 018 Panel 5

  107. Scene 019 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: Aww, Dan...

  108. Scene 019 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: It's okay.

  109. Scene 019 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: I don't think any--

  110. Scene 019 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: --less of you.

  111. Scene 019 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: Wait...

  112. Scene 019 Panel 6 Dialog DAN: You don't?

  113. Scene 020 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: Of course not!

  114. Scene 020 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: Just yesterday, my roommate

    found out I ate the last crumb cake-- Notes Sarah's acting will be more interestingly posed out in the final version but I am crunched for time.
  115. Scene 020 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: --and she breathed fire

    all over the fridge! Notes Sarah's acting will be more interestingly posed out in the final version but I am crunched for time.
  116. Scene 020 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: And this one time,

    I tripped on the sidewalk, and I grew these-- Notes Sarah's acting will be more interestingly posed out in the final version but I am crunched for time.
  117. Scene 020 Panel 5 Dialog SARAH: --HUUUUGE spikes, like 10

    feet tall! Notes Sarah's acting will be more interestingly posed out in the final version but I am crunched for time.
  118. Scene 020 Panel 6 Dialog SARAH: And once, my mom

    spilled soda at her own birthday dinner-- Notes Sarah's acting will be more interestingly posed out in the final version but I am crunched for time.
  119. Scene 020 Panel 7 Dialog SARAH: --and her mouth turned

    into this HUGE HOLE that was like a tunnel that went on for infinity. Notes Sarah's acting will be more interestingly posed out in the final version but I am crunched for time.
  120. Scene 020 Panel 8 Dialog DAN: (Guffaws)

  121. Scene 020 Panel 9 Dialog DAN: (Guffaws)

  122. Scene 020 Panel 10 Dialog DAN: Man, that must have

    been a sight.
  123. Scene 020 Panel 11 Dialog SARAH: Oh, I wish you

    could've been there.
  124. Scene 021 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: You know, I think

    it's--
  125. Scene 021 Panel 2 Dialog SARAH: --great when guys are--

  126. Scene 021 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: --okay--

  127. Scene 021 Panel 4 Dialog SARAH: --with their imper--

  128. Scene 021 Panel 5 Dialog SARAH: --fections and embrace them.

  129. Scene 022 Panel 1

  130. Scene 022 Panel 2

  131. Scene 022 Panel 3

  132. Scene 022 Panel 4

  133. Scene 022 Panel 5 Dialog DAN: You really do?

  134. Scene 023 Panel 1 Dialog SARAH: I really REALLY do.

  135. Scene 023 Panel 2

  136. Scene 024 Panel 1

  137. Scene 024 Panel 2 Dialog DAN: Oh--

  138. Scene 024 Panel 3 Dialog DAN: heh heh

  139. Scene 024 Panel 4 Dialog DAN: Cool.

  140. Scene 024 Panel 5

  141. Scene 024 Panel 6

  142. Scene 024 Panel 7

  143. Scene 024 Panel 8

  144. Scene 025 Panel 1

  145. Scene 025 Panel 2

  146. Scene 025 Panel 3 Dialog SARAH: (Giggles)

  147. Scene 025 Panel 4 Action Notes Sarah's neck opens up.

  148. Scene 025 Panel 5 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  149. Scene 025 Panel 6 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  150. Scene 026 Panel 1 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  151. Scene 026 Panel 2 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  152. Scene 026 Panel 3 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  153. Scene 026 Panel 4 Dialog SFX: (Slithering noises)

  154. Scene 026 Panel 5

  155. Scene 026 Panel 6

  156. Scene 026 Panel 7