Writing is Designing - Speaker Deck

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I’m Michael. I’m a Senior UX Architect at Allstate focused on Conversation Design. I use he/him pronouns.

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Thank you these folks for making tonight happen: Cate Kompare Kin + Carta Jen O'Brien Kelsey Peters

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A special thank you to everyone in this photo:

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writingisdesigning.com • Get your copy of the book • Subscribe to our monthly newsletter • Find out where we’re speaking/teaching STAY IN TOUCH:

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle I work on digital products and physical goods, so I’m deeply involved in the design process. But I also want to call out early that my process is the design process. I don’t write fiction or short stories; I use language to solve problems—whether that’s behind the scenes or in the product itself. I use words as material. " Nicole Fenton Co-Author, Nicely Said Source: http://nicolefenton.com/words-as-material/

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So. Many. Words. How digital products rely on language

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle If you really want to get familiar with a company’s value proposition, try fitting it across the top of four screenshots in the app store. App store

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Log In, Sign In, Register, Create Account, Get Started, Sign Up, Connect, Username, User ID, Password, Passphrase, Recover, Reset, Email, Email Address Access

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Whoops, Sorry, Oops…, We broke something, Just a moment, Please wait, There was a problem, Something’s Wrong, Invalid, Incorrect, Don’t Worry Errors

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Account, Profile, Settings, My Account, Your Profile, Your Settings, Personal Details, Personal Information, Credit Cards, Payment Information, Payment Methods, Preferences Administration

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Cart, Shopping Basket, Items, Payment, Renewal, Subscription, Recurring, Repeating, Pro-Rated, Discount, Initial Payment, Checkout, Buy, Complete Purchase, Burger Me! Buying stuff

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle • SMS notifications • Push notifications • Email notifications • Confirmation emails • Account recovery emails • Email validation emails (emails about emails) • Re-engagement emails • Release notes (bug fixes and performance improvements) • Help content • Terms and conditions • Privacy policy • Contact forms • Contact form confirmation screens and emails And that's just the obvious stuff...

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Errors & Stress Cases What to do when things go wrong

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9/14/1915 BIRTHDATE Please check the birthdate and try again.

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What are your users doing? • A highly stressed parent trying to find the right medicine for their sick child. • A newly engaged couple trying to figure out how to request a marriage license. • A student try to look up their recent test scores. • A driver who was just involved in a car accident trying to schedule and pay for repairs.

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Where you find sustained success driven by recommendations, you find badass users. Smarter, more skillful, more powerful users. Users who know more and can do more in a way that’s personally meaningful. " Kathy Sierra Author, Badass: Making Users Awesome

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Best error ever? Source: https://twitter.com/tobiassjosten/status/448239841679929344?s=21

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2. Define 3. Develop 4. Deliver Source: https://www.designcouncil.org.uk/news-opinion/design-process-what-double-diamond The Double Diamond 1. Discover

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle In all creative processes a number of possible ideas are created (‘divergent thinking’) before refining and narrowing down to the best idea (‘convergent thinking’), and this can be represented by a diamond shape. But the Double Diamond indicates that this happens twice – once to confirm the problem definition and once to create the solution. One of the greatest mistakes is to omit the left-hand diamond and end up solving the wrong problem. " The U.K. Design Council Creators, The Double Diamond

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2. Define 3. Develop 4. Deliver 1. Discover Source: https://www.designcouncil.org.uk/news-opinion/design-process-what-double-diamond The Double Diamond

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Best error ever: Source: https://twitter.com/tobiassjosten/status/448239841679929344?s=21

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Scenario: Check deposits through an app

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Avoid The "Next" button isn't active until the user enters the amount and takes photos of the check. • The "Deposit amount" field is visually prominent • The app teaches its users what to do by progressively activating UI

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Avoid However, something like this can only take you so far. • If a user enters an amount then deletes it, you still need to show a message. • Be wary of accessibility concerns as well—disabling UI can cause issues for visually impaired users.

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Explain Tells the user quickly and clearly what went wrong. • Doesn't tell users what the limit is • Doesn't serve users who want to know more about the deposit limit • When unsure, test.

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Resolve Tell the user what to do next. Help them finish their task.

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Your team is designing and building a sign-up flow for an online insurance company. The law says that account holders must be 18 years of age or older, and you've been asked to handle the error state for when users are younger than 18. Scenario Activity 1. Write down ideas for avoiding, explaining, or resolving the error. 2. Write a draft of your error message.

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Writing is designing Find the words for the people you serve

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Sarah Richards, author of Content Design, points out that if the words you write for something aren’t accessible to everyone, you’ve made a design choice that prevents people from using that thing. Source: https://www.confabevents.com/videos/accessibility-is-usability

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Source: https://www.researchgate.net/publication/33994535_Toward_a_social- cognitive_psychology_of_speech_technology_electronic_resource_affective_responses_to_spe ech-based_e-service In a study with 821 participants, customer service behavior was found to be one of the four most important usability factors out of 76 possibilities. Melanie Polkosky, PhD Toward a Social-Cognitive Psychology of Speech Technology: Affective Responses to Speech-Based e-Service "Customer Service Behavior included items that were related to the friendliness and politeness of the system, its speaking pace, and its use of familiar terms."

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Human communication is the most important gift we have, whether it’s through speech or writing. I really do think that human beings are worth fighting for, especially as technology overtakes more and more of what it means to be human. " Melanie Polkosky, PhD Author, Uncovering Truffles: The Scarcity and Value of Women in STEM

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle The team responsible for this reservation system is using writing and design to force people into the loyalty program and email lists when they're just trying to book a room. Do what users want

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle I feel like I always need the full context of what I’m solving for, so it’s best for my work when I’m able to be in environments where I can get it. If you’re joining a project at the very end and there’s low tolerance for questions, it’s a sign your role as writer hasn’t been well positioned or isn’t well understood. " Katie Lower Designer and Writer

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle We know that words can really hurt people or help them in their personal lives. We can say really reassuring words to people, and it has this huge impact, and we can say hurtful words, and it can have a years-long impact, but we don’t really treat the words we write in interfaces that way. " Natalie Yee UX Designer

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle News is the feedback mechanism of our society; we vote based on the things we learn in the news. When we take a concept like that and we subvert it for commercial use, that’s something that should give you pause. " Jorge Arango Author, Living in Information

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@writingisdesign | ©2020 Michael J. Metts and Andy Welfle Interfaces depend on language Words are everywhere Avoid, explain, and resolve Errors are opportunities Usable, useful, and responsible Writing is designing

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Thanks! Time for some Q&A

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Books are available tonight for $30. Stickers and words of affirmation are also available.

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Thank you to the fine folks at Adobe Design: Jamie Myrold, VP of Design Shawn Cheris, Director of Centralized Design Bailey Sharrocks for planning this event Rob Gianino and the Design Enrichments team Cassarie Soungpanya and the DesignOps team

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Thank you to the Adobe Design Content Strategy team: Amy Adkins Bria Alexander Brandon Bussolini Beth Anne Kinnaird Jess Sattell Sarah Smart Karissa Urry Marisa Williams

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Thank you to everyone who helped make this book a reality: Rosenfeld Media: Lou Rosenfeld Marta Justak Adeline Crites-Moore Technical Reviewers: Jonathon Colman Andrea Drugay Ryan Farrell Scott Kubie Chelsea Larsson Rachel McConnell Kathryn Strauss Sophie Tahran Susan Thome Natalie Yee Contributors and Blurbists: Sara Wachter-Boettcher Jonathon Colman Andrea Drugay Erika Hall Kristina Halvorson Sarah Richards Matt Shearon And many more! Interviewees: Hillary Accarizzi Jorge Arango Alicia Dougherty-Wold Michaela Hackner Lauren Lucchese Katie Lower Matt May Anna Pickard Ada Powers Melanie Polkowsky Jasmine Probst John Saito

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A special thank you to everyone in this photo:

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WritingIsDesigning.com • Get your copy of the book • Subscribe to our monthly newsletter • Find out where we’re speaking/teaching STAY IN TOUCH: