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4 3PVHITLFUDI 8IBUEPQBQFSTMPPLMJLF Abstract Introduction Methods Related Work Experiments Conclusion References !Consists of many different sections !Each section seems to have different roles and contents "‍‍What should we write in each section? "‍‍How to make sure the consistency?

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5 'JOFSHSBJOFETLFUDI 8IBUEPQBQFSTMPPLMJLF Methods Related Work Experiments References !Papers are intentionally redundant for better understanding !Repeat of the basic arguments in different resolution "Just focus on structuring the basic arguments! 1. Background 2. Methods 3. Experiments Methods Experiments Background Methods Experiments Background Background Methods Experiments

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6 #BTJDBSHVNFOUT #BDLHSPVOE Related Work Experiments References Methods Experiments Background Methods Experiments Background Background Methods Experiments Methods

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14 &YBNQMF • Hereafter we use this paper as the example • https://arxiv.org/abs/2202.06417

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15 &YBNQMF 0VUMJOF Abstract Introduction Methods Related Work Experiments Conclusion References Background • Slightly different in the colored sections • But basically the same as the structure we have seen above

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16 3PVHITLFUDI "CTUSBDU • Background • Methods • Experiments !Explanation in order

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17 'JOFSHSBJOFETLFUDI "CTUSBDU ! Explanation in order 1. Task and goal • Text generation for app. 2. Prev. approaches • Stochastic sampling • Modified objective function 3. Remaining problems • Lack of coherence • Anisotropic dist. of rep. • Solutions • Calibrate the rep. space • Diversity-aware decoding • Demonstration • Outperform SOTA 1. 2. 3.

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18 &YBNQMF *OUSPEVDUJPO !5IFTBNFTUSVDUVSF BTUIF"CTUSBDU • #VUXJUINPSFEFUBJMT • *OIJHIFSSFTPMVUJPO • Background • Methods • Experiments

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20 &YBNQMF .FUIPEPMPHZ ! Explanation in order 1. Intuitive explanation on how your methods solve the problem 2. Then describe the details 1. 2. 1. 2.

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22 0WFSBMMDPNQBSJTPO &YQFSJNFOUT q Overall comparison • Demonstrates that the proposed method achieves the goal better than the SOTA methods

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23 q Ablation study • Two proposed methods • Each of them works well and works the best in combination "CMBUJPOTUVEZ &YQFSJNFOUT

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24 'PDVTFEBOBMZTJT &YQFSJNFOUT q Focused analysis • Proposed methods improve the overall performance, but how? ü Do they work as you hypothesized? ü Do they solve the problem you pointed out? Ø Confirming here that the methods mitigate the anisotropic distribution of token representations

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25 'PDVTFEBOBMZTJT &YQFSJNFOUT q Focused analysis • Qualitative analysis

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