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The camera tracks the bird as it flys down towards the house. The bird is singing beautifully.
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Darius's hands begin to pull curtains open
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Darius opens the curtains
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Darius yawns
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Darius notices the bird
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cut to a full shot of the bird singing beautifully.
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Darius is amazed by the singing bird.
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push in as Darius breaths in
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Darius burst into song, his voice is very screechy and off pitch
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cut to and over the shoulder shot as Darius tries to sing to the bird. push in as he sings.
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the bird is alarmed
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the bird winces at how bad Darius sings
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cut to a medium shot of Darius continuing to sing to the bird.
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the birds trys to hold back laughter
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the bird burst into laughter
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cut to a medium shot on Darius still singing loudly
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Darius notices the bird laughing
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Darius swings the curtains closed
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cut to an environmental shot as the bird flys away laughing.
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Push in, we hear dishes being cleaned
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cut to a shot of the fridge
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Darius walks into the frame
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Darius grabs the whiteboard marker
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cut to a close up as Darius checks off the saturday chores he has already finished
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cut to a broom leaning by the side of the fridge. boom up to the handle of the broom
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Darius reaches for the broom handle
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Darius walks out of the frame towards the kitchen
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Darius whistles as he begins to sweep the kitchen floor
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Darius breaks into dance as he sings loudly and very off-key
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zoom out to see the entire window seal
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Several birds fly down on the window frame.
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one birds nugdes another to look at Darius
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Darius hears the birds laughter
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the camera pushes in closer to Darius's puzzled face
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Dariua turns to looks at the bird and the camera uses rack focus to emphasis the laughing birds.
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Darius storms towards the window
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Darius walks out of frame pleased that the birds are gone.
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Darius sings to himself as he folds his laundry
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zoom into a close up as the door keeps shaking
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the door swings open
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Lots of birds break open the door and fly inside
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birds eye veiw as the birds fly around the room
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cut closer to the fireplace as it too shakes
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more birds burst through the opening of the fireplace
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the flying suddenly stops.
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close-up of Darius's face. we see birds right next to him continuing to laugh uncontrollably.
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She reaches for a marshmellow
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She tightens the hood, so only a little bit of her face shows, shielding herself from the fire.
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extreme close-up on her eyes. we see the reflection of the perfectly charred marshmellow in her hand.
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meduim shot of bystanders looking digusted at her creation. She smiles admiring her work.
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Tracking pan on feet
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cut to her back at the smore supply table.
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close- up as she puts her smore together.
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medium shot.
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she throws smore into mouth.
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she happliy chows down on her perfect smore.
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