The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP S1

by Gwenan Walker

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The Old Beach Biddies, Season 1 Ep.1: ”Just Add Water...” By Gwenan Walker

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Page Duration 01:00 1/65

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Page Duration 01:00 Action Notes Fade into est. shot of the shack showing a pair of flamingos, farting around and pecking at random bits and bobs in the sand. 3/65

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 02:00 Panel 4 Page Duration 01:00 Action Notes The flamingos stop their pecking to face the sounds of stomping and grumbling. 4/65

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 5 Action Notes Enter Daphne, on a stomping warpath as she scares the flamingos away. Page Duration 01:00 5/65

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 03:00 Panel 6 Page Duration 01:00 Action Notes She’s grumbling and muttering to herself, waving her arms about in a solo argument. 6/65

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 02:00 Panel 7 Action Notes Daphne is halted in her warpath by the obstruction of potted plants. Page Duration 01:00 7/65

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Down goes the potted plant! Panel 8 Page Duration 01:00 8/65

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 05:00 Panel 9 Page Duration 01:00 Action Notes Daphne stalks over to the other side of the sand dunes to continue her path of destruction. 9/65

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 02:00 Panel 10 Page 10/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 02:00 Panel 11 Page 11/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes She begins vigorously shaking the poor manatee mailbox from its post in the ground.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 03:00 Panel 12 Page 12/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 02:00 Panel 13 Page 13/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Down goes the manatee mailbox!(emphasis on FORCE!) Panel 14 Page 14/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 1 Duration 5:00 Action Notes Daphne stomps up the stairs to the shack. Panel 15 Page 15/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 2 Duration 07:00 Panel 16 Page 16/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Cut to a wide shot of shack interior and Daphne’s roommates: Marjorie (knitting), Rosa (melting into a puddle), and Beverly (drinking something dressed up like a cocktail but is almost certainly fruity and non-alcoholic).

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 3 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Cut to a medium close-up shot of Marjorie knitting. Panel 17 Page 17/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 3 Duration 03:00 Panel 18 Page 18/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Daphne slams the door open, startling Marjorie into spitting out her dentures.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 4 Duration 03:00 Panel 20 Page 20/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Cut to medium closeup of Daphne at the door; she looms in the doorway with a scowl on her face.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 4 Duration 04:00 Dialog Daphne: We need to move out. Panel 21 Page 21/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 5 Duration 05:00 Dialog Rosa: Daphne, we’ve been over this - Panel 22 Page 22/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 5 Duration 09:00 Panel 23 Page 23/65 Duration 01:00 Dialog Rosa: - no one could have possibly traced that saucy letter you left for the cabana boy at the country club to you.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 6 Duration 04:00 Dialog Daphne: I thought we all agreed - Panel 24 Page 24/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 6 Duration 03:00 Panel 25 Dialog Daphne: - that guy was coming on to me and you all know it’s tru- Page 25/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 6 Duration 09:00 Panel 27 Page 27/65 Duration 01:00 Dialog Daphne: Hey, I thought we agreed no getting wet in the house! I’m not buying any more candles to cover up the fishy smell from our tails.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Dialog Beverly: The AC broke again, dearie. Panel 28 Page 28/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 7 Duration 02:00 Panel 29 Page 29/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes: Beverly switches hands holding her drink to pull out a spray water bottle and aim it towards Rosa.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 7 Duration 01:00 Panel 30 Page 30/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Beverly gives Rosa a thorough spray from her water bottle; judging from the puddle around her, she’s been sprayed frequently.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 7 Duration 05:00 Dialog Beverly: Is that why we’re moving out? Panel 32 Page 32/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 8 Duration 06:00 Panel 33 Dialog Daphne: No, I wish. It’s a good thing I caught you ladies all here right- Page 33/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 8 Dialog Daphne: Hold up! Duration 05:00 Panel 34 Page 34/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 9 Duration 04:00 Dialog Daphne: Where’s Yi-seo this time? Panel 35 Page 35/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 36 Page 36/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Cut to a shot of Yi-seo. She’s far from the antics of the shack, reading a book down by the beach.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 10 Duration 02:00 Panel 37 Action Notes Yi-seo’s pet seagull, Carl, is seen peeking his head out from the hammock. Page 37/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 10 Action Notes Cont. squash and stretch. Duration 01:00 Panel 39 Page 39/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 10 Duration 01:00 Panel 41 Page 41/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Cont. squash and stretch. At this point Yi-seo has looked up, surprised; who’s moving around so much?

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 10 Duration 02:00 Panel 43 Action Notes Yi-seo smiles; it’s merely her pet bird making all the ruckus. Page 43/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 10 Duration 02:00 Panel 44 Action Notes Rummaging around in her hammock, as if looking for something. Page 44/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 10 Duration 01:00 Panel 45 Action Notes Yi-seo presents a hot dog, which Carl has locked eyes with. Page 45/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 46 Page 46/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Returns to her reading while Carl swallows the hot dog whole (think a bird forcing a large fish down their throat).

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Cut to a VLS of Yi-seo on the beaach. Panel 47 Page 47/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 02:00 Panel 48 Page 48/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Enter into the frame Jai, the local ice cream man pushing his cart on the beach.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 03:00 Panel 51 Action Notes Jai stops in his tracks to admire Yi-seo with a bashful grin. Page 51/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 02:00 Panel 54 Action Notes He begins to rummage around the ice cream stand without breaking eye contact. Page 54/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 04:00 Panel 55 Page 55/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes He ultimately pulls out an ice cream that’s a perfect match to Yi-seo to admire; clearly, Jai has an all-consuming crush on her.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 01:00 Panel 56 Action Notes Yi-seo finally looks up to notice Jai’s presence on the beach. Page 56/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 03:00 Panel 57 Page 57/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes She attempts to wave Jai down for a greeting, oblivious to his emotional state or her freakish ice cream doppelgänger.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 02:00 Panel 58 Page 58/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Jai’s been caught in the act! He notices Yi-seo’s attention has turned to him.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 01:00 Panel 59 Action Notes Jai moves to remove the incriminating evidence as soon as possible! Page 59/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 11 Duration 02:00 Panel 62 Page 62/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes The pair has their attention drawn to a shriek coming from further down the beach, while Yi-seo’s pet seagull looks on in contempt.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 12 Duration 04:00 Panel 63 Page 63/65 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Cut to a pair of woman further down the beach, one disgusted by the random act of ice cream violence while the other chuckles away.

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 13 Duration 06:00 Panel 64 Action Notes Cut to the shack again. All four women are paused, deep in thought. Page 64/65 Duration 01:00

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The Old Beach Biddies S1 EP1: Just Add Water Scene 13 Duration 06:00 Dialog All in unison: Leading on the ice cream man. Panel 65 Page 65/65 Duration 01:00