Cafe Scene - Speaker Deck

Cafe Scene

by Aether

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Scene 1 Panel 1 Action Notes EXT. CAFE - DAY Carmilla sits at a cafe, waiting for Laura to show up to their date.

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Scene 2 Panel 1 Dialog CARMILLA Is everything alright?

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Scene 2 Panel 2 Dialog CARMILLA Is everything alright?

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Scene 2 Panel 3 Dialog CARMILLA Is everything alright?

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Scene 2 Panel 4 Dialog CARMILLA Is everything alright?

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Scene 2 Panel 5 Dialog CARMILLA Is everything alright?

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Scene 2 Panel 6 Dialog CARMILLA What did your Dad want to talk to you about?

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Scene 2 Panel 8 Dialog LAURA Hey Milly!

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Scene 2 Panel 9 Dialog CARMILLA (OS) Hey...

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Scene 2 Panel 10 Dialog CARMILLA What did your Dad want to talk to you about?

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Scene 2 Panel 11 Dialog LAURA Oh... you know...

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Scene 2 Panel 12 Dialog It wasn't anything major.

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Scene 3 Panel 2 Dialog CARMILLA Wasn't anything major?

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Scene 3 Panel 3 Dialog We could hear the screaming all the way down the quad, Laura.

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Scene 4 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA There was... it was just a misunderstanding.

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Scene 4 Panel 3 Dialog All that's been cleared up now.

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Scene 4 Panel 4 Dialog Dad was just upset that I haven't been studying as hard.

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Scene 4 Panel 5 Dialog I can get my grades up.

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Scene 5 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA It'll... it'll be fine.

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Scene 5 Panel 3 Dialog CARMILLA Laura...

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Scene 5 Panel 4 Dialog Let's break up.

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Scene 6 Panel 3 Dialog CARMILLA (O.S) It's for the best.

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Scene 6 Panel 9 Dialog LAURA It's not like you to joke like that...

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Scene 6 Panel 10 Dialog CARMILLA (raising her voice) If you're with me,

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Scene 6 Panel 11 Dialog LAURA Mill-

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Scene 6 Panel 12 Dialog CARMILLA you can't get to where you need to be.

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Scene 6 Panel 13 Dialog LAURA Milly!

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Scene 6 Panel 15 Action Notes Laura notices the scene she's making.

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Scene 6 Panel 16 Dialog (OS) Shh, don't look, honey.

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Scene 7 Panel 1 Dialog Laura, I got here on an athletic scholarship.

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Scene 7 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA That doesn't mean-

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Scene 7 Panel 3 Dialog CARMILLA I'm never going to have the grades to be successful.

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Scene 7 Panel 4 Dialog I... I got on academic probation.

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Scene 8 Panel 1 Action Notes Laura leans over to Carmilla.

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Scene 9 Panel 2 Dialog CARMILLA They're taking my scholarship away.

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Scene 9 Panel 3 Dialog I'm leaving in the fall, they said.

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Scene 9 Panel 6 Dialog CARMILLA Do you see? There was never any future with me.

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Scene 9 Panel 7 Dialog LAURA No.... Action Notes Reaction to Carmilla losing her scholarship

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Scene 9 Panel 8 Dialog LAURA No! Action Notes Reaction to Carmilla's Line

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Scene 9 Panel 9 Dialog LAURA No! Action Notes Reaction to breakup

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Scene 9 Panel 10 Dialog CARMILLA Laura,-

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Scene 9 Panel 11 Dialog LAURA If... You can't get by without me!

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Scene 9 Panel 12 Dialog LAURA If... You can't get by without me!

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Scene 9 Panel 13 Dialog LAURA Who will wake you up in the morning?

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Scene 10 Panel 1 Dialog Who will make you dinner?

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Scene 10 Panel 2 Dialog And your studies...

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Scene 10 Panel 4 Dialog you need me to help you study! And... and...

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Scene 10 Panel 5 Dialog LAURA And...

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Scene 10 Panel 6 Dialog CARMILLA I'll be fine.

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Scene 11 Panel 1 Dialog I had a life before you.

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Scene 11 Panel 2 Dialog It's too late for my grades - I'd never be able to catch up in time.

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Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA But I love you!

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Scene 13 Panel 1 Dialog CARMILLA The feeling I had wasn't love.

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Scene 13 Panel 2 Dialog CARMILLA We - I - just wanted to escape.

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Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA It wasn't-

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Scene 15 Panel 1 Dialog CARMILLA You'll forget about me sooner or later like everyone else, Laura.

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Scene 16 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA That's not true! Milly, how can you say that?!

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Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog CARMILLA Laura... think of your father. Your family. You have so much hope surrounding you and I see the same fire in you that your father does. You have so much to offer... Answer their hopes, Laura.

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Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog CARMILLA Laura... think of your father. Your family. You have so much hope surrounding you and I see the same fire in you that your father does. You have so much to offer... Answer their hopes, Laura.

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Scene 17 Panel 3 Dialog CARMILLA Laura... think of your father. Your family. You have so much hope surrounding you and I see the same fire in you that your father does. You have so much to offer... Answer their hopes, Laura.

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Scene 17 Panel 4 Dialog CARMILLA You can do that.

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Scene 17 Panel 5 Dialog CARMILLA And maybe...maybe in a few years

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Scene 17 Panel 6 Dialog CARMILLA I can look back and think that I dated an amazing woman.

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Scene 18 Panel 1 Dialog CARMILLA You'll forget about me sooner or later like everyone else.

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Scene 18 Panel 2 Dialog CARMILLA You'll forget about me sooner or later like everyone else.

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Scene 18 Panel 3 Dialog CARMILLA Please, Laura.

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Scene 18 Panel 4 Dialog LAURA (OS) I..

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Scene 18 Panel 5 Dialog LAURA (OS) Understand.

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Scene 18 Panel 6 Action Notes Laura gets up.

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Scene 19 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA Thanks...

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Scene 19 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA Thanks for

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Scene 19 Panel 3 Dialog LAURA putting up with me.

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Scene 22 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA Take care of yourself.

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