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### Motivation
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Interestingly, while hardware upgrades are recognized as a strategy for
improving performance and energy efficiency in large-scale systems,
the effects of these upgrades on supercomputers, especially concerning
their carbon footprint, remain under-explored in existing literature. This
gap in knowledge motivates our exploration in this work.
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In the Motivation section, I would like to add another point mentioning
that `
the effect of hardware upgrades on supercomputer systems are
not well known from existing literature, that's why we look into in this
work`
. How should I mention this point?
For the Discussion section, I would like to first discuss the limitation
(only considered compute node carbon footprint). Then, say that
'nevertheless, more study in the relationship between hardware
upgrades and carbon footprint might possibly help us develop a more
flexible hardware upgrade policy such that the system can better adapt
to changing performance requirements'.
### Discussion
Limitation:
A prominent limitation of this study is its focus solely on the carbon
footprint of the compute nodes. ( 略 )
Potential:
Nevertheless, understanding the intricate relationship between hardware
upgrades and carbon footprint, as presented in our research, offers a
promising avenue. As we continue to delve deeper into this relationship,
there's a potential to develop a more flexible hardware upgrade policy.
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