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Greg Humming
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20. EXT./ESTAB. CHIRPWOOD ELEMENTARY - DAY. INT. CLASSROOM - SAME. Gregg erases a chalkboard alone in the classroom, humming to himself. Ray enters.
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359 RAY
(TRYING TO BE FRIENDLY) Hey, Gregg.
359A GREGG
Hi Ray!
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259B RAY
You know, Addy would really like it if you and I were friends--b
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Ray walks right as CAM is fixed to him, BG pans left
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360 GREGG
Oh! Well--
361 RAY
And as a token of my esteem, I brought you this baseball signed by Pete Rose that says "I'm sorry for betting on baseball."
362 GREGG
Wow! Thanks, Ray!
363 RAY
Uh-huh.
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364 GREGG
Well I'm glad things are going so well. ---
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364 GREGG
---You're a very lucky raccoon.
365 RAY
Lucky? What uhh-- what's that supposed to mean?
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366 GREGG
Nothing! It's just---
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366 GREGG
--- I mean, Addy's amazing.
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367 RAY
And what, Gregg? I'm not?
367A GREGG
What?
367B RAY
Is that what you're saying, Gregg? That she's too good for me?
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368 GREGG
No--
369 RAY
Ohhh I knew it! ---
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369 RAY
---You think cuz you both got your long necks and your good voices---
369A GREGG
(NERVOUS LAUGH)
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369 RAY
---and your pecker goes corkscrew like this---
369A GREGG
What?!
369 RAY
--- and her wawa goes corkscrew like that, ---
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369A GREGG
What are you--
369 RAY
---you'd be a perfect match!
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370 GREGG
Hey, buddy... ---
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370 GREGG
--- are you having sexual problems?
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371 RAY
I'LL FUCKING---
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371 RAY
---KILL YOU!
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372 GREGG
(CHOKING) Agggghhlll!
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Ray lunges at Gregg and starts strangling him.
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372 GREGG
(CHOKING) Agggghhlll!
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Ray lunges at Gregg and starts strangling him.
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372 GREGG
(CHOKING) Agggghhlll!
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Ray lunges at Gregg and starts strangling him.
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373 RAY
YEAH! YOU'RE NOT SINGING SO PRETTY NOW, ARE YOU?!
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373 RAY
YEAH! YOU'RE NOT SINGING SO PRETTY NOW, ARE YOU?!
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374 GREGG
(CHOKING) Please! Stop!
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375 RAY
YOU STOP BEING FRIENDS WITH MY WIFE!
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375 RAY
YOU STOP BEING FRIENDS WITH MY WIFE!
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376 ADDY (O.S.)
Ray! Ray!
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REVEAL Addy, with a few of her students at the doorway.
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376A ADDY
Oh my god, ---
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REVEAL Addy, with a few of her students at the doorway.
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376A ADDY
--- Let go of him!
376B RAY
Ohp!
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REVEAL Addy, with a few of her students at the doorway.
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376A ADDY
---what're you doing?! ---
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376A ADDY
---Let go of him!
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376B RAY
Ohp!
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380 RAY
Okay look, I understand what you saw may have been upsetting to you, but--
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EXT. SCHOOL - DAY
Ray and Addy stand alone outside the school.
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381 ADDY
Ray! Even my kids know that we don't put our paws on each other.
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382 RAY
Last time I try to kill Gregg. I promise. ---
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382 RAY
---(ADDY SIGHS) So what do you wanna do for dinner tonight?
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383 ADDY
Ray. I'm not having dinner with you.
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384 RAY
(WORRIED) So what? We just gonna-- y'know, fly around the forest, sing some love songs? (CHUCKLES)
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385 ADDY
No! We're done!
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385A RAY
What?
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285B ADDY
I can't be with someone who attacks my friends. That's like rabid behavior.
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386 RAY
Okayyy therrrre it is.
386A ADDY
What?
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I knew sooner or later you'd decide you were too good for me--
386C ADDY
Ray.
386D RAY
--and then you'd dump me like the piece of garbage that I am.
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387 ADDY
I feel sorry for you.
388 RAY
Why? Cuz I have hepatitis A, B, and seven?
389 ADDY
No--
389A RAY
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Is that why?!
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389B ADDY
Because clearly you don't believe that you deserve love.
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390 RAY
Alright, don't psychoanalyze me, sweetheart. (ADDY SIGHS) I'm beyond diagnosis.
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391 ADDY
Goodbye, Ray.
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391 ADDY
Goodbye, Ray.
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Addy flies away.
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Addy flies away. Ray watches her go
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393 ETHAN
I guess your worlds were just too diffewent...
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394 ETHAN
(SINGS) WHY CAN'T GWOWN-UPS MAKE IT WORK--
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395 RAY
No no no! Not a chance we're doing an Ethan song!