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READ THIS SENTENCE:
“DURING A NIGHTLY NEWS SEGMENT
ABOUT A COOKING CONTEST, A
REPORTER TALKED TO SOME PEOPLE
WHO DID THE BEST IN THE CONTEST.”
WHICH REVISION USES THE MOST
PRECISE LANGUAGE FOR THE WORDS
“TALKED TO SOME PEOPLE WHO DID
THE BEST IN THE CONTEST”?