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TONY:
I think it was this way.
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INT. OLD WATER PLANT HALLWAY
Tony and Jimbo walk back down the hallway of the old water plant
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JIMBO:
I still think this is a bad idea. What're the chances he's still here?
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Tony pauses
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TONY:
I mean I can't leave him right?
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Tony looks at Jimbo, concerned
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Jimbo turns to Tony and they stop walking
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TONY (CONT.):
He's mean but, I need him to figure out what's wrong with me.
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Tony speaks softly
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DAD O/S:
*screams*
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Tony and Jimbo are startled by the scream.
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TONY:
Apa!
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Tony sprints towards the screams
Jimbo floats cautiously after him
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JIMBO:
That sounds like something-
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Tony out
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JIMBO (CONT.):
We definitely shouldn't get involved in.
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Jimbo out
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JIMBO (CONT. O/S):
Be careful, we don't know what's out there!
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INT. OLD WATER PLANT WATER PURIFICATION ATRIUM
PAN LEFT
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TONY:
How bad can it be?
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Tony leans into the room
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JIMBO:
You heard the screaming didn't you?
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Jimbo leans into room
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TONY:
WHAT IS THAT?
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Tony and Jimbo scream
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JIMBO:
THAT'S TROUBLE!
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Tony and Jimbo gawk.
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JIMBO:
AND I TOLD YOU SO!
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DAD:
MIJO! You found me!
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DAD (CONT.):
This thing it must be behind everthi-
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Water tendril expands
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DAD (CONT.):
AGH!
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Water tendril squeezes Dad
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Zoom out to reveal WATER DRAGON
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TONY:
Dad don't worry we'll save you!
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TONY (CONT.):
Jimbo I'm sorry but we have to do the thing.
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JIMBO:
I understand kid. Let's do it.
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Jimbo nods
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TONY AND JIMBO:
The dead-
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TONY AND JIMBO (CONT.):
Convene with the living!
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Light spreads across bodies.
FX LIGHT PARTICLES
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Light spreads across bodies.
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TONY AND JIMBO (CONT.):
Two-
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Light spreads across bodies.
FX LIGHT PARTICLES
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TONY AND JIMBO (CONT.):
Spirits-
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Both slide to center frame
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TONY AND JIMBO (CONT.):
Become-
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TONY AND JIMBO (CONT.):
One!
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TONY AND JIMBO (CONT.):
Spectral Armour!
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FX LIGHT PARTICLES IN SLOW MO
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TONY AND JIMBO (CONT.):
Soul of the Sailor!
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FX LIGHT PARTICLES IN SLOW MO
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TONY:
Lets-
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TONY (CONT.):
Flush this snake.
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Tony spins anchor chain
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WATER DRAGON:
Aaaaaah! The prodigal son-
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Water Dragon looms down closer
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WATER DRAGON (CONT.):
-Retuuuuuurns.
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Water Dragon looms down closer
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TONY:
Wait? You can talk?
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JIMBO:
You can talk?
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The anchor symbol glows as Jimbo talks
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DAD:
It can talk?
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DAD (CONT.):
Fascinating.
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WATER DRAGON:
Of course I can talk you fools! What did you expect!?
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Cycle A and B as Water Dragon yells
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Cycle A and B as Water Dragon yells
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Tony stops spinning chain anchor and it falls to the ground flatly
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TONY:
I don't think it's unfair to assume-
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Tony shrugs
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TONY (CONT.):
That a giant water monster would make like a-
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TONY (CONT.):
Like a gurgley hiss or something?
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