Slide 22
Slide 22 text
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The mouth of the storm lunged toward them, and Liet closed the
cover plate, hoping the ancient meteorological apparatus would
hold together. He trusted his father's intuition to a certain extent,
but not his practicality.
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The mouth of the storm lunged toward them, and Liet closed the cover plate, hoping the ancient
meteorological apparatus would hold together. He trusted his father's intuition to a certain
extent, but not his practicality.
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The mouth of the storm lunged toward them,
and Liet closed the cover plate, hoping the
ancient meteorological apparatus would hold
together. He trusted his father's intuition to
a certain extent, but not his practicality.