Space Chickens in Space - Phil My Heart - storyboard sample

Symbiont couple Barnetta and Phil split up. Barnetta joins Glargg which causes trouble,
so the chickens decide to help get Phil and Barnetta back together.

excerpt of the rough storyboard for the make-over montage and dinner date disaster

Transcript

2. Scene SH168 Panel 1 Action Notes MAKEOVER MONTAGE:
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7. Scene SH168 Panel 6 Action Notes --Starley goes at Phil?s face with a makeup/contour brush.
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13. Scene SH170 Panel 2 Action Notes exchanging skeptical looks
14. Scene SH171 Panel 1 Action Notes Gym class room: workout session. Phil runs on a treadmill. Chuck has projected a photo of Phil and B from happier days. they cheer him on. Finley controls the speed on his tablet
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22. Scene SH172 Panel 1 Action Notes Finley ups the speed
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30. Scene SH173 Panel 7 Action Notes Phil tops like he?s crossed the finish line and is flung across the room like a rag doll.
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35. Scene SH174 Panel 3 Action Notes he lands and sticks on the screen in the shape of his picture
36. Scene SH174 Panel 4 Action Notes slides down OS
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38. Scene SH175 Panel 1 Action Notes push up training
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49. Scene SH176 Panel 1 Action Notes weights training. Chuck and Finley hang either side
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57. Scene SH177 Panel 1 Action Notes Phil flexes his body in front of a mirror. He?s actually seriously ripped after all this.
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60. Scene SH177 Panel 4 Action Notes S offers Phil a towel,
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62. Scene SH177 Panel 6 Action Notes he mops the weird make up off his face.
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64. Scene SH177 Panel 8 Action Notes Phil continues posing for the others
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75. Scene SH179 Panel 1 Action Notes LO_EXT_IA_DORMPOD_BARNETTAPHIL_11 D_001 - LATER
76. Scene SH179 Panel 2 Action Notes Barnetta (now with a few really clumpy dreadlocks) arrives at the their dormpod.
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78. Scene SH179 Panel 4 Dialog BARNETTA 78 Hello? Anyone here?
79. Scene SH179 Panel 5 Dialog STARLEY 79 ?The mop is in the kitchen? over. 79 Ready for what we rehearsed Phil? Action Notes the chickens are hiding in the foliage * outside the window
80. Scene SH180 Panel 1 Action Notes INSIDE: Phil <GROWLS> in affirmation.
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84. Scene SH181 Panel 2 Action Notes The door mysteriously swishes open. The inside has been totally tidied up and lit with candles.
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88. Scene SH181 Panel 6 Action Notes A row of flower petals lead Barnetta inside to a candle lit table with dinner all laid out on it.
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92. Scene SH181 Panel 10 Action Notes P steps out and reveals himself, looking all buff, to Barnetta. He has some flowers for her
93. Scene SH181 Panel 11 Dialog BARNETTA 80 Phil?
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96. Scene SH182 Panel 3 Action Notes PHIL answers with a <PURR>, offering her bunch of flowers.
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98. Scene SH183 Panel 1 Dialog STARLEY (O.S.) 81 Say the words Phil. Just like we 81 practiced.
99. Scene SH183 Panel 2 Dialog Phil begins to <STUTTER> as he tries to form some actual speech. His voice is deep but heartfelt.
100. Scene SH183 Panel 3 Dialog PHIL Whaaaassssuuuppp?? 82 (Long beat)
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103. Scene SH184 Panel 3 Action Notes Barnetta lights up.
104. Scene SH184 Panel 4 Action Notes she takes the flowers
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108. Scene SH185 Panel 1 Dialog PHIL ....Phil... sorry. ...
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110. Scene SH185 Panel 3 Dialog Phil miss Barnetta. * ...
111. Scene SH186 Panel 1 Dialog Phil... come...
112. Scene SH186 Panel 2 Dialog ...home?
113. Scene SH186 Panel 3 Dialog BARNETTA 83 You had me at ?Waaaaasssssuuupp!?
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124. Scene SH188 Panel 4 Action Notes Phil empties a trashcan onto the table on top of the wonderful meal that was placed there.
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126. Scene SH189 Panel 1 Dialog BARNETTA (CONT?D) (unimpressed) Really?
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134. Scene SH191 Panel 2 Action Notes GLARGG APPEARS AT THE DOOR. He?s wearing a beanie to cover his head and holding Barnetta?s tablet.
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136. Scene SH191 Panel 4 Dialog GLARGG 84 WHAT IS THE MEANING OF ALL THIS?
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139. Scene SH193 Panel 1 Dialog GLARGG 87 Come Barnetta,...
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141. Scene SH193 Panel 3 Dialog we?re leaving!
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143. Scene SH194 Panel 2 Dialog BARNETTA 88 Glargg... It?s complicated.
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145. Scene SH195 Panel 1 Action Notes Phil, enraged by jealousy, goes for Glargg.
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151. Scene SH196 Panel 4 Action Notes Phil leaps at Glaarg
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153. Scene SH196 Panel 6 Action Notes they crash OS.
154. Scene SH197 Panel 1 Dialog STARLEY 85 UH, oh! .... Action Notes Outside the chickens hear the crash
155. Scene SH197 Panel 2 Dialog Plot twist! Every chicken 85 * out now
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160. Scene SH198 Panel 2 Action Notes the chickens peek in the door
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163. Scene SH198 Panel 5 Action Notes Phil and Glargg rolling and tumbling around the floor.
164. Scene SH198 Panel 6 Action Notes Barnetta falls off as they roll past
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195. Scene SH207 Panel 4 Dialog STARLEY 89 We need to stop this. It?s all our 89 fault!
196. Scene SH207 Panel 5 Action Notes Chuck and Finley try to pull Starley away. But Starley charges inside
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203. Scene SH209 Panel 3 Action Notes S grabs them
204. Scene SH210 Panel 1 Action Notes S pulls the lovesick idiots apart before putting them back down
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208. Scene SH210 Panel 5 Action Notes they resume their really inept wrestling again.
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213. Scene SH212 Panel 2 Action Notes Barnetta looks up at Starley.
214. Scene SH212 Panel 3 Dialog BARNETTA 91 May I?
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216. Scene SH213 Panel 2 Dialog STARLEY 92 Okay. Just for a biscuit.
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218. Scene SH214 Panel 2 Action Notes Starley takes Barnetta
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222. Scene SH215 Panel 1 Action Notes Starley puts Barnetta on her head
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224. Scene SH215 Panel 3 Dialog STARLEY (CONT?D) Wooo. This feels weirdalini
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226. Scene SH216 Panel 1 Dialog STARLEY (CONT?D) ... (deep evil voice)Feels so good.
227. Scene SH216 Panel 2 Dialog ...The power, ...
228. Scene SH216 Panel 3 Dialog I can * feel it coarsing through my veins. * ....
229. Scene SH216 Panel 4 Dialog <OTT DRAMATIC EVIL LAUGH> * ...
230. Scene SH216 Panel 5 Dialog (back to normal) Just kidding. I?m fine
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233. Scene SH217 Panel 3 Action Notes starley's legs step into shot
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240. Scene SH218 Panel 2 Action Notes she gestures to raise the boys into the air with B's help
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242. Scene SH219 Panel 2 Action Notes they fly up and float in the air
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247. Scene SH220 Panel 2 Action Notes she makes them spin
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249. Scene SH221 Panel 2 Action Notes they spin
250. Scene SH221 Panel 3 Action Notes and end up tied in knots
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254. Scene SH222 Panel 2 Action Notes now she crushes them with a gesture
255. Scene SH223 Panel 1 Action Notes Starley's hands crushing them further to subdue them
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