Build a Better Demon

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1. Scene 1 Panel 1 Action Notes establishing shot demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 1/21
2. Scene 1 Panel 2 Dialog [DEMON GIRL] "Ow!" Action Notes demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 2/21
3. Scene 3 Panel 1 Dialog [DEMON GIRL] "What the hell?" Action Notes demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 3/21
4. Scene 3 Panel 2 Dialog [ANGEL] "But it doesn't have to be for long!" [DEMON GIRL] "Um, who are YOU?" [ANGEL] "I'm your guardian angel, and the big guys up at heaven HQ gave me the job of offering you redemption!" demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 4/21
5. Scene 6 Panel 1 Dialog [ANGEL] "You were so truly horrible in your life on earth that they know if I can help you be a good person, there's hope for anyone!" Action Notes demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 5/21
6. Scene 6 Panel 2 Dialog [ANGEL] "I just know I can bring out the niceness in you and get you out of this hellhole!" Action Notes demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 6/21
7. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog [ANGEL] "they told me this was a fool's errand but i can already tell deep down you're just a big sweetie!" [DEMON GIRL] "has anyone ever told you you're kinda annoying" demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 7/21
8. Scene 8 Panel 1 Dialog [ANGEL] "Look! Over there, a lonely child! A perfect opportunity for you to try being a good person for the first time ever!" Action Notes demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 8/21
9. Scene 9 Panel 1 Dialog [DEMON GIRL] "You are such a drag" [ANGEL] "Oh, some on, this'll be great! If you need a motivator, I will let you know that hell has approximately zero designer stores, unlike heaven." demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 9/21
10. Scene 10 Panel 1 Dialog [ANGEL] "All you need to do is check on the little child and see if you can do anything for him!" [DEMON GIRL] "I'm not stupid, keep your whiny voice out of my ear." demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 10/21
11. Scene 11 Panel 1 Action Notes shadow appears over demon child demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 11/21
12. Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog [DEMON GIRL] "Hey there little guy, you're looking pretty stupid standing here by yourself. Did you lose your mommy?" Action Notes demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 12/21
13. Scene 13 Panel 1 Dialog [DEMON CHILD] "Wow, your breath really stinks, before worrying about me maybe worry about finding yourself a stick of gum." Action Notes demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 13/21
14. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog [ANGEL] "Now, he's just being a kid, let's not be hasty with how we react to this-" demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 14/21
15. Scene 15 Panel 1 Action Notes demon girl raises her hand, angel is pleading demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 15/21
16. Scene 15 Panel 2 Dialog [DEMON CHILD] "hey! give that back!!" [ANGEL] "Hey now, this is no way to act!!" demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 16/21
17. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog [DEMON CHILD] "hey old hag, you better give me that back NOW!!" demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 17/21
18. Scene 19 Panel 1 Action Notes angel protesting to demon girl, demon girl winds her leg back demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 18/21
19. Scene 19 Panel 2 demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 19/21
20. Scene 20 Panel 1 Action Notes demon girl punts demon child into the stratosphere as angel's protesting falls silent demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 20/21
21. Scene 20 Panel 2 Action Notes angel is defeated with tears in her eyes, a glint in the sky as demon child vanishes, demon girl turns around and walks towards camera, licks lollipop demonheaven caitlynkiehn Page 21/21