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Build a Better Demon

Caitlyn
January 29, 2023

Build a Better Demon

Caitlyn

January 29, 2023
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  1. Scene
    1
    Panel
    1
    Action Notes
    establishing shot
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  2. Scene
    1
    Panel
    2
    Dialog
    [DEMON GIRL] "Ow!"
    Action Notes
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  3. Scene
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    Panel
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    Dialog
    [DEMON GIRL] "What the hell?"
    Action Notes
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  4. Scene
    3
    Panel
    2
    Dialog
    [ANGEL] "But it doesn't have to be for long!"
    [DEMON GIRL] "Um, who are YOU?"
    [ANGEL] "I'm your guardian angel, and the big guys up at heaven HQ gave me the job of offering you redemption!"
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  5. Scene
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    [ANGEL] "You were so truly horrible in your life on earth that they know if I can help you be a good person, there's hope for anyone!"
    Action Notes
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  6. Scene
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    Dialog
    [ANGEL] "I just know I can bring out the niceness in you and get you out of this hellhole!"
    Action Notes
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  7. Scene
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    [ANGEL] "they told me this was a fool's errand but i can already tell deep down you're just a big sweetie!"
    [DEMON GIRL] "has anyone ever told you you're kinda annoying"
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  8. Scene
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    Dialog
    [ANGEL] "Look! Over there, a lonely child! A perfect opportunity for you to try being a good person for the first time ever!"
    Action Notes
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  9. Scene
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    Dialog
    [DEMON GIRL] "You are such a drag"
    [ANGEL] "Oh, some on, this'll be great! If you need a motivator, I will let you know that hell has approximately zero designer stores, unlike
    heaven."
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  10. Scene
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    [ANGEL] "All you need to do is check on the little child and see if you can do anything for him!"
    [DEMON GIRL] "I'm not stupid, keep your whiny voice out of my ear."
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  11. Scene
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    shadow appears over demon child
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  12. Scene
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    Dialog
    [DEMON GIRL] "Hey there little guy, you're looking pretty stupid standing here by yourself. Did you lose your mommy?"
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  13. Scene
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    Dialog
    [DEMON CHILD] "Wow, your breath really stinks, before worrying about me maybe worry about finding yourself a stick of gum."
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  14. Scene
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    [ANGEL] "Now, he's just being a kid, let's not be hasty with how we react to this-"
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  15. Scene
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    demon girl raises her hand, angel is pleading
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  16. Scene
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    Dialog
    [DEMON CHILD] "hey! give that back!!"
    [ANGEL] "Hey now, this is no way to act!!"
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  17. Scene
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    [DEMON CHILD] "hey old hag, you better give me that back NOW!!"
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  18. Scene
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    angel protesting to demon girl, demon girl winds her leg back
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  19. Scene
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  20. Scene
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    demon girl punts demon child into the stratosphere as angel's protesting falls silent
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  21. Scene
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    angel is defeated with tears in her eyes, a glint in the sky as demon child vanishes, demon girl turns around and walks towards camera,
    licks lollipop
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