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Sara's Shockingly Studious Session

Betsy Vera
October 15, 2022

Sara's Shockingly Studious Session

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Betsy Vera

October 15, 2022
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  1. Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Sara, a 15 year old student of magic, is in the study room alone. She looks at the books on the shelf BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 2/92
  2. Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    Hmmm... BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 3/92
  3. Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Her fingers go over the spines of the books, until she spots one and her eyes light up. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 4/92
  4. Scene 3 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA

    (CONT’D): This is it! I can start here. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 5/92
  5. Scene 4 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She becomes lost within its pages, and behind her, the door starts to open slowly. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 11/92
  6. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    Oh hey! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 16/92
  7. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    You're Evelio, right? BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 17/92
  8. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She waves in a friendly manner BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 18/92
  9. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She waves in a friendly manner BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 19/92
  10. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She waves in a friendly manner BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 20/92
  11. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She waves in a friendly manner BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 21/92
  12. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She waves in a friendly manner BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 22/92
  13. Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    Oh... Sara. I guess you got here first. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 24/92
  14. Scene 8 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA(CONT'D):

    Are you here to study too? That exam is really soon, BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 26/92
  15. Scene 8 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA(CONT'D):

    and I am not planning to fail it! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 27/92
  16. Scene 8 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Sara strikes a pose as Evelio approaches. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 28/92
  17. Scene 8 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    I suppose so, yes. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 29/92
  18. Scene 9 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    Awesome! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 30/92
  19. Scene 9 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA

    (CONT'D): I know you’re reeeeally good at spellcasting, BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 31/92
  20. Scene 9 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA

    (CONT'D): so I’m kinda glad you’re here, heh. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 32/92
  21. Scene 9 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    I’ve seen the types of spells you cast during class! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 33/92
  22. Scene 9 Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA

    (CONT'D): The way you’ve mastered spells your class hasn’t even learned yet... BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 34/92
  23. Scene 9 Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA

    (CONT'D): You should be proud! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 35/92
  24. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Evelio doesn’t really react to her comment. Instead, he crosses his arms, and he frowns. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 36/92
  25. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    ...It’s sad, really. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 37/92
  26. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    Huh? What do you mean? BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 38/92
  27. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    Aren’t you older than me? BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 39/92
  28. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): Yet you cannot do the things I can do... Think about it. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 40/92
  29. Scene 11 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Taken aback by the sudden attack on her skill, Sara freezes up. Her eyes widen as the realization starts to hit. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 41/92
  30. Scene 12 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): You’re right in that you should be in this room right now. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 42/92
  31. Scene 12 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): You NEED to study, or else you’re destined to become a failure and flunk the exam! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 43/92
  32. Scene 12 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    He laughs at his own "joke." BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 44/92
  33. Scene 13 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    He’s... he’s right... BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 45/92
  34. Scene 13 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Sara turns away from him and tenses up even more. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 46/92
  35. Scene 13 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She shuts her eyes tightly, clutching her book to her chest. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 47/92
  36. Scene 14 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA

    (VO): At this point, I’ll definitely fall behind everyone else. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 48/92
  37. Scene 14 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA

    (VO): I can’t be a failure. I can’t...! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 49/92
  38. Scene 15 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    I truly wish I could help, BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 50/92
  39. Scene 15 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): but you're beyond my help, BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 51/92
  40. Scene 15 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): to be honest. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 52/92
  41. Scene 15 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Suddenly angered, Sara shoves Evelio’s arm off of her. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 54/92
  42. Scene 16 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    Those are some big words- BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 55/92
  43. Scene 17 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA

    (VO, CONT'D): -for a little guy like you. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 56/92
  44. Scene 17 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Evelio’s face reddens with rage BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 58/92
  45. Scene 18 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    His fists are clenched at his sides. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 59/92
  46. Scene 18 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    His fists are clenched at his sides. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 60/92
  47. Scene 18 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    His fists are clenched at his sides. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 61/92
  48. Scene 19 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Sara backs away a bit, looking a little worried and suddenly regretting her retaliatory comment. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 62/92
  49. Scene 20 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    Would a "small little guy"... BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 63/92
  50. Scene 21 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): ...do THIS?! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 64/92
  51. Scene 21 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Evelio unleashes a powerful wind spell, which forcefully knocks Sara backwards a few feet. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 65/92
  52. Scene 22 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She hits the ground hard. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 66/92
  53. Scene 22 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She hits the ground hard. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 67/92
  54. Scene 22 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    OOF! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 70/92
  55. Scene 23 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Sara recovers from her momentary dazed state, only to see Evelio smiling like crazy as he gets his way at last. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 71/92
  56. Scene 24 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Sara begins to sweat bullets. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 72/92
  57. Scene 25 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    That wasn't very nice of you, you know. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 73/92
  58. Scene 25 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): Any last words before I ruin your reputation? Evelio props himself up, spellbook at the ready. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 74/92
  59. Scene 26 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog SARA:

    I... BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 75/92
  60. Scene 26 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    The sound of the door opening interrupts Sara's last words. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 76/92
  61. Scene 26 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She glances over... BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 77/92
  62. Scene 27 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    The study room door opens once again. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 79/92
  63. Scene 28 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    MADDIE walks in cheerfully. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 80/92
  64. Scene 28 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog MADDIE:

    Hey Sara! Sorry I’m late, I had to- BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 81/92
  65. Scene 28 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Maddie stops mid sentence BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 82/92
  66. Scene 29 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    She stares at Evelio about to destroy her best friend BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 83/92
  67. Scene 30 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    Oh well! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 84/92
  68. Scene 30 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): Get ready for BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 85/92
  69. Scene 30 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): thi- BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 86/92
  70. Scene 30 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO

    (CONT'D): WHOA! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 87/92
  71. Scene 31 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Evelio notices Maddie behind him. He stares in disbelief. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 89/92
  72. Scene 31 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EVELIO:

    Who are YOU? Can’t you see we’re in the middle of something?! BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 90/92
  73. Scene 31 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog MADDIE:

    (sternly) Leave her alone. I mean it. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 91/92
  74. Scene 31 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Evelio wrestles his way out of Maddie’s grasp. BetsyVera ART 443 SP22RF Page 92/92