Upgrade to Pro — share decks privately, control downloads, hide ads and more …

Adder's Meal

Crystal Renz
September 13, 2021

Adder's Meal

A short comedic scene featuring a god and his assassin, depicting a casual day together after the assassin supposedly "turned over a new leaf". Script and story by Grace Holladay.

Crystal Renz

September 13, 2021
Tweet

Transcript

  1. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 1/60
  2. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 2/60
  3. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 3/60
  4. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 4/60
  5. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 5/60
  6. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 6/60
  7. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 7/60
  8. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 8/60
  9. Scene 2 Duration 05:07 Panel 1 Duration 00:15 Adders Meal

    Page 9/60
  10. Scene 2 Duration 05:07 Panel 2 Duration 00:11 Action Notes

    Quintus's hand fidgets with his pen, flipping it up and down. Adders Meal Page 10/60
  11. Scene 2 Duration 05:07 Panel 3 Duration 00:12 Adders Meal

    Page 11/60
  12. Scene 2 Duration 05:07 Panel 4 Duration 00:12 Adders Meal

    Page 12/60
  13. Scene 2 Duration 05:07 Panel 5 Duration 00:22 Adders Meal

    Page 13/60
  14. Scene 2 Duration 05:07 Panel 6 Duration 00:15 Adders Meal

    Page 14/60
  15. Scene 2 Duration 05:07 Panel 7 Duration 00:16 Adders Meal

    Page 15/60
  16. Scene 2 Duration 05:07 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 16/60
  17. Scene 3 Duration 04:18 Panel 1 Duration 01:06 Dialog Quintus:

    "A-" Action Notes Quintus starts to say something but stops. Adders Meal Page 17/60
  18. Scene 3 Duration 04:18 Panel 2 Duration 00:20 Adders Meal

    Page 18/60
  19. Scene 3 Duration 04:18 Panel 3 Duration 00:15 Dialog Quintus:

    "Hmm..." Adders Meal Page 19/60
  20. Scene 3 Duration 04:18 Panel 4 Duration 00:13 Adders Meal

    Page 20/60
  21. Scene 3 Duration 04:18 Panel 5 Duration 00:12 Adders Meal

    Page 21/60
  22. Scene 3 Duration 04:18 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "What's this?" Adders Meal Page 22/60
  23. Scene 4 Duration 03:09 Panel 1 Duration 01:07 Dialog Adder:

    "It's a traditional Convexi meal." Adders Meal Page 23/60
  24. Scene 4 Duration 03:09 Panel 2 Duration 00:21 Dialog Adder:

    "Think of it as a peace offering." Adders Meal Page 24/60
  25. Scene 4 Duration 03:09 Panel 3 Duration 01:05 Adders Meal

    Page 25/60
  26. Scene 5 Duration 05:17 Panel 1 Duration 00:14 Adders Meal

    Page 26/60
  27. Scene 5 Duration 05:17 Panel 2 Duration 00:16 Adders Meal

    Page 27/60
  28. Scene 5 Duration 05:17 Panel 3 Duration 00:23 Adders Meal

    Page 28/60
  29. Scene 5 Duration 05:17 Panel 4 Duration 01:05 Adders Meal

    Page 29/60
  30. Scene 5 Duration 05:17 Panel 5 Duration 00:20 Adders Meal

    Page 30/60
  31. Scene 5 Duration 05:17 Panel 6 Duration 01:11 Adders Meal

    Page 31/60
  32. Scene 6 Duration 08:17 Panel 1 Duration 01:11 Adders Meal

    Page 32/60
  33. Scene 6 Duration 08:17 Panel 2 Duration 00:17 Adders Meal

    Page 33/60
  34. Scene 6 Duration 08:17 Panel 3 Duration 01:06 Adders Meal

    Page 34/60
  35. Scene 6 Duration 08:17 Panel 4 Duration 01:06 Adders Meal

    Page 35/60
  36. Scene 6 Duration 08:17 Panel 5 Duration 00:21 Adders Meal

    Page 36/60
  37. Scene 6 Duration 08:17 Panel 6 Duration 00:13 Action Notes

    Quintus prods the meal with his pen while Adder grabs the cloth on his shoulder. Adders Meal Page 37/60
  38. Scene 6 Duration 08:17 Panel 7 Duration 00:21 Action Notes

    Quintus inhales deeply. Adders Meal Page 38/60
  39. Scene 6 Duration 08:17 Panel 8 Duration 01:18 Dialog Quintus:

    "You're kidding me, right?" Action Notes Quintus crosses his legs. Adders Meal Page 39/60
  40. Scene 7 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Adder

    wipes his hands. Adders Meal Page 40/60
  41. Scene 7 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Adder

    wipes his hands. Adders Meal Page 41/60
  42. Scene 7 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 42/60
  43. Scene 7 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Adder:

    "No...?" Adders Meal Page 43/60
  44. Scene 7 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 44/60
  45. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 45/60
  46. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Quintus inhales. Adders Meal Page 46/60
  47. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "Adder." Adders Meal Page 47/60
  48. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "You have tried to kill me twice already today." Adders Meal Page 48/60
  49. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "...that I know of." Adders Meal Page 49/60
  50. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "I'm not eating this." Adders Meal Page 50/60
  51. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 51/60
  52. Scene 9 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Adder:"But,"

    Adders Meal Page 52/60
  53. Scene 9 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Adder:

    "I made it for you..." Adders Meal Page 53/60
  54. Scene 9 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 54/60
  55. Scene 9 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Adders Meal

    Page 55/60
  56. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "Yes, I'm sure you did." Adders Meal Page 56/60
  57. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "I'm sure you made it special," Adders Meal Page 57/60
  58. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "with an extra little kick" Adders Meal Page 58/60
  59. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "with an extra little kick" Adders Meal Page 59/60
  60. Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog Quintus:

    "just for me." Adders Meal Page 60/60