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Chase Scene first draft

Crystal Renz
October 21, 2023
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Chase Scene first draft

Early draft of Chase Scene from Proxy

Crystal Renz

October 21, 2023
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  1. Scene 26 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    Can I help you? CARCHASE2 Page 43/92
  2. Scene 27 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog M:

    Yeah could you speed up a bit? Action Notes M brushes hair out of her face CARCHASE2 Page 46/92
  3. Scene 28 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    yeah very funny. Look this isn't a- CARCHASE2 Page 47/92
  4. Scene 28 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    yeah very funny. Look this isn't a- CARCHASE2 Page 48/92
  5. Scene 26_B Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    Bonsoir... can I help you? CARCHASE2 Page 50/92
  6. Scene 26_B Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    Bonsoir... can I help you? CARCHASE2 Page 51/92
  7. Scene 26_C Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    D what's on the roof? What's going on? CARCHASE2 Page 52/92
  8. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    Who or what is on our roof right now? CARCHASE2 Page 55/92
  9. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    It's nothing. CARCHASE2 Page 56/92
  10. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    just une bĂȘte. CARCHASE2 Page 58/92
  11. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    just une bĂȘte. CARCHASE2 Page 59/92
  12. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog C:

    Caution. You are currently attempting to bypass the set speed limit. Doing so may put yourself and other drivers in danger. CARCHASE2 Page 60/92
  13. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog C:

    Caution. You are currently attempting to bypass the set speed limit. Doing so may put yourself and other drivers in danger. CARCHASE2 Page 61/92
  14. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog C:

    Caution. You are currently attempting to bypass the set speed limit. Doing so may put yourself and other drivers in danger. CARCHASE2 Page 62/92
  15. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog C:

    Caution. You are currently attempting to bypass the set speed limit. Doing so may put yourself and other drivers in danger. CARCHASE2 Page 63/92
  16. Scene 8 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog C:

    Caution. You are currently attempting to bypass the set speed limit. Doing so may put yourself and other drivers in danger. CARCHASE2 Page 64/92
  17. Scene 8 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog C:

    Caution. You are currently attempting to bypass the set speed limit. Doing so may put yourself and other drivers in danger. CARCHASE2 Page 65/92
  18. Scene 9 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog C:

    Auto Pilot Off CARCHASE2 Page 69/92
  19. Scene 11 Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog M:

    Hey watch it! Are you trying to kill me?? CARCHASE2 Page 78/92
  20. Scene 11 Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    Actually I'm trying to get out of here without damaging my car. CARCHASE2 Page 79/92
  21. Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog M:

    I can take care of this just give me your stun gun. CARCHASE2 Page 80/92
  22. Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog M:

    I can take care of this just give me your stun gun. CARCHASE2 Page 81/92
  23. Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog M:

    I can take care of this just give me your stun gun. CARCHASE2 Page 82/92
  24. Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    Even if I had one I'd give it to my dog before I'd let you near it. CARCHASE2 Page 83/92
  25. Scene 2 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog M:

    I would have to land on the hood of two unarmed, unfashionable, weirdos CARCHASE2 Page 84/92
  26. Scene 2 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Notes D

    rolls up the window CARCHASE2 Page 85/92
  27. Scene 3 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Notes M

    stabs roof with knife. CARCHASE2 Page 90/92
  28. Scene 5 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog D:

    What did I just say about the car?? CARCHASE2 Page 92/92