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Zoo episode rework

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May 07, 2025
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Zoo episode rework

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Sasha Aldrete

May 07, 2025
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  1. Scene 1 Duration 31:18 Panel 1 / 20 Duration 00:22

    VI’NNIX:(Whining) I'm not complaining Panel 1 VI’NNIX:(Whining) I'm not complaining PB MinE Zoo Page 1/133
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    VI’NNIX:(Whining) I'm not complaining Panel 2 VI’NNIX:(Whining) I'm not complaining PB MinE Zoo Page 2/133
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    VI’NNIX: but you did say we were gonna report on Panel 3 VI’NNIX: but you did say we were gonna report on wild animals PB MinE Zoo Page 3/133
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    VI’NNIX: so why are we here? we're in the middl Panel 4 VI’NNIX: so why are we here? we're in the middle of a city PB MinE Zoo Page 4/133
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    KEROS: You’re way too reckless to be in the wi Panel 5 KEROS: You’re way too reckless to be in the wild. PB MinE Zoo Page 5/133
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    KEROS :That's why I brought us to a controll Panel 6 KEROS :That's why I brought us to a controlled environment! PB MinE Zoo Page 6/133
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    KEROS :That's why I brought us to a controll Panel 7 KEROS :That's why I brought us to a controlled environment! PB MinE Zoo Page 7/133
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    KEROS :That's why I brought us to a controll Panel 8 KEROS :That's why I brought us to a controlled environment! PB MinE Zoo Page 8/133
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    KEROS: We’ll be able to observe the fauna of thi Panel 9 KEROS: We’ll be able to observe the fauna of this planet PB MinE Zoo Page 9/133
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    Keros:and determine which of these creatures Panel 10 Keros:and determine which of these creatures we need to look out for PB MinE Zoo Page 10/133
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    Keros: for when the invasion happens Panel 11 Keros: for when the invasion happens PB MinE Zoo Page 11/133
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    VI’NNIX: IF it happens Panel 12 VI’NNIX: IF it happens PB MinE Zoo Page 12/133
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    VI’NNIX: Right Keros? Panel 13 VI’NNIX: Right Keros? PB MinE Zoo Page 13/133
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    KEROS Anyways, let's get start Panel 15 KEROS Anyways, let's get started, shall we? PB MinE Zoo Page 15/133
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    KEROS: breathes heavily Panel 1 KEROS: breathes heavily PB MinE Zoo Page 83/133
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    KEROS: breathes heavily Panel 2 KEROS: breathes heavily PB MinE Zoo Page 84/133
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    KEROS: breathes heavily Panel 3 KEROS: breathes heavily PB MinE Zoo Page 85/133
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    VI'NNIX: So.. that was fun Panel 4 VI'NNIX: So.. that was fun PB MinE Zoo Page 86/133
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    KEROS: Fun? Panel 5 KEROS: Fun? PB MinE Zoo Page 87/133
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    KEROS: Vi'nnix are you insane? Panel 6 KEROS: Vi'nnix are you insane? PB MinE Zoo Page 88/133
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    KEROS: I think we would have had better luck in Panel 7 KEROS: I think we would have had better luck in the wild PB MinE Zoo Page 89/133
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    KEROS: How are humans not terrified of having Panel 8 KEROS: How are humans not terrified of having all these beast in that same place PB MinE Zoo Page 90/133
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    KEROS: How did they manage to tame them? Panel 9 KEROS: How did they manage to tame them? PB MinE Zoo Page 91/133
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    VI'NNIX: maybe humans are secretly Panel 10 VI'NNIX: maybe humans are secretly PB MinE Zoo Page 92/133
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    VI'NNIX: super strong Panel 11 VI'NNIX: super strong PB MinE Zoo Page 93/133
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    TUCAN: Squack! Panel 16 TUCAN: Squack! PB MinE Zoo Page 98/133
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    VI'NNIX:Uhm excuse me fellow human Panel 23 VI'NNIX:Uhm excuse me fellow human PB MinE Zoo Page 105/133
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    VI'NNIX: how is it that you tamed that dangerous Panel 24 VI'NNIX: how is it that you tamed that dangerous beast? PB MinE Zoo Page 106/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: oh, hi, Panel 25 ZOOKEEPER: oh, hi, PB MinE Zoo Page 107/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: I didn't tame this toucan dear, Panel 26 ZOOKEEPER: I didn't tame this toucan dear, PB MinE Zoo Page 108/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: and she's no dangerous beast either Panel 27 ZOOKEEPER: and she's no dangerous beast either PB MinE Zoo Page 109/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: She wont do anything to you Panel 29 ZOOKEEPER: She wont do anything to you PB MinE Zoo Page 111/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: I promise Panel 30 ZOOKEEPER: I promise PB MinE Zoo Page 112/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: You have to learn to deal with each Panel 32 ZOOKEEPER: You have to learn to deal with each animal here, PB MinE Zoo Page 114/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: you have to study a lot to learn how Panel 33 ZOOKEEPER: you have to study a lot to learn how to treat them correctly PB MinE Zoo Page 115/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: and not get seriosly injured Panel 34 ZOOKEEPER: and not get seriosly injured PB MinE Zoo Page 116/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: You wanna try feeding her? Panel 35 ZOOKEEPER: You wanna try feeding her? PB MinE Zoo Page 117/133
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    KEROS: Hmm Panel 41 KEROS: Hmm PB MinE Zoo Page 123/133
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    KEROS: so… you don’t have to tame them, Panel 42 KEROS: so… you don’t have to tame them, PB MinE Zoo Page 124/133
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    KEROS: just learn how to ‘get along’ with them Panel 43 KEROS: just learn how to ‘get along’ with them? PB MinE Zoo Page 125/133
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    ZOOKEEPER: yeah! Pretty much! Are you interested Panel 44 ZOOKEEPER: yeah! Pretty much! Are you interested in becoming a zookeeper? PB MinE Zoo Page 126/133
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    KEROS: Something like that (chuckles) Panel 45 KEROS: Something like that (chuckles) PB MinE Zoo Page 127/133
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    TUCAN: Skuak! KEROS: (screams) Panel 46 TUCAN: Skuak! KEROS: (screams) Dissolve PB MinE Zoo Page 128/133
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