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The Writing Room Boards

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December 08, 2023
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The Writing Room Boards

Copyright AJ Phillip 2020
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December 08, 2023

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Transcript

  1. Writing Room

  2. Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 1

    Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 1/66

  3. Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog SFX:

    Door creaking Scene 2 Duration 04:03 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: Sitting in the dark AGAIN, I see Action Notes Shelly crosses out another word on her paper. Thomas stands in the doorway. Scene 2 Duration 04:03 Panel 2 Duration 03:03 Writing Room Page 2/66

  4. Scene 3 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 3

    Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Shelly quickly turns around to face Thomas. Scene 3 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: This room helps me think Writing Room Page 3/66

  5. Scene 4 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    Indeed Scene 4 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:Indeed Action Notes Thomas surveys the mess in the room. (wipes dust off door frame with scrutiny)?) Scene 4 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:Indeed Action Notes Thomas surveys the mess in the room. (wipes dust off door frame with scrutiny)?) Writing Room Page 4/66

  6. Scene 4 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    Do you have Action Notes Thomas enters the room. Scene 4 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:the finished manuscript? Action Notes Thomas extends hand to collect manuscript Scene 5 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Shelly looks at Thomas' hand. Writing Room Page 5/66

  7. Scene 5 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    AH! Scene 5 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: I'm still brainstorming! Scene 5 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: I just need ONE more extension Writing Room Page 6/66

  8. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    Again? Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: No way, not this time Shelburne! Writing Room Page 7/66

  9. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    Please Thomas Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:This episode's going to be great! Writing Room Page 8/66

  10. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    I promise Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Puh- Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Puh- Writing Room Page 9/66

  11. Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    LEAAAASE! Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: Sigh (Annoyed) Writing Room Page 10/66

  12. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Well...

    Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: Let's hear Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: what you have so far Writing Room Page 11/66

  13. Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    what you have so far Scene 8 Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: what you have so far Scene 9 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 12/66

  14. Scene 9 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog s:

    ok ok ok Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Our story starts Writing Room Page 13/66

  15. Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    In the Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: jungle! Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 14/66

  16. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Scene 1

    Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 15/66

  17. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    SFX: Door melting away buzz Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes SFX: Door melting away buzz Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes SFX: Door melting away buzz Writing Room Page 16/66

  18. Scene 1 Duration 08:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    SFX: Door melting away buzz Scene 2 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 2 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: huh? Writing Room Page 17/66

  19. Scene 2 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    huh? Scene 2 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: uhmm Scene 3 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog S; It's a Writing Room Page 18/66

  20. Scene 3 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S;

    Dangerous jungle Scene 4 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: ACK! Scene 4 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: ACK! Writing Room Page 19/66

  21. Scene 4 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    Full of Scene 5 Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Deadly Spiders! Action Notes (match head angle to previous shot and expression)f Scene 5 Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog SFX: insect crawling Action Notes (match head angle to previous shot and expression)f Writing Room Page 20/66

  22. Scene 5 Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog SFX:

    insect crawling Action Notes (match head angle to previous shot and expression)f Scene 5 Duration 08:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Spider lands on Thomas's arm Scene 5 Duration 08:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 21/66

  23. Scene 5 Duration 08:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    Spiders! Action Notes Spider anticipates Notes more spiders crawling down in bg Scene 5 Duration 08:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog t: ACK! Action Notes and Bites Thomas Writing Room Page 22/66

  24. Scene 5 Duration 08:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog t:

    I don't like this Idea! Scene 6 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Wait wait! Writing Room Page 23/66

  25. Scene 6 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    I meant theyre on a tiny island! Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: Ah (satisfied) Writing Room Page 24/66

  26. Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    That's more like it! Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: That's more like it! Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: but... Writing Room Page 25/66

  27. Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Scene 7

    Duration 11:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: It's a desserted island Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes SFX: Thunder? Writing Room Page 26/66

  28. Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    In the middle of a hailstorm Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: In the middle of a hailstorma Scene 7 Duration 11:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: In the middle of a hailstorma Writing Room Page 27/66

  29. Scene 8 Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    i- I just dont t-think this is what the network is looking for Scene 8 Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: i- I just dont t-think this is what the network is looking for Scene 8 Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: i- I just dont t-think this is what the network is looking for Writing Room Page 28/66

  30. Scene 8 Duration 08:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    i- I just dont t-think this is what the network is looking for Scene 8 Duration 08:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: i- I just dont t-think this is what the network is looking for Scene 8 Duration 08:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: i- I just dont t-think this is what the network is looking for Writing Room Page 29/66

  31. Scene 8 Duration 08:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    i- I just dont t-think this is what the network is looking for Scene 8 Duration 08:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: i- I just dont t-think this is what the network is looking for Scene 9 Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: You're right, your right Writing Room Page 30/66

  32. Scene 9 Duration 07:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    You're right, your right Scene 9 Duration 07:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: You're right, your right Scene 9 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: You're right, your right Writing Room Page 31/66

  33. Scene 9 Duration 07:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    You're right, your right Scene 9 Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: You're right, your right Scene 9 Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Coffee Shop? Writing Room Page 32/66

  34. Scene 10 Duration 06:04 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 10

    Duration 06:04 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Scene 10 Duration 06:04 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: Oh.. kay Writing Room Page 33/66

  35. Scene 10 Duration 06:04 Panel 4 Duration 00:14 Scene 10

    Duration 06:04 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 34/66

  36. Scene 10 Duration 06:04 Panel 6 Duration 00:14 Scene 10

    Duration 06:04 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 35/66

  37. Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 11

    Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 36/66

  38. Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Scene 11

    Duration 10:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 37/66

  39. Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Scene 11

    Duration 10:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 38/66

  40. Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Scene 12

    Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 39/66

  41. Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    YES! Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: YES! Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: On the night of a witch hunt! Writing Room Page 40/66

  42. Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Scene 12

    Duration 15:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 41/66

  43. Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    NO!! Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: NO!! Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: NO!! Writing Room Page 42/66

  44. Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    NO!! Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: NO!! Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 13 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: NO!! Writing Room Page 43/66

  45. Scene 12 Duration 15:00 Panel 14 Duration 01:00 Scene 12

    Duration 15:00 Panel 15 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Pirate Ship? Scene 13 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 44/66

  46. Scene 13 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Notes Pier?

    Scene 13 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: EEK (screaming) Scene 13 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: OVER DONE Writing Room Page 45/66

  47. Scene 13 Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Scene 13

    Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog S (o.s): catacombs? Scene 14 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 46/66

  48. Scene 14 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Scene 14

    Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Scene 14 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 47/66

  49. Scene 14 Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Scene 14

    Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 48/66

  50. Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Scene 15

    Duration 18:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: OOF Writing Room Page 49/66

  51. Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    OH! Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: OH! Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: I Know! Writing Room Page 50/66

  52. Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    AAOO Action Notes Said in slow motion deep voice Notes ECU with face Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:OUT Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: ERRR Writing Room Page 51/66

  53. Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    SP Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:AAAAY Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 13 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 52/66

  54. Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 14 Duration 01:00 Scene 15

    Duration 18:00 Panel 15 Duration 01:00 Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 16 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: ALL RIGHT Writing Room Page 53/66

  55. Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 17 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    ALL RIGHT Scene 15 Duration 18:00 Panel 18 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: ALL RIGHT Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog T (urgently): ALL RIGHT! Writing Room Page 54/66

  56. Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T(defeated):

    All right. Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: You can have an extension! Scene 1 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: You got your extension! Writing Room Page 55/66

  57. Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    Gee Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Thanks Thomas Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: I won't let you down! Writing Room Page 56/66

  58. Scene 4 Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog S

    (o.s): In fact! Scene 4 Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S (o.s): You can come pick it up Monday Morning! Scene 4 Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: Uhm Writing Room Page 57/66

  59. Scene 4 Duration 08:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    Just... Scene 4 Duration 08:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: Email it to me NO PANEL Writing Room Page 58/66

  60. Scene 4 Duration 08:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    Well Scene 4 Duration 08:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: I'll leave you to it. Writing Room Page 59/66

  61. Scene 4 Duration 08:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    I'll leave you to it. Scene 5 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog sfx: Footsteps leaving room Scene 5 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Oh! Writing Room Page 60/66

  62. Scene 5 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog S:

    Thomas! Scene 6 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog T (hesitant): yes? Scene 7 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog S: Wanna grab lunch? Writing Room Page 61/66

  63. Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Scene 8

    Duration 14:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: Oh. Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: *clears throat* Writing Room Page 62/66

  64. Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    Well... Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: That sounds Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: quite nice Writing Room Page 63/66

  65. Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    actually. Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog S (o.s): Cool! Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog S (o.s):Calamari? Writing Room Page 64/66

  66. Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Scene 8

    Duration 14:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Dialog Sfx: octopus slime Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Writing Room Page 65/66

  67. Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 13 Duration 01:00 Dialog T:

    AAAHHHHH! Scene 8 Duration 14:00 Panel 14 Duration 01:00 Dialog T: AHHHHHHHhhhhhhh! (screamming fade out) NO PANEL Writing Room Page 66/66