Mating Season Ep8 L-Thumbs

Thumbnails for section L of ep 8 in Mating Season. Before we got the audio, I had a different take of how some of the shots may have gone. The final is tweaked, but I enjoyed these drawings!

Transcript

1. Scene 1 Panel 1 Dialog 282 RAY Hey, Addybaby? Action Notes 17. EXT. FOREST MARKETPLACE - DAY Ray and Addy peruse the shops, wing in paw.
2. Scene 2 Panel 1 Dialog 283 ADDY Yes, Cheeseball? 284 RAY I was thinking, since you know, we're an item now--- Action Notes The guys will be walking locked to camera as BG shrinks behind them
3. Scene 2 Panel 2 Dialog 284 RAY --- umm maybe you shouldn't sing with Gregg anymore? 285 ADDY What? Why not? 286 RAY Well... I think he's got a little thing for you.
4. Action Notes The guys will be walking locked to camera as BG shrinks behind them
5. Scene 3 Panel 1 Dialog 286A ADDY (LAUGHS) Gregg?! 286B RAY Yeah. Action Notes bg pans behind as they walk in place
6. Scene 3 Panel 2 Dialog 287 ADDY No he doesn't! --- 287A RAY Ehhhh. Action Notes bg pans behind as they walk in place
7. Scene 3 Panel 3 Dialog 287 ADDY ---Ray,--- Action Notes she stops him and the CAM STOPS
8. Scene 4 Panel 1 Dialog 287 ADDY --- we're just friends! Like you and Fawn and Penelope.
9. Scene 4 Panel 2 Dialog 288 RAY Yeah, but you know, I don't really sing with Fawn and Penelope... 289 ADDY Oh my god, Ray--
10. Scene 4 Panel 3 Dialog 290 RAY I'm telling you! Look, ---
11. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog 290 RAY ---he's waiting for you to realize that you're too good for me, (ADDY SCOFFS) ---
12. Scene 5 Panel 2 Dialog 290 RAY ---so he can swoop in with his fancy wings and his semi-aquatic lifestyle, and-- 291 ADDY Whoa whoa whoa!---
13. Scene 6 Panel 1 Dialog 291 ADDY --- Ray... 292 RAY Yeah? 292A ADDY Hey-- 292B RAY
14. Yeah.
15. Scene 6 Panel 2 Dialog 293 ADDY I like you. 294 RAY Perfect! 295 ADDY But-- 295A RAY
16. Great!
17. Scene 6 Panel 3 Dialog 295B ADDY But-- 295C RAY Uh-huh? 295D ADDY I am allowed to sing with whoever I want. 296 RAY
18. (NOT LOVING THIS) Uh-huh...
19. Scene 6 Panel 4 Dialog 297 ADDY And Gregg is a big part of my life. 297A RAY I know!
20. Scene 7 Panel 1 Dialog 297B ADDY So... I think that it would actually be nice if the two of you could be friends.
21. Scene 8 Panel 1 Dialog 298 RAY (NERVOUS) Sure! Friends... life... part of... Gregg... right?
22. Scene 9 Panel 1 Dialog 299 ADDY Thank you! 300 RAY Yeah! (NERVOUS LAUGH) Gregg. Action Notes ...Ray pats her on the back awkwardly