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The Candlemaker - Short Version

Avatar for Sam Holt Sam Holt
November 26, 2023
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The Candlemaker - Short Version

Avatar for Sam Holt

Sam Holt

November 26, 2023

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  1. Scene 10 Duration 06:20 Panel 5 Duration 00:17 Notes The

    couple are lying on the dirt in the gateway. Page 104/185
  2. Scene 10 Duration 06:20 Panel 7 Duration 01:03 Notes He

    carries her to a bench in the park, which we get a good view of. She puts her head in his lap, and reads a book. Page 106/185
  3. Scene 10 Duration 06:20 Panel 8 Duration 00:13 Notes As

    she reads the world melts away again. Page 107/185
  4. Scene 10 Duration 06:20 Panel 9 Duration 00:12 Notes They're

    caught up in the swirl, but they do not react. None of them react to this, because it's more of a metaphor than an actual thing that's happening. Page 108/185
  5. Scene 10 Duration 06:20 Panel 10 Duration 00:12 Notes The

    whole screen is caught up in the swirl. Page 109/185
  6. Scene 11 Duration 01:10 Panel 1 Duration 00:13 Notes It

    eventually stops and solidifies into a pattern painted onto a wall. I'm thinking of inspiration from Rococco movement cloudscapes. Page 110/185
  7. Scene 11 Duration 01:10 Panel 2 Duration 00:10 Notes We're

    in the halls of a large educational institution. The camera pans down the stairs to appreciate a set of statues. Students roam throughout, but it's rather sparse. Page 111/185
  8. Scene 11 Duration 01:10 Panel 3 Duration 00:11 Notes The

    couple walks out of a classroom. Page 112/185
  9. Scene 12 Duration 02:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:18 Notes Zoom

    in on them. Liam takes Silvia by the hands. Page 113/185
  10. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 1 Duration 00:18 Notes the

    camera spins. They're not in the same place they were before. Page 116/185
  11. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 2 Duration 00:12 Notes They're

    in a large chamber with a reflective floor again. However, this time there is a sea of candles behind them. Page 117/185
  12. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 3 Duration 00:20 Notes The

    candles shine and provide a powerful light throughout the room. It's extra romantic. Page 118/185
  13. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 6 Duration 00:06 Notes Silvia

    takes Liam's hands once they're done smooching. Page 121/185
  14. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 10 Duration 00:06 Notes She

    starts to lead him down a path. Page 125/185
  15. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 18 Duration 00:06 Notes They

    encounter a crowd of more students as they run onto a bridge. Page 133/185
  16. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 20 Duration 00:06 Notes The

    crowd thickens. A lot. Each of them is going left, while the couple goes right. Page 135/185
  17. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 22 Duration 00:06 Notes The

    crowd starts to die out, as their source, coming down the stairs, is passed. Page 137/185
  18. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 23 Duration 00:06 Notes The

    couple run past the study from the beginning of the flashback. Page 138/185
  19. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 24 Duration 00:06 Notes The

    world transitions in a chaotic and firey burst back to the chamber full of candles. Page 139/185
  20. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 28 Duration 00:06 Notes They

    arrive where they kissed. Page 143/185
  21. Scene 13 Duration 09:01 Panel 29 Duration 00:17 Notes Suddenly,

    every candle goes out at once. Liam lets go of Silvia as he evaporates much like the smoke from the candles. This causes Silvia to lose balance and fall without him. Page 144/185
  22. Scene 14 Duration 01:22 Panel 1 Duration 00:14 Notes Up

    from the water, Silvia's house rises, obstructing her path as she falls, Page 145/185
  23. Scene 14 Duration 01:22 Panel 2 Duration 00:18 Notes She

    stands before her front door. Page 146/185
  24. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 1 Duration 00:12 Notes Wipe

    through the wall to present day Silvia, still playing the piano. Page 148/185
  25. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 2 Duration 00:13 Notes Flashback

    Silvia isn't done running yet though, as she runs past herself, frantic and confused. Page 149/185
  26. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 3 Duration 00:12 Notes She

    turns toward a stairwell. Page 150/185
  27. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 4 Duration 00:12 Notes She

    climbs up it for a time, running past miscellaneous paintings. Page 151/185
  28. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 5 Duration 00:13 Notes Then,

    the camera starts to turn towards the other wall. Page 152/185
  29. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 6 Duration 00:15 Notes But

    there isn't one there. She's high above the city. It's a clear night. Page 153/185
  30. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 7 Duration 00:15 Notes The

    stairway keeps going upward to the stars. Page 154/185
  31. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 8 Duration 00:12 Notes Eventually,

    the stairs end on the side of a mountain. The bridge leads into a dense forest. Page 155/185
  32. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 9 Duration 00:12 Notes The

    camera tracks Silvia as she ventures into the woods. Page 156/185
  33. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 10 Duration 00:12 Notes She

    moves through the foliage with purpose, she knows the path. Page 157/185
  34. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 11 Duration 00:12 Notes She

    climbs up a set of rocks. Water flows down from them into the brush. The water produces a faint mist. Page 158/185
  35. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 12 Duration 00:12 Notes The

    rocks jut out onto the ocean. Silvia's chasing a ship sailing into the sunrise. Waves crash wildly against the rocks. Page 159/185
  36. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 13 Duration 00:12 Notes she

    stands firmly on the ledge overlooking the sea. She watches the ship go away into the distance. Page 160/185
  37. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 14 Duration 00:10 Notes Then

    the waves return with great force, covering the screen and buffeting Silvia. Page 161/185
  38. Scene 15 Duration 08:01 Panel 15 Duration 00:19 Notes Once

    they dissipate, she's in a cemetery. Grey skies. There's a lone candle lit on the grave she stares at. Page 162/185
  39. Scene 16 Duration 07:08 Panel 1 Duration 01:23 Notes Smash

    cut to present day Silvia. She defeatedly plays the chord that goes into the slow part of the music. Page 163/185
  40. Scene 16 Duration 07:08 Panel 2 Duration 01:23 Notes The

    sounds of the world around return. The rain feels heavier. Page 164/185
  41. Scene 16 Duration 07:08 Panel 3 Duration 02:02 Notes But

    not as heavy as Silvia's breathing. Page 165/185
  42. Scene 16 Duration 07:08 Panel 4 Duration 01:08 Notes She's

    stopped playing. Shaking, she leans on the piano for support. Page 166/185
  43. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 2 Duration 03:11 Notes Insert

    shot - A painting of Liam and Silvia. Faces are not visible. Page 168/185
  44. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 5 Duration 01:22 Notes She's

    hyperventilating. She bumps into the stool as she pulls down on her hair. Page 171/185
  45. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 6 Duration 02:15 Notes She

    looks to the stairwell, grasping at her arm a little too hard. Her hair is mottled now. Page 172/185
  46. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 7 Duration 02:03 Notes She

    looks to the entrance behind her. She grasps at her necktie. Page 173/185
  47. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 8 Duration 02:09 Notes She

    pulls outward on the tie. Her neck feels too tight. Page 174/185
  48. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 9 Duration 02:02 Notes Pulling

    at the clothing around her throat, she jolts up in a sudden burst. Page 175/185
  49. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 10 Duration 02:17 Notes She

    gives up. Her arms flop down to her sides. Page 176/185
  50. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 11 Duration 01:18 Notes Her

    head moves towards the candle in the foreground. Page 177/185
  51. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 12 Duration 01:20 Notes a

    tear rolls down her cheek. Page 178/185
  52. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 13 Duration 05:05 Notes She

    walks over to the candle. Page 179/185
  53. Scene 17 Duration 34:15 Panel 14 Duration 02:11 Notes She

    gazes longingly into the flame. Page 180/185