a sneaker taps rhythmically against a polished hardwood floor. The tap is just a bit too fast — nervous energy trying to escape. Storyboarder's Notes Can still hear sneaker tapping noise throughout scene.
a sneaker taps rhythmically against a polished hardwood floor. The tap is just a bit too fast — nervous energy trying to escape. Storyboarder's Notes Can still hear sneaker tapping noise throughout scene.
Storyboarder's Notes I thought Marco being more "hidden in plain sight" in his confidence in this scene might be funny- but no sweat if this interpretation isn't it.
girl in all of my classes look like models. Action Notes EXT. MEMORIAL CHURCH - DAY The afternoon sun hits bright on the sandstone walls of a building. Marco and TIEHRE (18), tall built African American, walk sideby-side down a path, backpacks slung low.
basement. Boxes. Janitor gear. Sleeping bag on a yoga mat, cracked minifridge, a crate of noodles and notebooks. Storyboarder's Notes No camera movement. He just walks towards his makeshift room for a few seconds. I want him to appear small.
up. YOU made me fuck up. MARCO’S DAD Mijo, you had amazing grades in high school. You were planning on going to college. Action Notes Marco exhales a dry laugh.
Marco entering the stairwell. He follows. Storyboarder's Notes The camera will off zoomed in on Tiehre opening the door, then zoom out to show the door to the stairwell closing.
peers through the window. Marco heads down, not up. Storyboarder's Notes It would be cool if Tiehre entered the stairwell, then peered down to notice Marco going down.
a roommate, so I got an extra bed. You can crash in my dorm. MARCO For real? TIEHRE Yeah, but only on one condition. MARCO Action Notes Symmetrical/grounded composition again to show they're back on equal ground.
but mostly her cooking. So you're gonna be my personal chef from now on. MARCO (Shakes Tiehre’s hand) Alright, bet. You just changed my life, bro. TIEHRE But explain, what drove you to do this? Storyboarder's Notes I would change Tiehre's line to something more casual, like "How'd you end up in this boat anyways?" + Would take out Marco's "So that's my story." and skip straight to Tiehre's response/reaction.
would've done the same thing too if I was in your shoes. Action Notes INT. DORM HALLWAY - DAY Tiehre and Marco step out of the stairwell, both are carry big black bags filled with Marco's clothes. Storyboarder's Notes Tracking Shot as they walk down the hallway. Tiehre saying he would've dont the same thing with confidence feels unrealistic- maybe he says he wouldn't know what he would've done, or that he can't blame Marco.
Jeannette stare each other, she disappears into the stairwell. Storyboarder's Notes "Elevator" in the script was replaced with stairwell because Washburn dosn't have any elevators.