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Fort So Far

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October 25, 2024
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Fort So Far

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Abbey

October 25, 2024
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  1. Notes Its late afternoon/sunset and we open to an apartment

    building and pan to the pedestal to the top to a penthouse.
  2. Notes SUNNY is playing alone across the room from her

    BABYSITTER who is on her phone. the door opens. TODD, her father is on the phone with a coworker, he puts his bag down and gives three hundred dollar bills to the babysitter who exits the room without saying goodbye. Her eyes are glued to her phone. Sunny rushes to her room to get toys. The dad continues,
  3. Notes SUNNY is playing alone across the room from her

    BABYSITTER who is on her phone. the door opens. TODD, her father is on the phone with a coworker, he puts his bag down and gives three hundred dollar bills to the babysitter who exits the room without saying goodbye. Her eyes are glued to her phone. Sunny rushes to her room to get toys. The dad continues,
  4. Notes Todd puts the adult size tennis racket back into

    the closet. Todd grabs her sneakers in there too, he turns around to see Sunny stomping.
  5. Notes Sunny runs to her room, Todd chases after her.

    He arrives into her room and sees no sunny.
  6. Notes Todd falls from the ceiling and lands on a

    pillow like surface. He looks around and sees that he has been transported into a whole new world! The sky is a pattern of different overlapping blankets with distant fairy lights as stars. In the center of the landscape is a crater with cliff side pillows and gigantic sized furniture surrounding it. Appearing above the depth of the craters abyss are toy structures, (LIST THEM HERE.) Finally on the opposite side at there is a colorful and lit up box or couch that.
  7. Notes SWEETIE the stuff animal dog, eye twitches but she

    goes back to her customer service smile.
  8. Notes SWEETIE the stuff animal dog, eye twitches but she

    goes back to her customer service smile.
  9. Notes Todd immedietly tries to jump, and pauses in the

    sky, and falls down in a wild cayote type manner. Sweetie uses her sticky hand toy to bungee him back up.
  10. Notes Todd lies down on the ground, frustrated he kicks

    his feet up and punches the ground, like a toddler. He exhausts himself and looks up at the sky and admires the fort. He observes the toys that Sunny likes within the land.
  11. Notes Todds eyes wander, he see a Spiderman lego, origami

    birds flying in the distance, and the Zuzu pets in the distance. He gets up more confident and inspired. He rolls up his sleeves and puts his suit on his waist. Triumphant music begins to play.
  12. Notes He makes a ramp out of the legos and

    grabs a Zuzu pet, he then rides it at full speed into the marble structure, he cheers with child like glee. He then uses the sticky hand from sweetie. to launch himself back into the air. He then uses his suit jacket as a parachute/glider to glide his way to Sunny tea party area. The area is more secluded.
  13. Notes Todd lands on the ground of the fort and

    runs to the secluded area. There is a table with 4 seats. 2 are taken by stuff animals, and 1 is taken by Sunny. Sunny is crying looking down. Todd walks past sunny, and seems to be walking to the exit but instead he takes a seat in the chair across from sunny. Sunny looks up to see her dad. Todd takes a sip of the empty tea cup and looks up to the right licking his lips and trying to figure out the taste.
  14. Notes CUT TO SUNNY'S BED ROOM. THE FORT IS ILLUMINATED

    BUT WE CAN SEE THEIR SHADOWS/SILLOUTES IN THE FORT. THE CITY OUTSIDE OF THE BEDROOM IS DARK. IMPLYING THAT THEY MISSED TENNIS PRACTICE AS THE RACKETS LAY ON THE FLOOR.