GreenTree Revised storyboard

Revised version of the storyboard for Chronicles of GreenTree. As I work on my art and practice storyboarding more and more, I decided to revisit the original storyboard with the principles I learned and put the storyboard into a more presentable format.

Transcript

1. Scene 1 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Dialog NARRATOR: In the mysterious Twilight Valley, Scene 1 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Dialog ...three young critters venture from the safety of their home... Scene 1 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog ...to explore the treacherous unknown… Scene 1_A_0 Duration 05:20 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Uzel Greentree animatic Page 1/12
2. Scene 1_A_0 Duration 05:20 Panel 2 Duration 01:10 Dialog MUSTARD: (with concern, slightly nervous) …I mean, what if we do encounter owls out here? Or something? Scene 1_A_0 Duration 05:20 Panel 3 Duration 02:10 Dialog BASIL: It’ll be fine, Mustard, we just have to… stick together. Scene 1_A_0 Duration 05:20 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog BASIL; We just have to… stick together. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 1 Duration 02:20 Dialog MUSTARD: Sure… B-but what if we get separated? Uzel Greentree animatic Page 2/12
3. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 2 Duration 02:19 Dialog MUSTARD: I mean, anything can happen out here – Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 3 Duration 00:10 Dialog NUTMEG: (sternly) Quiet! Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 4 Duration 01:20 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 5 Duration 01:20 Dialog MUSTARD: Owl Pellet! BASIL: I know… Uzel Greentree animatic Page 3/12
4. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 7 Duration 02:00 Dialog NUTMEG: Could it be…? BASIL: A rat emblem? Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 8 Duration 02:00 Dialog MUSTARD: But… But that’s impossible, nobody’s seen a rat in – Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Dialog OWL: Hoot! Uzel Greentree animatic Page 4/12
5. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog OWL!: Why hello, dinner! Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 11 Duration 00:12 Dialog MUSTARD: Look out! Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 12 Duration 00:12 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 13 Duration 01:00 Uzel Greentree animatic Page 5/12
6. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 14 Duration 00:05 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 15 Duration 00:05 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 16 Duration 00:10 Action Notes The Owl leans in and takes off, carrying the "branch", which is in fact a long spear, in their claws. The owl rotates the spear in their talons as they charge into the group. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 17 Duration 00:05 Uzel Greentree animatic Page 6/12
7. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 18 Duration 00:05 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 19 Duration 00:10 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 20 Duration 00:10 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 21 Duration 00:10 Uzel Greentree animatic Page 7/12
8. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 22 Duration 00:10 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 23 Duration 00:05 Notes SFX: branch snap Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 24 Duration 00:10 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 25 Duration 00:20 Uzel Greentree animatic Page 8/12
9. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 26 Duration 00:15 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 27 Duration 00:10 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 28 Duration 00:05 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 29 Duration 01:00 Uzel Greentree animatic Page 9/12
10. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 30 Duration 01:00 Action Notes BG Pan left, then right, then back again. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 31 Duration 00:04 Dialog BASIL: (heavy breathing) Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 32 Duration 01:20 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 33 Duration 01:20 Uzel Greentree animatic Page 10/12
11. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 34 Duration 00:15 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 35 Duration 00:20 Dialog BASIL: AAAAAh - oof! Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 36 Duration 01:15 Dialog NUTMEG and MUSTARD (Off in the distance): Basil! Basil! NUTMEG: There he is! Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 37 Duration 00:20 Dialog MUSTARD and NUTMEG: Basil! Uzel Greentree animatic Page 11/12
12. Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 38 Duration 01:00 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 39 Duration 02:00 Scene 1_A Duration 41:02 Panel 40 Duration 03:00 Uzel Greentree animatic Page 12/12