T1JAL14_WC.pdf

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1. Writing Conferences Term 1, Lesson 14
2. Feedback on Writing 1. Teachers please display EVERY student’s work (not just the ones on roster) and give constructive feedback on their writing from previous lesson (next slide) in the following areas: 2. - vocabulary: Use five senses vocabulary for settings/characters; Use figurative language: personification; Use strong vocabulary; Use Writing strategy: show don’t tell; Use Powerful Adjectives 3. - sentence structure: Use different types of sentences: simple/compound/complex sentences 4. - text structure: introduction: Introduce characters & describe settings 5. - spelling 6. - ideas 7. - paragraphing 8. - punctuation Don’t have to comment on all areas. You can choose 1-2 areas to focus on.
3. SLIDESMANIA.COM Lesson 10 Homework – 2019 NAPLAN Writing Task • Write a story for the 2019 NAPLAN Writing Stimulus “The Gate”. Make sure you do your best in the following areas: Ø Introduce characters & describe settings Ø Use strong vocabulary Ø Use Writing strategy: show don’t tell Ø Use five senses vocabulary for settings/characters Ø Use Powerful Adjectives Ø Use Strong verbs Ø Use figurative language: personification Ø Use different types of sentences: simple/compound/complex sentences Tick the area(s) you did well in your introduction Due Date: Sunday (for writing conferences coming up)
5. CHARACTER & SETTING Scoring range 0- 4 (the way you describe and present them through dialogue) Weaker texts Standard texts Stronger texts * Only give characters names or roles (dad, her brother) * Only give brief and simple descriptions (big, red, silly) * Include characters and/or setting are confusing to the reader * May use simple or common similes *Attempt to develop a good understanding of the setting or the main character * Give a very detailed description of character through dialogue, actions, interactions with other characters and thoughts *Include a setting that has an atmosphere which is maintained throughout the text
6. VOCABULARY Scoring range 0-5 (the types of words used) Weaker texts Standard texts Stronger texts * Are very short text * Have very few content words * Use mostly simple words 一 dragon, quick, really, very * Use common similes 一 as black as night * May use a few precise words 一 snarled, hurtled, revolted * Consistently use many precise words * Also use metaphor, personification, and interesting similes * Include writing that is fluent and articulate * Include vocabulary that is well matched to the genre (sci fi/ historical, mystery)
7. SENTENCE STRUCTURE Scoring range 0-6 (this is all about the grammatical structure of a sentence 一 does it make sense?) Weaker texts Standard texts Stronger texts * Have no complete sentences * Are very short texts *Include some simple sentences that are correct * Include simple sentences that are correct and some compound sentences that are correct * May have one or two complex sentences correct * Most sentences of all types are correct OR * All sentences are correct but there is little variety
8. Homework 1. Spelling List and Practice 2. Review, edit, correct and improve your writing based on your teacher’s feedback. All resources and tasks are downloadable from Student Portal à Revision Centre.
9. Congratulations!! You’ve learned so much in this term! You’ve learned: 1. how to write an introduction of a story using DESCRIPTION approach (introduce and describe characters & settings） 2. Using five senses vocabulary for settings/characters; 3. Using figurative language: personification in writing 4. Using strong and powerful adjectives 5. Using Writing strategy: show don’t tell 6. Using different types of sentences: simple/compound/complex sentences 7. Analysing model compositions/writing/work samples 8. Preparing for NAPLAN reading, language conventions and writing
10. PTI – Parent Teacher Interview Important Announcement: Lesson 15 (next session) will be the PTI! The time for individual students will be announced on Student Portal. Announcements will also be made on Student Portal. Please contact the school if you have any questions.
11. Star of the Week 11
12. See You! Have a great holiday! 12