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Don't Go

Monica Lopez
December 10, 2021

Don't Go

When her twin sister steals her project, a teenage witch must get it back before her future is ruined forever.

Monica Lopez

December 10, 2021
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  1. Dialog FX: (Faint beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    EST of suburbs. Title fades out. Witches begin to fly in as the town wakes up.
  2. Dialog FX: (Faint beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    EST of suburbs. Title fades out. Witches begin to fly in as the town wakes up.
  3. Dialog FX: (Faint beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    EST of suburbs. Title fades out. Witches begin to fly in as the town wakes up.
  4. Dialog FX: (Faint beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    Slow Truck In
  5. Dialog FX: (Louder beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    Slow Truck In
  6. Dialog FX: (Louder beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    Slow Truck In
  7. Dialog FX: (Louder beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    Slow Truck In
  8. Dialog FX: (Louder beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    Slow Truck In
  9. Dialog FX: (Louder beeping of an alarm clock) Action Notes

    Slow Truck In
  10. Dialog FX:(Loud beeping) Action Notes CU of alarm clock Light

    flickers.
  11. Dialog FX:(Loud beeping) Action Notes CU of alarm clock Light

    flickers.
  12. Dialog FX:(Loud beeping) Action Notes CU of alarm clock Light

    flickers.
  13. Dialog FX:(Loud beeping) Action Notes CU of alarm clock Light

    flickers.
  14. Dialog FX:(Loud beeping) Action Notes CU of alarm clock Light

    flickers.
  15. Dialog FX:(Beeping stops) Action Notes EVE slams clock

  16. Dialog EVE: (grumble)

  17. Dialog FX:(Water running) Action Notes OTS shot of Eve brushing

    her teeth. She spits toothpaste and looks up at the mirror. She begins to get ready.
  18. Dialog FX:(Water running) Action Notes OTS shot of Eve brushing

    her teeth. She spits toothpaste and looks up at the mirror. She begins to get ready.
  19. Action Notes DORY's POV, WS of Eve doing her hair

    through an open bathroom door as Dory opens her bedroom door.
  20. Action Notes ECU of Dory's eye looking longingly at Eve.

  21. Action Notes Dory's expression turns sour and the shadows on

    her face grow darker.
  22. Dialog FX:(Faint click) Action Notes Dory gently closes her door.

    Faint click of the door locking can be heard.
  23. Action Notes MS of Eve descending stairs as camera follows.

    Behind her, the walls are lined with photos of her and her twin, but mostly Eve and her accomplishments.
  24. Action Notes MS of Eve descending stairs as camera follows.

    Behind her, the walls are lined with photos of her and her twin, but mostly Eve and her accomplishments.
  25. Action Notes Camera stops following Eve and zooms in slowly

    at a picture of Eve and Dory as babies, shifting focus from Eve to the photo. Eve continues to descend past the shot.
  26. Action Notes Camera stops following Eve and zooms in slowly

    at a picture of Eve and Dory as babies, shifting focus from Eve to the photo. Eve continues to descend past the shot.
  27. Action Notes Camera stops following Eve and zooms in slowly

    at a picture of Eve and Dory as babies, shifting focus from Eve to the photo. Eve continues to descend past the shot.
  28. Dialog FX:(Faint child laughter) Action Notes Camera stops following Eve

    and zooms in slowly at a picture of Eve and Dory as babies, shifting focus from Eve to the photo. Eve continues to descend past the shot.
  29. Action Notes WS of Eve entering LIVING ROOM She waves

    a glowing hand and her items levitate towards her.
  30. Action Notes WS of Eve entering LIVING ROOM She waves

    a glowing hand and her items levitate towards her.
  31. Action Notes MCU/OTS of Eve looking back up the stairs.

  32. Action Notes MCU/OTS of Eve looking back up the stairs.

  33. Action Notes MCU/OTS of Eve looking back up the stairs.

  34. Action Notes MCU/OTS of Eve looking back up the stairs.

  35. Action Notes MCU/OTS of Eve looking back up the stairs.

  36. Action Notes She thinks for a moment before calling out.

    She bites her lip, grabs her bag tighter, then calls out to Dory.
  37. Action Notes She thinks for a moment before calling out.

    She bites her lip, grabs her bag tighter, then calls out to Dory.
  38. Action Notes She thinks for a moment before calling out.

    She bites her lip, grabs her bag tighter, then calls out to Dory.
  39. Dialog EVE: "Dory! I'm leaving for the convention! Tell Mom

    and Dad I might be home late! Action Notes She thinks for a moment before calling out. She bites her lip, grabs her bag tighter, then calls out to Dory.
  40. Action Notes She waits for Dory's reply, which she doesn't

    get.
  41. Action Notes She waits for Dory's reply, which she doesn't

    get.
  42. Action Notes WS of Eve entering GARAGE. Eve turns to

    turn the lights on, looks forward and reacts to the project being missing, dropping her things.
  43. Action Notes WS of Eve entering GARAGE. Eve turns to

    turn the lights on, looks forward and reacts to the project being missing, dropping her things.
  44. Action Notes WS of Eve entering GARAGE. Eve turns to

    turn the lights on, looks forward and reacts to the project being missing, dropping her things.
  45. Action Notes Whip zoom to MCU of Eve Eve does

    a Take.
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  48. Dialog EVE: "WHAT?!" Action Notes Hold for reaction.

  49. Dialog EVE: "N-No! I made sure it was here just

    last night! Did it fall? Did I put it somewhere else? It has to be here somewhere!" Action Notes WS of Eve frantically searching room.
  50. Dialog EVE: "N-No! I made sure it was here just

    last night! Did it fall? Did I put it somewhere else? It has to be here somewhere!" Action Notes WS of Eve frantically searching room.
  51. Dialog EVE: "N-No! I made sure it was here just

    last night! Did it fall? Did I put it somewhere else? It has to be here somewhere!" Action Notes WS of Eve frantically searching room.
  52. Action Notes Rack focus shift to table and green sparkles.

    Eve notices sparkles out of the corner of her eye and rises slowly. She turns to inspect it closely.
  53. Action Notes Rack focus shift to table and green sparkles.

    Eve notices sparkles out of the corner of her eye and rises slowly. She turns to inspect it closely.
  54. Action Notes Rack focus shift to table and green sparkles.

    Eve notices sparkles out of the corner of her eye and rises slowly. She turns to inspect it closely.
  55. Dialog Eve:(Groans) Action Notes Rack focus shift to table and

    green sparkles. Eve notices sparkles out of the corner of her eye and rises slowly. She turns to inspect it closely.