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Rock Their World - EP 1 The Deal

Rock Their World - EP 1 The Deal

This is a story I made for a pitch presentation for class. Enjoy!

Leonne Chang

May 07, 2023
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  1. Scene 1 Duration 08 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 2/277 Radio Voice: On this day 40 years ago, the true order of Haverland rose from the wood work and brought the unifying peace we know today to our glorious country...
  2. Scene 1 Duration 08 00 Panel 4 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 4/277 Our six mysterious leaders, Haverlands’s Newfound Governmental Hexagon, and their ever-powerful presence over the land have shown us mercy from the terrifying uncertainty of the human experience.
  3. Scene 1 Duration 08 00 Panel 7 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 7/277 Our life is perfect, organized, and complete in their hands. Today, we are here to -
  4. Scene 1 Duration 08 00 Panel 8 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 8/277 Vernon and Brook- RAHHHHHH!!!!! (ripping through the newspaper set up*
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    RTW Thedeal Page 12/277 Brook: Vern, go make sure no one is watching
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    RTW Thedeal Page 15/277 Vernon: We’re clear B. Open the gates!
  7. Scene 4 Duration 03 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 16/277 (Brook and Vernon run past a camera)
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    RTW Thedeal Page 20/277 Brook: Ahhhh! Today’s the day!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 21/277 Vernon: YEAH! This is going to be SO COOL!
  10. Scene 7 Duration 04 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 29/277 Vernon: Aw man!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 30/277 Vernon: It’s been a hot minute since we’ve been down here.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 31/277 Brook: Ugh, I know.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 32/277 Brook: We just barely snuck out tonight!
  14. Scene 8 Duration 04 16 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 33/277 Vernon: Well...
  15. Scene 8 Duration 04 16 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 34/277 Vernon: Let's go over the game plan one more time!
  16. Scene 8 Duration 04 16 Panel 3 Duration 00 20

    RTW Thedeal Page 35/277 Brook: Got it!
  17. Scene 9 Duration 07 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 38/277 Brook: So first we sneak out and get to the hideout
  18. Scene 9 Duration 07 00 Panel 7 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 44/277 Vernon: Check!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 46/277 Vernon: We lay out all of the required supplies we gathered over the last month
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    RTW Thedeal Page 51/277 Brook: On it!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 53/277 Brook: We pay our respects to our idol, the king of rock and roll, Frank Cosmic
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    RTW Thedeal Page 55/277 Vernon: We draw the required runes...
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    RTW Thedeal Page 57/277 Vernon:... and covering the room with newspaper.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 60/277 Brook: And then we summon him.
  25. Scene 14 Duration 12 00 Panel 5 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 61/277 Vernon: Kisco the Forgotten one.
  26. Scene 14 Duration 12 00 Panel 7 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 63/277 Vernon: Then he will give us the power to bring ROCK and ROLL back to this dull and boring plain of existence and become the legends we deserve to be.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 64/277 (Vernon does a guitar riff on a makeshift, paper mache guitar)
  28. Scene 14 Duration 12 00 Panel 11 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 67/277 Brook: We got the game plan down!!!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 69/277 Both: BAM!!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 70/277 Vernon: Alllright!
  31. Scene 16 Duration 04 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 71/277 Vernon: Shall we get started?
  32. Scene 16 Duration 04 00 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 72/277 Brook: Holdddd on one sec…
  33. Scene 16 Duration 04 00 Panel 4 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 73/277 Brook: For this special day… I’ve been preparing a little something for us
  34. Scene 17 Duration 03 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 74/277 Brook: Wait for it…
  35. Scene 17 Duration 03 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 75/277 Brook: Tadaaaaa!
  36. Scene 19 Duration 05 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 85/277 Vernon: Broooooook….
  37. Scene 19 Duration 05 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 86/277 Vernon: We look INSANELY COOOL
  38. Scene 19 Duration 05 00 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 87/277 Vernon: OH MY GOD THANK YOU THANK YOU
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    RTW Thedeal Page 88/277 Brook: Hah, yeah,
  40. Scene 19 Duration 05 00 Panel 5 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 89/277 Brook: It's whatever
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    RTW Thedeal Page 91/277 Vernon: Alright... Let's go.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 96/277 (Note above: Camera Rotating)
  43. Scene 21 Duration 26 00 Panel 5 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 104/277 Both: Forgotten God of shadow and shame
  44. Scene 21 Duration 26 00 Panel 7 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 106/277 Both: Forgotten God who bears no name
  45. Scene 21 Duration 26 00 Panel 9 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 108/277 Both: For you we open up the gate
  46. Scene 21 Duration 26 00 Panel 10 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 109/277 Both: For you we break your weighted chains
  47. Scene 21 Duration 26 00 Panel 11 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 110/277 Both: Rise up Kisco to this sound
  48. Scene 21 Duration 26 00 Panel 12 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 111/277 Both: Rise up Kisco you name was found
  49. Scene 21 Duration 26 00 Panel 14 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 113/277 Both: Rise up Kisco and lend us your power...
  50. Scene 21 Duration 26 00 Panel 16 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 115/277 Both: Before the end of this fragile hour..
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    RTW Thedeal Page 127/277 Brook: Oh my god,
  52. Scene 23 Duration 03 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 128/277 Brook: I had to associate that chant with my dad for over a month to get that to...
  53. Scene 23 Duration 03 00 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 129/277 Brook: WooOOoooOoorkK...
  54. Scene 26 Duration 08 00 Panel 7 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 140/277 Kisco: You've summoned me...
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    RTW Thedeal Page 141/277 Kisco: the Sacrifice?
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    RTW Thedeal Page 142/277 Vernon: Oh… my god…
  57. Scene 27 Duration 04 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 143/277 Vernon: it WORKED BROOK IT WORKED
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    RTW Thedeal Page 146/277 Vernon: Brook?
  59. Scene 28 Duration 02 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 147/277 Kisco: THE SACRIFICE!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 148/277 Vernon: A sacrifice?
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    RTW Thedeal Page 149/277 Vernon: I didn't think we-
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    RTW Thedeal Page 150/277 Kisco: A SACRIFICEEEEEE!!!!!!
  63. Scene 31 Duration 04 00 Panel 4 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 154/277 Kisco: YOU!
  64. Scene 32 Duration 02 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 156/277 Kisco: You will do.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 157/277 Brook: NO! NO! WHAT IS HAPPENING!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 159/277 Vernon: NO! THAT’S NOT-!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 160/277 Vernon: PUT HER DOWN! PUT HER DOWN!PUT HER DOW-
  68. Scene 34 Duration 03 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 162/277 Brook: NOOO! YOU-
  69. Scene 35 Duration 01 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 164/277 Vernon: WE TAKE IT BACK! GO BACK!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 165/277 Vernon: NO SACRIFICE!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 167/277 Vernon: NO!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 168/277 Vernon: NO!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 169/277 Vernon: NO!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 170/277 Vernon: NO!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 171/277 Vernon: NO!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 187/277 Officer: Open up! We know you’re in there.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 188/277 (Banging on the door)
  78. Scene 44 Duration 03 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 196/277 Officer: We’re breaking in!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 201/277 Officer: Vernon Kang, you are under arrest for unwarranted demonic activities and treason against the Hexagon.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 202/277 Vernon: No!
  81. Scene 47 Duration 02 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 203/277 Vernon: You don't understand.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 204/277 Vernon: I-
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    RTW Thedeal Page 213/277 Vernon: YOU!
  84. Scene 53 Duration 02 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 216/277 Kisco: Huh?
  85. Scene 54 Duration 02 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 217/277 Vernon: I NEVER SAID YOU COULD TAKE BROOK LIKE THAT!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 219/277 Kisco: Uhh–h-hhh…
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    RTW Thedeal Page 220/277 Kisco: Who's Brook?
  88. Scene 56 Duration 02 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 221/277 Vernon: THE GIRL YOU FUCKING INCINERATED IN FRONT OF ME! USE YOUR GOD POWERS OR SOMETHING AND BRING HER BACK!
  89. Scene 57 Duration 03 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 223/277 Kisco: Y-y-y-you were the first to summon me successfully in w-w-who knows how long…
  90. Scene 57 Duration 03 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 224/277 Kisco: I-i just did what I had to to complete the deal.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 225/277 Vernon: WHAT DEAL?!
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    RTW Thedeal Page 226/277 Kisco: For my power…
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    RTW Thedeal Page 227/277 Kisco: You need to give up a sacrifice...
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    RTW Thedeal Page 228/277 Vernon: This is fucking stupid.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 229/277 Vernon: This is so unfair
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    RTW Thedeal Page 230/277 Vernon: How did I not see this coming?
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    RTW Thedeal Page 232/277 Kisco: … i-i can bring her back.
  98. Scene 61 Duration 03 00 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 233/277 Vernon: …Then do it. What are you waiting for.
  99. Scene 62 Duration 03 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 234/277 Kisco: b-b-but we need to make another deal… a-and the-there is something i need you to do for me…
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    RTW Thedeal Page 237/277 Vernon: Anything… I’ll do anything.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 238/277 Kisco: y-you know you-your six l-leaders?
  102. Scene 64 Duration 02 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 239/277 Kisco: Um…um…uh… those are my older siblings… ha…ha…
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    RTW Thedeal Page 240/277 Vernon: What the hell? What about them?
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    RTW Thedeal Page 241/277 Kisco: I...
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    RTW Thedeal Page 242/277 Kisco: I need you to get rid of them.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 243/277 Vernon: What? Like?
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    RTW Thedeal Page 244/277 Vernon: Kill them?
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    RTW Thedeal Page 245/277 Kisco: Whatever you have to do.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 246/277 Kisco: Use my power, and bring them down.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 247/277 Kisco: Now is my chance to destroy them.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 248/277 (Vernon sighs)
  112. Scene 70 Duration 03 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 249/277 Vernon: Well… I don’t really like to get political but…
  113. Scene 70 Duration 03 00 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 250/277 Vernon: if that means I can get Brook back… it’s a deal…
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    RTW Thedeal Page 256/277 Interrogator: You’ve committed a grave crime, Vernon Kang. Explain yourself.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 257/277 Vernon: I don’t know what you want me to say.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 258/277 Vernon: I just have some great interior design skills.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 261/277 Interrogator: NONSENSE! Do not play with me. Do not waste my time.
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    RTW Thedeal Page 264/277 Interrogator: Maybe you need some time to think before-
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    RTW Thedeal Page 267/277 Interrogator: Wha-
  120. Scene 82 Duration 03 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 275/277 Vernon: (panting)
  121. Scene 82 Duration 03 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    RTW Thedeal Page 276/277 Vernon: Kisco...