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Phoebe 'n Jay: "Took Him Long Enough"

Phoebe 'n Jay: "Took Him Long Enough"

Personal project. Paranormal romantic-comedy based on a story, script, and characters by Tony Ibarra.

Teen wolf Jay Bark meets a free-spirited, old-fashioned sheep girl named Phoebe Wool. While Jay confronts the ghosts in his closet, so does Phoebe... because she IS a ghost.

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April 15, 2025
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  1. Scene 6 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 02:00 Dialog JAY

    BARK Just run away together. 'Phoebe and Jay', two twerp youngsters out on the open road.
  2. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:12 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL Truth be told, I've honestly been enjoying my time here.
  3. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:12 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) Thanks to you, I... I never thought it'd be great here.
  4. Scene 11 Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:12 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) It's been tickling my brain for a bit, but I was thinking...
  5. Scene 11 Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:12 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) Maybe, I could have a life here.
  6. Scene 11 Duration 08:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) [...] So much to see[...]
  7. Scene 15 Duration 05:12 Panel 4 Duration 01:12 Dialog JAY

    BARK (cont) [...] I'm a pretty lonely guy, sooo...
  8. Scene 18 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Dialog JAY

    BARK (cont) We can be lonely together.
  9. Scene 19 Duration 03:12 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog JAY

    BARK If you want, you can start by...
  10. Scene 20 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Dialog JAY

    BARK (cont) ... You going to the dance with me?
  11. Scene 22 Duration 03:12 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Dialog JAY

    BARK That old goat of yours made me promise to show you a good time.
  12. Scene 23 Duration 14:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Dialog DAMIEN

    GRIZZ Ayyyy, he finally did it! Action Notes Damien claps.
  13. Scene 23 Duration 14:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog DAMIEN

    GRIZZ (cont) Took long enough! Action Notes Jay snarls.
  14. Scene 23 Duration 14:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Dialog JEAN

    VIX Knew you had in you[...] Action Notes Jean's finger twirls.
  15. Scene 23 Duration 14:00 Panel 13 Duration 01:00 Dialog JEAN

    VIX (cont) [...] big dude. Action Notes Jean points her finger at Jay.
  16. Scene 27 Duration 02:20 Panel 2 Duration 00:04 Action Notes

    Phoebe begins to violently vibrate the car out of excitement.
  17. Scene 27 Duration 02:20 Panel 3 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  18. Scene 27 Duration 02:20 Panel 4 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  19. Scene 27 Duration 02:20 Panel 5 Duration 00:06 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  20. Scene 27 Duration 02:20 Panel 6 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  21. Scene 27 Duration 02:20 Panel 7 Duration 00:10 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  22. Scene 28 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 00:07 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  23. Scene 28 Duration 01:00 Panel 2 Duration 00:09 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  24. Scene 28 Duration 01:00 Panel 3 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  25. Scene 29 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  26. Scene 29 Duration 01:00 Panel 2 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  27. Scene 29 Duration 01:00 Panel 3 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  28. Scene 30 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 00:07 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  29. Scene 30 Duration 01:00 Panel 2 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  30. Scene 30 Duration 01:00 Panel 3 Duration 00:09 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  31. Scene 31 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 00:09 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  32. Scene 31 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  33. Scene 31 Duration 02:00 Panel 3 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  34. Scene 31 Duration 02:00 Panel 4 Duration 00:07 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  35. Scene 31 Duration 02:00 Panel 5 Duration 00:07 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  36. Scene 31 Duration 02:00 Panel 6 Duration 00:09 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (O.S.) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  37. Scene 32 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  38. Scene 32 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 00:07 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  39. Scene 32 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  40. Scene 32 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 00:08 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
  41. Scene 32 Duration 04:00 Panel 5 Duration 02:17 Dialog PHOEBE

    WOOL (cont) (screaming) Ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh