sorry, but we have to move back. Notes SFX: Clock ticking Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 4 Duration 04:00 Dialog It’s going to be hard but once you settle down, it’ll be a breeze. Action Notes Dayang hair strands will fall, as she looks down slightly. Notes SFX: Clock ticking Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 5 Duration 03:00 Dialog DAD (muffled):And you don’t need to worry about the language, it’s very easy to pick up! And… (FADES OUT) Action Notes CAMERA: SLOW PUSH IN FYP_OUTSIDER Page 2/34
Muffled voices, then fades to a ringing tone. Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Ringing stops the moment she looks up. Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 8 Duration 03:00 Notes CUTS TO Dayang in a different setting. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 3/34
The clock hand moves to 10:00 am and the school bell rings. Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Camera cuts to Dayang looking out, and hears whispers. Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Camera pans to the left. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 4/34
Dayang walks in front of the camera. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Mother sighs as the door closes off camera. Notes SFX: Door closing. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes FADE TO BLACK FYP_OUTSIDER Page 7/34
FADE TRANSITION to Dayang's feet walking. Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 2 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Dayang is walking Notes BG: Malaysia Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 3 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Dayang is walking, but now in her UK uniform. Notes BG: UK FYP_OUTSIDER Page 8/34
UK Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang looks up when she hears her UK friends calling her name. Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Dialog "Dayang! We'll miss you!" FYP_OUTSIDER Page 10/34
that UK girl right?" Action Notes The moment Dayang turns her head, the scene cuts to the real world, and Dayang sees Suri sitting next to her. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 FYP_OUTSIDER Page 12/34
Dayang nods. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Dialog The name’s Suri! I always see you here during break, so I just wanted to say hi! Action Notes She gives a peace sign to Dayang Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang turns her head and blushes a little, feeling a little awkward with being called “UK girl” but at the same time, a little grateful someone was looking out for her. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 13/34
I can’t speak Malay that well, so I’m… you know… but… everyone assumes I can’t understand them, when I hear them talk behind me… Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Suri looks at Dayang sadly. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Dialog Oh, trust me, I know. They don’t like anything different here. But hey! I don’t think it’s a problem! FYP_OUTSIDER Page 14/34
And… I have a name. My name is Dayang. Action Notes Dayang blushes, turning back to Suri. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 11 Duration 02:00 Dialog Nice to meet you, Dayang! Action Notes Suri smiles Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 12 Duration 03:00 Notes Colour palette changes, to show the two have found each other because of their differences. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 15/34
SHOT OF the girls ordering popcorns and drinks. Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Notes CAMERA PANS slowly of the establishing shot. Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Action Notes The girls are enjoying the film together. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 16/34
The train zooms in the establishing shot. Scene 11 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Notes HIGH ANGLE SHOT of the girls in the train. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Notes CUT TO the next scene of the the aquarium. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 17/34
Dayang runs into the shot. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Suri follows behind her. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 4 Duration 03:00 Slugging FADE TRANSITION to them sightseeing a shark. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 18/34
POV Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Notes CLOSE UP SHOT of DAYANG watching the fishes. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 7 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Suri's hands appear in camera as she places the clip on. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 19/34
Dayang's hand moves slightly to the clip to touch it. Notes CUT TO medium shot. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 12 Duration 02:00 Notes CUT TO MEDIUM SHOT of Suri smiling. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 13 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Suri grins. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 21/34
Dayang blinks. Notes CLOSE MID SHOT. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 15 Duration 02:00 Action Notes And smiles. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 1 Duration 03:00 Notes TRANSITION FADE CUT TO NEXT SCENE. HIGH ANGLE SHOT. SLOW PAN TO THE LEFT. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 22/34
PAN TO THE RIGHT of the group judging her and Suri. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes She starts feeling awkward. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 7 Duration 02:00 FYP_OUTSIDER Page 24/34
She looms down. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Suri notices Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Action Notes And turns to the group. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 25/34
She glares. Notes CLOSE UP SHOT. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Action Notes The group notices. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 13 Duration 02:00 Action Notes They turn away. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 26/34
TO Suri still glaring at the group, but with Dayang watching the scene unfold. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 15 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang smiles, knowing that she is no longer alone. Scene 14 Duration 11:00 Panel 1 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Bus leaves the scene and Dayang is seen waving at the bus. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 27/34
SFX: Door opens and closes Scene 14 Duration 11:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Instead of walking, Dayang runs into her room, smiling. Scene 14 Duration 11:00 Panel 4 Duration 04:00 Action Notes Father and mother comes out of the kitchen and smiles at each other, knowing that everything's going to be ok. Notes SFX: Door closing. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 28/34
TO BLACK. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Notes TRANSITION FADE TO NEXT SCENE SLOW PAN TO THE RIGHT ESTABLISHING SHOT of their dorm room. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang is putting on her earing, getting ready for class, and we can see time has passed. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 29/34
Dayang's gaze shifts to something off screen. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes She looks at it. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Action Notes It's a picture frame of her friends in the UK. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 30/34
She smiles fondly at the it. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog (Off screen) Suri: Cepat sikit laa Action Notes Before turning back her gaze at the mirror. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog Suri: You ready or not? Notes CAMERA PANS UP from mid waist. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 31/34
You ready or not? Notes CAMERA PANS UP from mid waist. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 10 Duration 02:00 Dialog Dayang: (GRINS AND LAUGHS) Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 11 Duration 00:05 FYP_OUTSIDER Page 32/34
SCREEN) SURI: Yah la, yah la! Cepat! Action Notes Dayang exits the screen. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 16 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Dayang walks out of the scene. Dayang’s dressing table is still in the scene. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 17 Duration 01:00 Notes CUTS TO BLACK. FIN FYP_OUTSIDER Page 34/34
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