Outsider (final year project storyboard)

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1. FYP_OUTSIDER
2. Scene 1 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 03:00 Action Notes SLOW PUSH IN Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Notes Dayang is introduced. Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Action Notes DAYANG'S POV: her hands fidgets. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 1/34
3. Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 3 Duration 03:00 Dialog I’m sorry, but we have to move back. Notes SFX: Clock ticking Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 4 Duration 04:00 Dialog It’s going to be hard but once you settle down, it’ll be a breeze. Action Notes Dayang hair strands will fall, as she looks down slightly. Notes SFX: Clock ticking Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 5 Duration 03:00 Dialog DAD (muffled):And you don’t need to worry about the language, it’s very easy to pick up! And… (FADES OUT) Action Notes CAMERA: SLOW PUSH IN FYP_OUTSIDER Page 2/34
4. Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 6 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Muffled voices, then fades to a ringing tone. Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Ringing stops the moment she looks up. Scene 2 Duration 20:00 Panel 8 Duration 03:00 Notes CUTS TO Dayang in a different setting. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 3/34
5. Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Action Notes The clock hand moves to 10:00 am and the school bell rings. Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Camera cuts to Dayang looking out, and hears whispers. Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Camera pans to the left. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 4/34
6. Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 4 Duration 03:00 Dialog SFX: Whispers Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes She sighs and closes her eyes. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 5/34
7. Scene 4 Duration 13:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Scene 5 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 03:00 Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes SFX: Door opens and closes FYP_OUTSIDER Page 6/34
8. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Dayang walks in front of the camera. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Mother sighs as the door closes off camera. Notes SFX: Door closing. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes FADE TO BLACK FYP_OUTSIDER Page 7/34
9. Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 1 Duration 03:00 Action Notes FADE TRANSITION to Dayang's feet walking. Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 2 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Dayang is walking Notes BG: Malaysia Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 3 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Dayang is walking, but now in her UK uniform. Notes BG: UK FYP_OUTSIDER Page 8/34
10. Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 4 Duration 02:00 Notes BG: Malaysia Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Notes BG: UK Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Notes BG: Malaysia FYP_OUTSIDER Page 9/34
11. Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Notes BG: UK Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang looks up when she hears her UK friends calling her name. Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Dialog "Dayang! We'll miss you!" FYP_OUTSIDER Page 10/34
12. Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 10 Duration 02:00 Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Dialog SURI'S VOICE OFF CAMERA: Hey! Scene 7 Duration 22:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 FYP_OUTSIDER Page 11/34
13. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Dialog "You're that UK girl right?" Action Notes The moment Dayang turns her head, the scene cuts to the real world, and Dayang sees Suri sitting next to her. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 FYP_OUTSIDER Page 12/34
14. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 4 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Dayang nods. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Dialog The name’s Suri! I always see you here during break, so I just wanted to say hi! Action Notes She gives a peace sign to Dayang Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang turns her head and blushes a little, feeling a little awkward with being called “UK girl” but at the same time, a little grateful someone was looking out for her. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 13/34
15. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 7 Duration 02:00 Dialog Thanks… I can’t speak Malay that well, so I’m… you know… but… everyone assumes I can’t understand them, when I hear them talk behind me… Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Suri looks at Dayang sadly. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Dialog Oh, trust me, I know. They don’t like anything different here. But hey! I don’t think it’s a problem! FYP_OUTSIDER Page 14/34
16. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 10 Duration 02:00 Dialog (HESITANTLY) And… I have a name. My name is Dayang. Action Notes Dayang blushes, turning back to Suri. Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 11 Duration 02:00 Dialog Nice to meet you, Dayang! Action Notes Suri smiles Scene 8 Duration 22:00 Panel 12 Duration 03:00 Notes Colour palette changes, to show the two have found each other because of their differences. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 15/34
17. Scene 9 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Notes MID SHOT OF the girls ordering popcorns and drinks. Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Notes CAMERA PANS slowly of the establishing shot. Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Action Notes The girls are enjoying the film together. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 16/34
18. Scene 11 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Action Notes The train zooms in the establishing shot. Scene 11 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Notes HIGH ANGLE SHOT of the girls in the train. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Notes CUT TO the next scene of the the aquarium. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 17/34
19. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang runs into the shot. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Suri follows behind her. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 4 Duration 03:00 Slugging FADE TRANSITION to them sightseeing a shark. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 18/34
20. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Notes SURI'S POV Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Notes CLOSE UP SHOT of DAYANG watching the fishes. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 7 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Suri's hands appear in camera as she places the clip on. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 19/34
21. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Suri's hands exit the shot. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang turns. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 20/34
22. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 11 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Dayang's hand moves slightly to the clip to touch it. Notes CUT TO medium shot. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 12 Duration 02:00 Notes CUT TO MEDIUM SHOT of Suri smiling. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 13 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Suri grins. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 21/34
23. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 14 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Dayang blinks. Notes CLOSE MID SHOT. Scene 12 Duration 27:00 Panel 15 Duration 02:00 Action Notes And smiles. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 1 Duration 03:00 Notes TRANSITION FADE CUT TO NEXT SCENE. HIGH ANGLE SHOT. SLOW PAN TO THE LEFT. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 22/34
24. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 2 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Dayang laughs. Notes MID CLOSE UP SHOT Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Her eyes gazes off camera. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 23/34
25. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Notes SLOW PAN TO THE RIGHT of the group judging her and Suri. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes She starts feeling awkward. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 7 Duration 02:00 FYP_OUTSIDER Page 24/34
26. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 8 Duration 02:00 Action Notes She looms down. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Suri notices Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Action Notes And turns to the group. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 25/34
27. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 11 Duration 02:00 Action Notes She glares. Notes CLOSE UP SHOT. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Action Notes The group notices. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 13 Duration 02:00 Action Notes They turn away. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 26/34
28. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 14 Duration 01:00 Notes CUT TO Suri still glaring at the group, but with Dayang watching the scene unfold. Scene 13 Duration 24:00 Panel 15 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang smiles, knowing that she is no longer alone. Scene 14 Duration 11:00 Panel 1 Duration 03:00 Action Notes Bus leaves the scene and Dayang is seen waving at the bus. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 27/34
29. Scene 14 Duration 11:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes SFX: Door opens and closes Scene 14 Duration 11:00 Panel 3 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Instead of walking, Dayang runs into her room, smiling. Scene 14 Duration 11:00 Panel 4 Duration 04:00 Action Notes Father and mother comes out of the kitchen and smiles at each other, knowing that everything's going to be ok. Notes SFX: Door closing. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 28/34
30. Scene 14 Duration 11:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Notes CUT TO BLACK. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 1 Duration 02:00 Notes TRANSITION FADE TO NEXT SCENE SLOW PAN TO THE RIGHT ESTABLISHING SHOT of their dorm room. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang is putting on her earing, getting ready for class, and we can see time has passed. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 29/34
31. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Dayang's gaze shifts to something off screen. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes She looks at it. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Action Notes It's a picture frame of her friends in the UK. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 30/34
32. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes She smiles fondly at the it. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog (Off screen) Suri: Cepat sikit laa Action Notes Before turning back her gaze at the mirror. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog Suri: You ready or not? Notes CAMERA PANS UP from mid waist. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 31/34
33. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Dialog Suri: You ready or not? Notes CAMERA PANS UP from mid waist. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 10 Duration 02:00 Dialog Dayang: (GRINS AND LAUGHS) Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 11 Duration 00:05 FYP_OUTSIDER Page 32/34
34. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 12 Duration 00:05 Dialog "Ah bangun lambat lagi." Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 13 Duration 02:00 Dialog "Ah bangun lambat lagi." Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 14 Duration 01:00 Dialog DAYANG: Next time set alarm la! Action Notes Dayang gets up. FYP_OUTSIDER Page 33/34
35. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 15 Duration 01:00 Dialog (OFF SCREEN) SURI: Yah la, yah la! Cepat! Action Notes Dayang exits the screen. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 16 Duration 02:00 Action Notes Dayang walks out of the scene. Dayang’s dressing table is still in the scene. Scene 14 Duration 21:10 Panel 17 Duration 01:00 Notes CUTS TO BLACK. FIN FYP_OUTSIDER Page 34/34