Upgrade to Pro — share decks privately, control downloads, hide ads and more …

Elmira

 Elmira

A mostly true story.

Noah Allen

April 04, 2022
Tweet

Transcript

  1. Scene 1 Duration 02:22 Panel 2 Duration 00:15 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 2/159
  2. Scene 1 Duration 02:22 Panel 3 Duration 00:15 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 3/159
  3. Scene 1 Duration 02:22 Panel 4 Duration 00:16 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 4/159
  4. Scene 2 Duration 02:03 Panel 1 Duration 00:15 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 5/159
  5. Scene 2 Duration 02:03 Panel 2 Duration 00:14 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 6/159
  6. Scene 2 Duration 02:03 Panel 3 Duration 00:12 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 7/159
  7. Scene 2 Duration 02:03 Panel 4 Duration 00:10 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 8/159
  8. Scene 3 Duration 02:22 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 9/159
  9. Scene 3 Duration 02:22 Panel 2 Duration 00:06 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 10/159
  10. Scene 3 Duration 02:22 Panel 3 Duration 00:06 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 11/159
  11. Scene 3 Duration 02:22 Panel 4 Duration 00:07 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 12/159
  12. Scene 3 Duration 02:22 Panel 5 Duration 00:07 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 13/159
  13. Scene 3 Duration 02:22 Panel 6 Duration 00:08 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 14/159
  14. Scene 3 Duration 02:22 Panel 7 Duration 00:12 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 15/159
  15. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 1 Duration 00:10 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 16/159
  16. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 2 Duration 00:10 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 17/159
  17. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 3 Duration 00:10 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 18/159
  18. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 4 Duration 00:14 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 19/159
  19. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 5 Duration 00:13 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 20/159
  20. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 6 Duration 00:14 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 21/159
  21. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 7 Duration 00:14 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 22/159
  22. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 8 Duration 00:21 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 23/159
  23. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    It's so nice of you and your friend to come visit me. I stopped eating sweets after my last heart attack. So I hope you don't mind sugar free cookies. Elmira Page 24/159
  24. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 10 Duration 00:14 Dialog Noah:

    Thanks Nana, we're happy to come visit. Elmira Page 25/159
  25. Scene 4 Duration 06:14 Panel 11 Duration 00:14 Dialog Noah:

    Thanks Nana, we're happy to come visit. Elmira Page 26/159
  26. Scene 5 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Noah:

    Thanks Nana, we're happy to come visit. Elmira Page 27/159
  27. Scene 6 Duration 06:08 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Bart:

    Thank you Mrs. Beasley Elmira Page 30/159
  28. Scene 6 Duration 06:08 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    Take care of your body and -- Elmira Page 37/159
  29. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    Take care of your body and -- Elmira Page 38/159
  30. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    Take care of your body and -- Elmira Page 39/159
  31. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 5 Duration 01:09 Dialog Noah:

    Nana? Whats wrong? Elmira Page 42/159
  32. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    Oh just my old heart throwing a fit. Nothing to worry about. Elmira Page 43/159
  33. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    Oh just my old heart throwing a fit. Nothing to worry about. Elmira Page 44/159
  34. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    Give me a hand wont ya? Elmira Page 45/159
  35. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 9 Duration 00:14 Dialog Nana:

    Give me a hand wont ya? Elmira Page 46/159
  36. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 10 Duration 00:13 Dialog Nana:

    Give me a hand wont ya? Elmira Page 47/159
  37. Scene 7 Duration 09:12 Panel 11 Duration 00:11 Dialog Nana:

    Give me a hand wont ya? Elmira Page 48/159
  38. Scene 9 Duration 12:14 Panel 2 Duration 00:08 Dialog Nana:

    Be a sweetie and fetch me my nitro pills Elmira Page 53/159
  39. Scene 9 Duration 12:14 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Nana:

    Be a sweetie and fetch me my nitro pills Elmira Page 54/159
  40. Scene 9 Duration 12:14 Panel 4 Duration 01:14 Dialog Nana:

    Be a sweetie and fetch me my nitro pills Elmira Page 55/159
  41. Scene 9 Duration 12:14 Panel 5 Duration 02:00 Dialog Nana:

    They're on the Hutch just over there. Elmira Page 56/159
  42. Scene 10 Duration 15:20 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Dialog Noah:

    I think this is it! Elmira Page 75/159
  43. Scene 10 Duration 15:20 Panel 14 Duration 00:12 Dialog Noah:

    Nitroglycerin, right Nana? Elmira Page 78/159
  44. Scene 10 Duration 15:20 Panel 15 Duration 01:09 Dialog Noah:

    Nitroglycerin, right Nana? Elmira Page 79/159
  45. Scene 10 Duration 15:20 Panel 16 Duration 01:00 Dialog Noah:

    Nitroglycerin, right Nana? Elmira Page 80/159
  46. Scene 10 Duration 15:20 Panel 17 Duration 00:10 Dialog Noah:

    Nitroglycerin, right Nana? Elmira Page 81/159
  47. Scene 10 Duration 15:20 Panel 18 Duration 00:09 Dialog Noah:

    Nitroglycerin, right Nana? Elmira Page 82/159
  48. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Noah:

    Nana! Are you okay?? Elmira Page 91/159
  49. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog Bart:

    Well check if she's breathing dude! Elmira Page 94/159
  50. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog Noah:

    She's not breathing! Elmira Page 97/159
  51. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog Noah:

    She's not breathing! Elmira Page 98/159
  52. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 10 Duration 01:18 Dialog Bart:

    Okay, I'll call 911, you give her CPR. Elmira Page 99/159
  53. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 18 Duration 01:00 Dialog I

    need a place to put this out! Elmira Page 107/159
  54. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 20 Duration 01:00 Dialog Her

    heart stopped dude! Elmira Page 109/159
  55. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 21 Duration 01:00 Dialog Her

    heart stopped dude! Elmira Page 110/159
  56. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 60 Duration 01:18 Dialog Nana:

    Hahaha Did I faint again? Elmira Page 149/159
  57. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 61 Duration 01:01 Dialog Nana:

    Hahaha Did I faint again? Elmira Page 150/159
  58. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 65 Duration 00:10 Dialog Nana:

    I'm sorry dears. I should have warned you that might happen. Elmira Page 154/159
  59. Scene 12 Duration 56:11 Panel 66 Duration 00:09 Dialog Nana:

    I'm sorry dears. I should have warned you that might happen. Elmira Page 155/159
  60. Scene 13 Duration 06:20 Panel 1 Duration 01:13 Dialog Bart:

    Um, never mind, she's fine. Elmira Page 156/159
  61. Scene 13 Duration 06:20 Panel 3 Duration 01:11 Dialog Nana:

    He'll be fine. Now where'd my cigarette go? Elmira Page 158/159
  62. Scene 13 Duration 06:20 Panel 4 Duration 02:09 Dialog Nana:

    He'll be fine. Now where'd my cigarette go? Elmira Page 159/159