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Swiss Vs. Monterey Jackie!

Swiss Vs. Monterey Jackie!

Swiss the Cowboy, with his trusty steed, Provolone, meets up with an old friend at a local saloon to receive more info about the whereabouts of The Golden Cheese! But unknown to them, they find themselves face to face with another who also seeks out a piece...but first, they'd like to play a game.

Comedy piece created during the Story Foundations course under Jed Diffenderfer.

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May 15, 2026

Transcript

  1. Scene 10 Panel 1 Notes EXT. NIGHT PROVOLONE and SWISS

    approach a saloon. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 1/328
  2. Scene 20 Panel 2 Dialog PROVOLONE (P): You sure Sal's

    going to be here? RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 6/328
  3. Scene 20 Panel 6 Dialog SWISS (S): Yeah! I had

    him close early so we can negotiate. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 13/328
  4. Scene 50 Panel 3 Dialog MONTEREY JACKIE (MJ) : Gouda

    see ya... RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 29/328
  5. Scene 90 Panel 3 Dialog S: And the CATTERSNAKE GANG...

    RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 49/328
  6. Scene 130 Panel 2 Dialog MJ: WHAT? NO! I had

    him leave early, and closed shop for him. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 68/328
  7. Scene 150 Panel 3 Dialog MJ: But he's taking THE

    GRAVEYARD SHIFT! RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 78/328
  8. Scene 160 Panel 3 Dialog S: NO! THAT'S EVEN WORSE!

    RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 81/328
  9. Scene 170 Panel 6 Dialog S: In that case, why

    are you here? RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 90/328
  10. Scene 170 Panel 8 Dialog It was supposed to be

    me and him. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 92/328
  11. Scene 180 Panel 1 Dialog MJ: B/c he didn't call

    you... RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 93/328
  12. Scene 200 Panel 6 Dialog MJ: Ah, ah--first you need

    to do something for me. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 105/328
  13. Scene 210 Panel 1 Notes MJ puts the slice around

    her neck. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 109/328
  14. Scene 220 Panel 2 Dialog And what makes you think

    I have a piece? RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 118/328
  15. Scene 230 Panel 1 Dialog MJ: Well, we can play

    a different game if you'd like? RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 119/328
  16. Scene 240 Panel 3 Notes The CATTERSNAKE BANDITS dump two

    bags worth of CATTERSNAKES. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 124/328
  17. Scene 250 Panel 5 Dialog S: G-G-Got it...I'll play your

    game. Your piece for my piece. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 129/328
  18. Scene 270 Panel 2 Notes CATTERSNAKE BANDIT calls the snakes

    back. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 134/328
  19. Scene 270 Panel 7 Dialog Let's have a good game!

    RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 139/328
  20. Scene 270 Panel 8 Notes SWISS puts down his poker

    chips. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 140/328
  21. Scene 470 Panel 3 Dialog anything else you want to

    bet before you give up that piece? RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 227/328
  22. Scene 480 Panel 3 Dialog S: ..What happens if I

    say no again? RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 230/328
  23. Scene 490 Panel 2 Dialog MJ: Then you can kiss

    more than that piece goodbye! RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 232/328
  24. Scene 500 Panel 3 Dialog I don't have anything to

    bet-- RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 238/328
  25. Scene 500 Panel 4 Dialog you've taken everything except my

    DIGNITY. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 239/328
  26. Scene 510 Panel 8 Notes The CATTERSNAKE wraps itself around

    SWISS. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 247/328
  27. Scene 520 Panel 2 Dialog MJ: Kiss the CATTERSNAKE, and

    I'll let you leave. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 250/328
  28. Scene 530 Panel 1 Dialog MJ: OS. Well? Time's a

    wastin'. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 255/328
  29. Scene 567 Panel 1 Dialog Yeahhh...that's what happens when you

    put the egg first... RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 267/328
  30. Scene 567 Panel 4 Dialog He should be out by

    now! RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 270/328
  31. Scene 570 Panel 4 Dialog P: SWISS! Did you get

    the piece yet?! I've been waiting all-- RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 274/328
  32. Scene 580 Panel 3 Dialog MJ: Who the hell is

    that?! RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 281/328
  33. Scene 590 Panel 5 Notes SWISS gains his strength and

    chokes the CATTERSNAKE. RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 287/328
  34. Scene 600 Panel 13 Dialog SWISS: Oh nice! Real deal!

    RDoda_SwissMJShowdown_Final_v01 Page 306/328