Camp Spooky - Revision Red Lines Sample 2

An example of redlines given to revisionist for clean up including acting notes, re-posing, and correcting eye direction.

See the finished short on Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JY-IazWYp9E

Transcript

1. Scene 026 Panel 1 Dialog GOOFY <struggling efforts> Action Notes
2. Scene 026 Panel 2 Dialog GOOFY <struggling efforts> Action Notes
3. Scene 026 Panel 3 Dialog GOOFY <struggling efforts> Action Notes
4. Scene 026 Panel 4 Dialog GOOFY <struggling efforts> Action Notes
5. Scene 026 Panel 5 Dialog GOOFY <struggling efforts> Action Notes
6. Scene 026 Panel 6 Dialog GOOFY <struggling efforts> Action Notes
7. Scene 026 Panel 7 Dialog GOOFY <struggling efforts> Action Notes
8. Scene 026 Panel 8 Dialog GOOFY <struggling efforts> Action Notes
9. Scene 027 Panel 1 Dialog GOOFY Whoa! Action Notes
10. Scene 027 Panel 2 Dialog Action Notes
11. Scene 027 Panel 3 Dialog Action Notes
12. Scene 027 Panel 4 Dialog Action Notes
13. Scene 027 Panel 5 Dialog GOOFY Whoa! Action Notes
14. Scene 027 Panel 6 Dialog Action Notes
15. Scene 027 Panel 7 Dialog Action Notes
16. Scene 028 Panel 1 Dialog Action Notes
17. Scene 028 Panel 2 Dialog Action Notes
18. Scene 028 Panel 3 Dialog GOOFY <coughing, spitting> Action Notes
19. Scene 028 Panel 4 Dialog GOOFY <coughing, spitting> Action Notes
20. Scene 028 Panel 5 Dialog GOOFY <coughing, spitting> Action Notes
21. Scene 028 Panel 6 Dialog GOOFY Whoa! Action Notes
22. Scene 028 Panel 7 Dialog GOOFY Whoa! Action Notes
23. Scene 028 Panel 8 Dialog Action Notes
24. Scene 029 Panel 1 Dialog Action Notes
25. Scene 029 Panel 2 Dialog Action Notes
26. Scene 029 Panel 3 Dialog Action Notes
27. Scene 029 Panel 4 Dialog Action Notes
28. Scene 029 Panel 5 Dialog Action Notes
29. Scene 030 Panel 1 Dialog GOOFY <coughing> What happened? Action Notes
30. Scene 030 Panel 2 Dialog GOOFY <coughing> What happened? Action Notes
31. Scene 030 Panel 3 Dialog GOOFY <coughing> What happened? Action Notes
32. Scene 030 Panel 4 Dialog GOOFY <coughing> What happened? Action Notes
33. Scene 030 Panel 5 Dialog GOOFY <coughing> Action Notes
34. Scene 030 Panel 6 Dialog GOOFY <coughing> Action Notes
35. Scene 030 Panel 7 Dialog GOOFY where am I? Action Notes
36. Scene 030 Panel 8 Dialog GOOFY where am I? Action Notes
37. Scene 030 Panel 9 Dialog GOOFY where am I? Action Notes
38. Scene 030 Panel 10 Dialog Action Notes
39. Scene 030 Panel 11 Dialog Action Notes
40. Scene 030 Panel 12 Dialog CUCKOO Goofy? Action Notes
41. Scene 030 Panel 13 Dialog CUCKOO Goofy? Action Notes
42. Scene 030 Panel 14 Dialog CUCKOO Goofy? Action Notes
43. Scene 030 Panel 15 Dialog CUCKOO Goofy? Action Notes
44. Scene 030 Panel 16 Dialog CUCKOO Goofy? Action Notes
45. Scene 030 Panel 17 Dialog CUCKOO Goofy? Action Notes
46. Scene 031 Panel 1 Dialog CUCKOO Hello? Action Notes
47. Scene 031 Panel 2 Dialog CUCKOO Hello? Action Notes
48. Scene 031 Panel 3 Dialog CUCKOO Hello? Action Notes
49. Scene 031 Panel 4 Dialog CUCKOO Hello? Action Notes
50. Scene 031 Panel 5 Dialog CUCKOO Hello? Action Notes
51. Scene 031 Panel 6 Dialog CUCKOO Hello? Action Notes
52. Scene 031 Panel 7 Dialog Action Notes
53. Scene 031 Panel 8 Dialog Action Notes
54. Scene 031 Panel 9 Dialog Action Notes
55. Scene 031 Panel 10 Dialog Action Notes
56. Scene 031 Panel 11 Dialog Action Notes
57. Scene 031 Panel 12 Dialog Action Notes
58. Scene 031 Panel 13 Dialog Action Notes