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Roommates Revision based on critique

Revision based off the critique i got from professionals and from my classmates in senior studios.

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  1. roommates Duration: 00 02 15 01 Date: July 09 2024

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  6. Dialog RUBY: Sighs

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  11. Dialog RUBY: This wont do.

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  16. Dialog SFX: echoing steps

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  18. Dialog CINDY: Groans

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  23. Dialog SFX: Key unlocking door

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  27. Dialog SFX: Door opens

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  29. Dialog RUBY: hey

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  32. Dialog RUBY: How did your

  33. Dialog RUBY: day

  34. Dialog RUBY: Go?

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  39. Dialog CINDY: It

  40. Dialog CINDY: It

  41. Dialog CINDY: was,

  42. Dialog CINDY: It was fine

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  55. Dialog RUBY sfx: Takes a deep breath.

  56. Dialog RUBY: so are we going to talk about it?

  57. Dialog CINDY: Can we do this tomorrow,

  58. Dialog CINDY: ive got this huge test tomorrow

  59. Dialog CINDY: I gotta

  60. Dialog CINDY: study

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  67. Dialog RUBY HUFFS

  68. Dialog RUBY: you said that yesterday

  69. Dialog RUBY: the day before.

  70. Dialog RUBY: I waited all day to talk to you.

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  75. Dialog CINDY: I said

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  77. Dialog CINDY:I said I dont have

  78. Dialog CINDY: Time

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  90. Dialog RUBY: I Dont want to see my friend wither

    away!

  91. Dialog CINDY: What do you mean,

  92. Dialog CINDY: im FINE.

  93. Dialog RUBY: does this look fine?

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  97. Dialog RUBY: you told me

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  99. Dialog RUBY: to

  100. Dialog RUBY: Look out for you

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  103. Dialog RUBY: to encourage you

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  106. Dialog RUBY: but its

  107. Dialog RUBY: been

  108. Dialog RUBY: 6 weeks

  109. Dialog RUBY: Midterms,

  110. Dialog RUBY: are over

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  112. Dialog RUBY: why cant you

  113. Dialog RUBY: Just

  114. Dialog RUBY: Stop

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  117. Dialog CINDY: Stop taking my problems personally.

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  120. Dialog RUBY: THEN STOP BEING A PROBLEM

  121. Dialog RUBY: FOR

  122. Dialog RUBY: ME!

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  128. Dialog RUBY: Gasps

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  131. Dialog RUBY: Cindy,

  132. Dialog RUBY:: I

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