Song of Achilles Roughs

Patroclus tries to convince Achilles to join the battle and help save the Greeks against the Trojans.

Personal board project, a scene from Song of Achilles.

Maggie Dybas 2021
maggiedybas@gmail.com

Transcript

1. Scene 1 Panel 1 Dialog
2. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 1 Dialog
3. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 2 Dialog
4. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 3 Dialog
5. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 4 Dialog
6. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 5 Dialog
7. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 6 Dialog
8. Scene 1_A_0 Panel 1 Dialog
9. Scene 1_A_0 Panel 2 Dialog
10. Scene 1_A_0 Panel 3 Dialog
11. Scene 1_A Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: What has happened?
12. Scene 1_B Panel 1 Dialog
13. Scene 1_B Panel 2 Dialog PAT: They are dying!
14. Scene 1_B Panel 3 Dialog PAT: The Trojans are in the camp,
15. Scene 1_B Panel 4 Dialog PAT: they are burning ships.
16. Scene 1_B Panel 5 Dialog PAT: they are burning ships.
17. Scene 1_B Panel 6 Dialog PAT: There is no one left but you to save them.
18. Scene 1_B Panel 7 Dialog PAT: There is no one left but you to save them.
19. Scene 1_B Panel 8 Dialog ACHILLES: If they are dying
20. Scene 1_A_0_A Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: it is Agamemnon's fault.
21. Scene 1_A_0_A Panel 2 Dialog
22. Scene 1_A_0_B Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: Odysseus may lick his boots, and all the rest, but I will not.
23. Scene 1_A_0_B_1 Panel 1 Dialog
24. Scene 1_A_0_B_1 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: He will doom himself.
25. Scene 1_A_0_B_1 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: He will doom himself.
26. Scene 1_A_0_B_2 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: Do not let them die because of his madness.
27. Scene 1_A_0_B_2 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: They have loved you and honored you.
28. Scene 1_A_0_B_3 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: Honor me?
29. Scene 1_A_0_B_4 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: I toiled for them for ten years
30. Scene 1_A_0_B_4 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: I toiled for them for ten years
31. Scene 1_A_0_B_4 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: I toiled for them for ten years
32. Scene 1_A_0_B_5 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: and their repayment is to discard me.
33. Scene 1_A_0_B_5 Panel 2 Dialog
34. Scene 1_A_0_B_6 Panel 1 Dialog
35. Scene 1_A_0_B_6 Panel 2 Dialog
36. Scene 1_A_0_B_6 Panel 3 Dialog
37. Scene 4 Panel 1 Dialog
38. Scene 4 Panel 2 Dialog
39. Scene 4 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: They have made their choice
40. Scene 4 Panel 4 Dialog ACHILLES: I shed no tears for them.
41. Scene 4 Panel 5 Dialog PAT:They are foolish, yes, but they are still our people!
42. Scene 4 Panel 6 Dialog PAT:They are foolish, yes, but they are still our people!
43. Scene 10 Panel 1 Dialog
44. Scene 10 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: The Myrmidons are our people.
45. Scene 10 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: The rest can save themselves.
46. Scene 10 Panel 4 Dialog ACHILLES: The rest can save themselves.
47. Scene 10_A Panel 1 Dialog
48. Scene 10_A Panel 2 Dialog
49. Scene 10_A Panel 3 Dialog PAT: You are destroying yourself.
50. Scene 10_A Panel 4 Dialog PAT: You will not be loved for this, you will be hated,
51. Scene 10_A Panel 5 Dialog PAT: cursed!
52. Scene 10_A Panel 6 Dialog PAT: Please
53. Scene 10_A Panel 7 Dialog PAT: if you just-
54. Scene 10_A Panel 8 Dialog ACHILLES: (sharply) Patroclus.
55. Scene 10_A Panel 9 Dialog
56. Scene 10_A_0 Panel 1 Dialog
57. Scene 10_A_0 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: Enough.
58. Scene 13 Panel 1 Dialog
59. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog
60. Scene 15 Panel 1 Dialog
61. Scene 15 Panel 2 Dialog
62. Scene 15 Panel 3 Dialog
63. Scene 16 Panel 1 Dialog
64. Scene 16 Panel 2 Dialog
65. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: For me then. Save them for me.
66. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: I know what I am asking of you. But I ask it. For me.
67. Scene 18 Panel 1 Dialog
68. Scene 18 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: Anything else. Anything. But not this.
69. Scene 19 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: If you loved me-
70. Scene 19 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: No!
71. Scene 16_A Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: Do you think I wish them all to die?
72. Scene 16_A Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: Do you think I wish them all to die?
73. Scene 16_A Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: Do you think I wish them all to die?
74. Scene 20 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: I cannot.
75. Scene 20 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: I will not let him take this from me.
76. Scene 20 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: The do something else.
77. Scene 20 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: Send the myrmidons at least.
78. Scene 20 Panel 5 Dialog PAT: Send me in your place. Put me in your armor
79. Scene 20 Panel 6 Dialog PAT: and I will lead the Myrmidons. They will think it is you!
80. Scene 20 Panel 7 Dialog PAT: and I will lead the Myrmidons. They will think it is you!
81. Scene 10_A_999 Panel 1 Dialog
82. Scene 10_A_999 Panel 2 Dialog
83. Scene 10_A_999 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: But you cannot fight.
84. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 1 Dialog
85. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: Do you see?
86. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: I will not have to!
87. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: They are so frightened of you, if I show myself,
88. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 5 Dialog PAT: They are so frightened of you, if I show myself,
89. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 6 Dialog PAT: they will run.
90. Scene 10_A_1001 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: You will not have to break your oath!
91. Scene 10_A_1001 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: No.
92. Scene 10_A_1001 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: It is too dangerous.
93. Scene 10_A_1001 Panel 4 Dialog ACHILLES: It is too dangerous.
94. Scene 28 Panel 1 Dialog
95. Scene 28 Panel 2 Dialog
96. Scene 29 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: Please.
97. Scene 29 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: If you cannot fight,
98. Scene 29 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: you cannot.
99. Scene 29 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: you cannot.
100. Scene 30 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: Save them this way.
101. Scene 30 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: Save them this way.
102. Scene 30 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: Save them this way.
103. Scene 30_A Panel 1 Dialog PAT: Think!
104. Scene 30_A Panel 2 Dialog PAT: There is no fame greater-
105. Scene 30_A_0 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: your mighty name will save them.
106. Scene 30_A_0 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: They will laugh at Agamemnon's weakness.
107. Scene 30_A_0 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: They will laugh at Agamemnon's weakness.
108. Scene 30_A_0 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: They will laugh at Agamemnon's weakness.
109. Scene 30_A_1 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: Swear to me that if you go, you will not fight them.
110. Scene 30_A_1 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: Swear to me that if you go, you will not fight them.
111. Scene 30_A_1 Panel 3 Dialog
112. Scene 35 Panel 1 Dialog
113. Scene 35 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: You will let me?
114. Scene 35 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: You will let me?
115. Scene 35 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: You will let me?
116. Scene 35 Panel 5 Dialog PAT: You will let me?
117. Scene 35 Panel 6 Dialog PAT: You will let me?
118. Scene 35 Panel 7 Dialog PAT: You will let me?
119. Scene 35 Panel 8 Dialog PAT: You will let me?
120. Scene 35_A Panel 1 Dialog
121. Scene 35_A Panel 2 Dialog
122. Scene 35_A Panel 3 Dialog
123. Scene 35_A Panel 4 Dialog
124. Scene 35_A Panel 5 Dialog
125. Scene 35_A Panel 6 Dialog