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Song of Achilles Roughs

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September 10, 2021

Song of Achilles Roughs

Patroclus tries to convince Achilles to join the battle and help save the Greeks against the Trojans.

Personal board project, a scene from Song of Achilles.

Maggie Dybas 2021
maggiedybas@gmail.com

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September 10, 2021
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  1. Scene 1 Panel 1 Dialog

  2. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 1 Dialog

  3. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 2 Dialog

  4. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 3 Dialog

  5. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 4 Dialog

  6. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 5 Dialog

  7. Scene 1_A_999 Panel 6 Dialog

  8. Scene 1_A_0 Panel 1 Dialog

  9. Scene 1_A_0 Panel 2 Dialog

  10. Scene 1_A_0 Panel 3 Dialog

  11. Scene 1_A Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: What has happened?

  12. Scene 1_B Panel 1 Dialog

  13. Scene 1_B Panel 2 Dialog PAT: They are dying!

  14. Scene 1_B Panel 3 Dialog PAT: The Trojans are in

    the camp,
  15. Scene 1_B Panel 4 Dialog PAT: they are burning ships.

  16. Scene 1_B Panel 5 Dialog PAT: they are burning ships.

  17. Scene 1_B Panel 6 Dialog PAT: There is no one

    left but you to save them.
  18. Scene 1_B Panel 7 Dialog PAT: There is no one

    left but you to save them.
  19. Scene 1_B Panel 8 Dialog ACHILLES: If they are dying

  20. Scene 1_A_0_A Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: it is Agamemnon's fault.

  21. Scene 1_A_0_A Panel 2 Dialog

  22. Scene 1_A_0_B Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: Odysseus may lick his

    boots, and all the rest, but I will not.
  23. Scene 1_A_0_B_1 Panel 1 Dialog

  24. Scene 1_A_0_B_1 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: He will doom himself.

  25. Scene 1_A_0_B_1 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: He will doom himself.

  26. Scene 1_A_0_B_2 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: Do not let them

    die because of his madness.
  27. Scene 1_A_0_B_2 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: They have loved you

    and honored you.
  28. Scene 1_A_0_B_3 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: Honor me?

  29. Scene 1_A_0_B_4 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: I toiled for them

    for ten years
  30. Scene 1_A_0_B_4 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: I toiled for them

    for ten years
  31. Scene 1_A_0_B_4 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: I toiled for them

    for ten years
  32. Scene 1_A_0_B_5 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: and their repayment is

    to discard me.
  33. Scene 1_A_0_B_5 Panel 2 Dialog

  34. Scene 1_A_0_B_6 Panel 1 Dialog

  35. Scene 1_A_0_B_6 Panel 2 Dialog

  36. Scene 1_A_0_B_6 Panel 3 Dialog

  37. Scene 4 Panel 1 Dialog

  38. Scene 4 Panel 2 Dialog

  39. Scene 4 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: They have made their

    choice
  40. Scene 4 Panel 4 Dialog ACHILLES: I shed no tears

    for them.
  41. Scene 4 Panel 5 Dialog PAT:They are foolish, yes, but

    they are still our people!
  42. Scene 4 Panel 6 Dialog PAT:They are foolish, yes, but

    they are still our people!
  43. Scene 10 Panel 1 Dialog

  44. Scene 10 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: The Myrmidons are our

    people.
  45. Scene 10 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: The rest can save

    themselves.
  46. Scene 10 Panel 4 Dialog ACHILLES: The rest can save

    themselves.
  47. Scene 10_A Panel 1 Dialog

  48. Scene 10_A Panel 2 Dialog

  49. Scene 10_A Panel 3 Dialog PAT: You are destroying yourself.

  50. Scene 10_A Panel 4 Dialog PAT: You will not be

    loved for this, you will be hated,
  51. Scene 10_A Panel 5 Dialog PAT: cursed!

  52. Scene 10_A Panel 6 Dialog PAT: Please

  53. Scene 10_A Panel 7 Dialog PAT: if you just-

  54. Scene 10_A Panel 8 Dialog ACHILLES: (sharply) Patroclus.

  55. Scene 10_A Panel 9 Dialog

  56. Scene 10_A_0 Panel 1 Dialog

  57. Scene 10_A_0 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: Enough.

  58. Scene 13 Panel 1 Dialog

  59. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog

  60. Scene 15 Panel 1 Dialog

  61. Scene 15 Panel 2 Dialog

  62. Scene 15 Panel 3 Dialog

  63. Scene 16 Panel 1 Dialog

  64. Scene 16 Panel 2 Dialog

  65. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: For me then. Save

    them for me.
  66. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: I know what I

    am asking of you. But I ask it. For me.
  67. Scene 18 Panel 1 Dialog

  68. Scene 18 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: Anything else. Anything. But

    not this.
  69. Scene 19 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: If you loved me-

  70. Scene 19 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: No!

  71. Scene 16_A Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: Do you think I

    wish them all to die?
  72. Scene 16_A Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: Do you think I

    wish them all to die?
  73. Scene 16_A Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: Do you think I

    wish them all to die?
  74. Scene 20 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: I cannot.

  75. Scene 20 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: I will not let

    him take this from me.
  76. Scene 20 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: The do something else.

  77. Scene 20 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: Send the myrmidons at

    least.
  78. Scene 20 Panel 5 Dialog PAT: Send me in your

    place. Put me in your armor
  79. Scene 20 Panel 6 Dialog PAT: and I will lead

    the Myrmidons. They will think it is you!
  80. Scene 20 Panel 7 Dialog PAT: and I will lead

    the Myrmidons. They will think it is you!
  81. Scene 10_A_999 Panel 1 Dialog

  82. Scene 10_A_999 Panel 2 Dialog

  83. Scene 10_A_999 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: But you cannot fight.

  84. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 1 Dialog

  85. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: Do you see?

  86. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: I will not have

    to!
  87. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: They are so frightened

    of you, if I show myself,
  88. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 5 Dialog PAT: They are so frightened

    of you, if I show myself,
  89. Scene 10_A_1000 Panel 6 Dialog PAT: they will run.

  90. Scene 10_A_1001 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: You will not have

    to break your oath!
  91. Scene 10_A_1001 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: No.

  92. Scene 10_A_1001 Panel 3 Dialog ACHILLES: It is too dangerous.

  93. Scene 10_A_1001 Panel 4 Dialog ACHILLES: It is too dangerous.

  94. Scene 28 Panel 1 Dialog

  95. Scene 28 Panel 2 Dialog

  96. Scene 29 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: Please.

  97. Scene 29 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: If you cannot fight,

  98. Scene 29 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: you cannot.

  99. Scene 29 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: you cannot.

  100. Scene 30 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: Save them this way.

  101. Scene 30 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: Save them this way.

  102. Scene 30 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: Save them this way.

  103. Scene 30_A Panel 1 Dialog PAT: Think!

  104. Scene 30_A Panel 2 Dialog PAT: There is no fame

    greater-
  105. Scene 30_A_0 Panel 1 Dialog PAT: your mighty name will

    save them.
  106. Scene 30_A_0 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: They will laugh at

    Agamemnon's weakness.
  107. Scene 30_A_0 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: They will laugh at

    Agamemnon's weakness.
  108. Scene 30_A_0 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: They will laugh at

    Agamemnon's weakness.
  109. Scene 30_A_1 Panel 1 Dialog ACHILLES: Swear to me that

    if you go, you will not fight them.
  110. Scene 30_A_1 Panel 2 Dialog ACHILLES: Swear to me that

    if you go, you will not fight them.
  111. Scene 30_A_1 Panel 3 Dialog

  112. Scene 35 Panel 1 Dialog

  113. Scene 35 Panel 2 Dialog PAT: You will let me?

  114. Scene 35 Panel 3 Dialog PAT: You will let me?

  115. Scene 35 Panel 4 Dialog PAT: You will let me?

  116. Scene 35 Panel 5 Dialog PAT: You will let me?

  117. Scene 35 Panel 6 Dialog PAT: You will let me?

  118. Scene 35 Panel 7 Dialog PAT: You will let me?

  119. Scene 35 Panel 8 Dialog PAT: You will let me?

  120. Scene 35_A Panel 1 Dialog

  121. Scene 35_A Panel 2 Dialog

  122. Scene 35_A Panel 3 Dialog

  123. Scene 35_A Panel 4 Dialog

  124. Scene 35_A Panel 5 Dialog

  125. Scene 35_A Panel 6 Dialog