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closing shift

ari
April 08, 2022

closing shift

two fast food employees find themselves trapped inside the restaurant's play structure after close — one is convinced the tunnels of the structure are haunted by a murderous version of the chain's clown mascot at night, while the other is not so much convinced as annoyed.

ari

April 08, 2022
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  1. Scene F Duration 09:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog [O.S.]

    Oh. Hey dude. closingshift Page 36/169
  2. Scene H Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Your shift ended hours ago. closingshift Page 44/169
  3. Scene H Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Why are you in here. closingshift Page 45/169
  4. Scene I Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    I was looking for evidence of the Wacdobbles ghost, closingshift Page 48/169
  5. Scene I Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    and I got stuck. closingshift Page 49/169
  6. Scene J Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    ...the Wacdobbles ghost. closingshift Page 51/169
  7. Scene K Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    Yeah, you know! closingshift Page 52/169
  8. Scene K Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    Wacdobbles? It’s his ghost? closingshift Page 53/169
  9. Scene L Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    I read on some cryptid forum closingshift Page 54/169
  10. Scene L Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA

    [cont.]: that he haunts the play place at night, closingshift Page 55/169
  11. Scene L Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA

    [cont.]: but nobody believed me, closingshift Page 56/169
  12. Scene L Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA

    [cont.]: so I came in here to find evidence. closingshift Page 57/169
  13. Scene M Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    But all I found was a few rats. closingshift Page 58/169
  14. Scene M Duration 10:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    first of all. closingshift Page 60/169
  15. Scene M Duration 10:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY

    (strained): Legally, closingshift Page 63/169
  16. Scene M Duration 10:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    ...We can’t say that Wacdobbles has rats. closingshift Page 64/169
  17. Scene M Duration 10:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    .We can’t legally deny it! closingshift Page 65/169
  18. Scene M Duration 10:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    .But we can’t confirm it either. closingshift Page 66/169
  19. Scene M Duration 10:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Second of all. closingshift Page 67/169
  20. Scene N Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY

    [cont.]: His name isn’t closingshift Page 68/169
  21. Scene N Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY

    [cont.]: "Wacdobbles," closingshift Page 69/169
  22. Scene N Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    it’s Robble Wacdobble. closingshift Page 70/169
  23. Scene N Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    And he’s not a ghost. closingshift Page 71/169
  24. Scene O Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA

    (dreamily): Oh my god... ghost clown... closingshift Page 74/169
  25. Scene O Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY

    (annoyed): NO, he’s not REAL! closingshift Page 75/169
  26. Scene P Duration 01:10:09:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    He’s a corporate-owned closingshift Page 76/169
  27. Scene P Duration 01:10:09:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:10:01:00 Dialog RAY:

    fictional character closingshift Page 77/169
  28. Scene P Duration 01:10:09:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    I have to clean the place. closingshift Page 83/169
  29. Scene P Duration 01:10:09:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    I'd ask you to help, but based on last time we put you on cleaning duty... closingshift Page 84/169
  30. Scene Q Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    EZRA SCREAMING, FRANTIC SQUEAKING NOISES OF SNEAKERS SLIPPING ON WET TILE] closingshift Page 85/169
  31. Scene Q Duration 07:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    EZRA SCREAMING, FRANTIC SQUEAKING NOISES OF SNEAKERS SLIPPING ON WET TILE] closingshift Page 86/169
  32. Scene Q Duration 07:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    EZRA SCREAMING, FRANTIC SQUEAKING NOISES OF SNEAKERS SLIPPING ON WET TILE] closingshift Page 87/169
  33. Scene Q Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    EZRA SCREAMING, FRANTIC SQUEAKING NOISES OF SNEAKERS SLIPPING ON WET TILE] closingshift Page 88/169
  34. Scene Q Duration 07:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    EZRA SCREAMING, FRANTIC SQUEAKING NOISES OF SNEAKERS SLIPPING ON WET TILE] closingshift Page 89/169
  35. Scene Q Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    EZRA SCREAMING, FRANTIC SQUEAKING NOISES OF SNEAKERS SLIPPING ON WET TILE] closingshift Page 90/169
  36. Scene Q Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    EZRA SCREAMING, FRANTIC SQUEAKING NOISES OF SNEAKERS SLIPPING ON WET TILE] closingshift Page 91/169
  37. Scene R Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    ...I don't want to have to experience that again. closingshift Page 92/169
  38. Scene R Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    So just go home. For the sake of my mental health. closingshift Page 93/169
  39. Scene S Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY

    [cont., aside]: You're not supposed to be here past close, anyway. closingshift Page 95/169
  40. Scene S Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    ...wait! It's past closing time? closingshift Page 96/169
  41. Scene S Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    (suddenly terrified) I gotta go! closingshift Page 97/169
  42. Scene S Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    No, both of us! closingshift Page 99/169
  43. Scene S Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    We can't stay here! Don't you read the forums? closingshift Page 100/169
  44. Scene T Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    Everyone knows closingshift Page 101/169
  45. Scene T Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    Wacdobbles comes out after closing time closingshift Page 102/169
  46. Scene T Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    and stalks the play place closingshift Page 103/169
  47. Scene T Duration 08:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    in search of hapless prey. closingshift Page 104/169
  48. Scene T Duration 08:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    He's all murdery, closingshift Page 105/169
  49. Scene T Duration 08:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    and he craves flesh, and— closingshift Page 106/169
  50. Scene T Duration 08:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY

    [O.S.]: Okay, stop. closingshift Page 107/169
  51. Scene U Duration 17:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Stop talking about the stupid clown! closingshift Page 109/169
  52. Scene U Duration 17:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Ghost. Whatever. closingshift Page 111/169
  53. Scene U Duration 17:00 Panel 13 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    It's not gonna get us, okay! closingshift Page 121/169
  54. Scene U Duration 17:00 Panel 14 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Robble Wacdobble isn't real. closingshift Page 122/169
  55. Scene U Duration 17:00 Panel 16 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Robble Wacdobble isn't real! closingshift Page 124/169
  56. Scene U Duration 17:00 Panel 17 Duration 01:00 Dialog [sfx:

    muffled clown honk] closingshift Page 125/169
  57. Scene V Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog [sfx:

    muffled clown honk echoes ominously] closingshift Page 126/169
  58. Scene V Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    Oh hey, look how clown-shaped that shadow is! closingshift Page 128/169
  59. Scene W Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    Man. If this was a storyboard sequence or something that would definitely be some sort of plot-relevant visual storytelling device! closingshift Page 129/169
  60. Scene X Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog [sfx:

    muffled clown honk echoes ominously] closingshift Page 132/169
  61. Scene X Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog [sfx:

    muffled clown honk echoes ominously] closingshift Page 133/169
  62. Scene Y Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    You said it eats people? closingshift Page 136/169
  63. Scene Y Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA:

    Yeah, he eats people. closingshift Page 138/169
  64. Scene A1 Duration 23:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    ...a ball from the ball pit? closingshift Page 155/169
  65. Scene A1 Duration 23:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog EZRA

    [horrified]: A clown egg! closingshift Page 156/169
  66. Scene A1 Duration 23:00 Panel 13 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Do I get paid enough to like... closingshift Page 159/169
  67. Scene A1 Duration 23:00 Panel 15 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    ...with this? closingshift Page 161/169
  68. Scene A1 Duration 23:00 Panel 16 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    SINGULAR, BONE-CHILLING HONK] closingshift Page 162/169
  69. Scene A1 Duration 23:00 Panel 19 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    ...no I do not. closingshift Page 165/169
  70. Scene A1 Duration 23:00 Panel 20 Duration 01:00 Dialog RAY:

    Goodbye Ezra have fun with the clown. closingshift Page 166/169
  71. Scene A1 Duration 23:00 Panel 21 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    Ezra whimpers] closingshift Page 167/169