Scene 3_B Panel 1 Dialog Action Notes From Susie's POV, the images of the witches follow her gaze, like an image/light burned onto the eye. Invert the colors on the lagging images? TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 11/227
Scene 3_C_1 Panel 1 Dialog Action Notes HH moving much slower than S (actions and reactions off by a beat). TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 18/227
Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog Action Notes The small flickering lights on the horizon are all giving off little blips of sound/static. TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 67/227
Scene 32 Panel 1 Dialog M: whenever I'm trying to remember something I just sing... (alt Mildred just starts singing the song) Action Notes TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 150/227
Scene 42 Panel 1 Dialog S: Delicious pie, Poppa Woppa! Action Notes Everyone is having a grand time. Laughter. There's a warm glow about the room. TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 186/227
Scene 43 Panel 3 Dialog Margaret: Susie, help your little sister. You're better at magic than her. Action Notes Nothing. TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 192/227
Scene 44_A Panel 2 Dialog Action Notes Salt shaker starts to spin, magic sparks around it. Ripples form on the table cloth. TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 197/227
Scene 45 Panel 1 Dialog M: Wow, Susie! Action Notes The salt shaker is spinning gloriously, magic is sparking all around, the table cloth is billowing underneath it. TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 198/227
Scene 45 Panel 4 Dialog M: I wish I had as much magic in my whole body as you do in one little finger! Action Notes Slugging TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 201/227
Scene 48 Panel 1 Dialog Action Notes M has blown Susie's reading candle out with her snores. Margaret and PW are laughing softly. TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 211/227
Scene 48 Panel 2 Dialog Action Notes S also joins in with laughter as she relights the candle with magic. Maybe this all sounds as if we're behind glass, to amp up how dreamy this is? Also there's hot cocoa. TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 212/227
Scene 51 Panel 2 Dialog Action Notes S is laughing as she climbs up the stairs on all fours.PW is chuckling. TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 219/227
Scene 52 Panel 2 Dialog S: I am truly blessed to be the oldest! We have fun, Poppa Woppa. We have fun. Action Notes Slugging TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 221/227
Scene 53 Panel 2 Dialog PW: but some people, like you, are born with so much magic that is overflows out of them! Action Notes Slugging TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 224/227
Scene 53 Panel 4 Dialog PW: If you would be so good as to let her spend time with you--just being around you would be huge for her. Action Notes Slugging TheMetaphysicalReserve AM 080520 Page 226/227