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1. Scene 1 Panel 1 Action Notes The camera zooms into Mr.Hodges apt. Notes Its dark outside cars passing throught the front of the appartment. mr.mercedes Page 1/108
2. Scene 1 Panel 2 mr.mercedes Page 2/108
3. Scene 1 Panel 3 mr.mercedes Page 3/108
4. Scene 1 Panel 4 mr.mercedes Page 4/108
5. Scene 1 Panel 5 Action Notes Camera cut to next scene. mr.mercedes Page 5/108
6. Scene 2 Panel 1 Dialog It’s dark in the bedroom. Light filters in through the window from outside. Vehicles passing by with their headlights cause light to play along the walls and ceiling. Hodges and Janey lay in bed after making love. mr.mercedes Page 6/108
7. Scene 2 Panel 2 mr.mercedes Page 7/108
8. Scene 2 Panel 3 Notes I mr.mercedes Page 8/108
9. Scene 2 Panel 4 mr.mercedes Page 9/108
10. Scene 2 Panel 5 mr.mercedes Page 10/108
11. Scene 3 Panel 1 mr.mercedes Page 11/108
12. Scene 3 Panel 2 Dialog Janey looks up to the Hodges in the dark room. mr.mercedes Page 12/108
13. Scene 3 Panel 3 Dialog Janey kisses Hodges cheek mr.mercedes Page 13/108
14. Scene 3 Panel 4 Dialog Janey smiles as Hudges grumbles. mr.mercedes Page 14/108
15. Scene 3 Panel 5 Dialog Janey turns. mr.mercedes Page 15/108
16. Scene 3 Panel 6 Dialog Janey gets out of bed mr.mercedes Page 16/108
17. Scene 4 Panel 1 mr.mercedes Page 17/108
18. Scene 4 Panel 2 mr.mercedes Page 18/108
19. Scene 4 Panel 3 Dialog Janey gets up mr.mercedes Page 19/108
20. Scene 4 Panel 4 Dialog Picks up Hodges Shirt from ground and mr.mercedes Page 20/108
21. Scene 4 Panel 5 Dialog Puts it on mr.mercedes Page 21/108
22. Scene 4 Panel 6 Dialog Janey walks towards the curtain mr.mercedes Page 22/108
23. Scene 4 Panel 7 mr.mercedes Page 23/108
24. Scene 4 Panel 8 Dialog Closes the curtain. mr.mercedes Page 24/108
25. Scene 4 Panel 9 mr.mercedes Page 25/108
26. Scene 4 Panel 10 Dialog Janey leaves the bedroomas Hodges sleepily gets up and sees her leave the room. Action Notes Camera cut to next scene. mr.mercedes Page 26/108
27. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog Janey walking down the dark hallway towards the kitchen, slowly looking around and exploring his small home. mr.mercedes Page 27/108
28. Scene 6 Panel 1 Dialog Hodges steps out of the bedroom slowly trails behind her. mr.mercedes Page 28/108
29. Scene 6 Panel 2 Dialog Janey walking down the dark hallway towards the kitchen, slowly looking mr.mercedes Page 29/108
30. Scene 6 Panel 3 mr.mercedes Page 30/108
31. Scene 6 Panel 4 mr.mercedes Page 31/108
32. Scene 7 Panel 1 mr.mercedes Page 32/108
33. Scene 7 Panel 2 Dialog She drags a finger along a piece of furniture as she walks past it as if looking for dust mr.mercedes Page 33/108
34. Scene 8 Panel 1 mr.mercedes Page 34/108
35. Scene 8 Panel 2 mr.mercedes Page 35/108
36. Scene 8 Panel 3 mr.mercedes Page 36/108
37. Scene 8 Panel 4 mr.mercedes Page 37/108
38. Scene 8 Panel 5 Dialog Janey Dusts her hand off. mr.mercedes Page 38/108
39. Scene 8 Panel 6 Dialog Janey walks toward fridge mr.mercedes Page 39/108
40. Scene 8 Panel 7 mr.mercedes Page 40/108
41. Scene 8 Panel 8 Dialog Janey opens the fridge. mr.mercedes Page 41/108
42. Scene 8 Panel 9 Dialog Hodges leans against the door frame as Janey opens his fridge searching for something to drink. mr.mercedes Page 42/108
43. Scene 9 Panel 1 Dialog She grabs two cans of beer, mr.mercedes Page 43/108
44. Scene 9 Panel 2 mr.mercedes Page 44/108
45. Scene 9 Panel 3 Dialog shuts the fridge door, with her back. mr.mercedes Page 45/108
46. Scene 9 Panel 4 Action Notes Camera cut to next scene. mr.mercedes Page 46/108
47. Scene 10 Panel 1 mr.mercedes Page 47/108
48. Scene 10 Panel 2 Dialog and walks back to Hodges. mr.mercedes Page 48/108
49. Scene 10 Panel 3 Dialog JANEY: “Not bad for a bachelor pad.” mr.mercedes Page 49/108
50. Scene 10 Panel 4 mr.mercedes Page 50/108
51. Scene 10 Panel 5 Dialog Janey hands Hodges one of the cans of beer then grabs his other hand and leads him back into the bedroom. mr.mercedes Page 51/108
52. Scene 10 Panel 6 mr.mercedes Page 52/108
53. Scene 10 Panel 7 Action Notes Camera turns around the couple as the leave the kitchen/living room. mr.mercedes Page 53/108
54. Scene 10 Panel 8 Action Notes Camera cut to next scene mr.mercedes Page 54/108
55. Scene 11 Panel 1 Dialog Interior of the bedroom. mr.mercedes Page 55/108
56. Scene 11 Panel 2 Dialog Janey still holding Hodges’ hand leads him to the bed, mr.mercedes Page 56/108
57. Scene 11 Panel 3 mr.mercedes Page 57/108
58. Scene 11 Panel 4 mr.mercedes Page 58/108
59. Scene 11 Panel 5 mr.mercedes Page 59/108
60. Scene 11 Panel 6 mr.mercedes Page 60/108
61. Scene 11 Panel 7 Dialog where they both sit down. mr.mercedes Page 61/108
62. Scene 11 Panel 8 Dialog JANEY: No dirty dishes mr.mercedes Page 62/108
63. Scene 11 Panel 9 Dialog JANEY: in the sink, no hair in the bathtub, no porn videos on top of the TV. mr.mercedes Page 63/108
64. Scene 11 Panel 10 Dialog JANEY: I think I even saw a green vegetable or two in the crisper, mr.mercedes Page 64/108
65. Scene 11 Panel 11 Notes Janey touches her beer can to his. mr.mercedes Page 65/108
66. Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog JANEY: which earns you bonus points. mr.mercedes Page 66/108
67. Scene 12 Panel 2 Notes Hodges reaches over and turns on a small table light on the night stand next to the bed. mr.mercedes Page 67/108
68. Scene 12 Panel 3 Dialog HODGES: I never expected to be here with mr.mercedes Page 68/108
69. Scene 12 Panel 4 Dialog HODGES: another woman. mr.mercedes Page 69/108
70. Scene 12 Panel 5 Dialog HODGES: Except maybe for my daughter, Allie." JANEY: "Are you close?" mr.mercedes Page 70/108
71. Scene 12 Panel 6 Dialog HODGES: "We talk on the phone and email sometimes, but she hasn’t actually visited in a couple of years.” JANEY: “Did she take your ex’s side in the divorce?” mr.mercedes Page 71/108
72. Scene 12 Panel 7 Dialog HODGES: “Yeah, I suppose she did.” mr.mercedes Page 72/108
73. Scene 12 Panel 8 Dialog Hodges takes another sip from his beer. mr.mercedes Page 73/108
74. Scene 12 Panel 9 Dialog and more sip. mr.mercedes Page 74/108
75. Scene 12 Panel 10 Dialog HODGES: “And it was probably a damn smart move on her part.” mr.mercedes Page 75/108
76. Scene 12 Panel 11 Dialog Hodges thinks for a moment and takes a long draw from his beer can. mr.mercedes Page 76/108
77. Scene 12 Panel 12 Dialog JANEY: “Y’know, you might be just a tad too hard on yourself.” mr.mercedes Page 77/108
78. Scene 12 Panel 13 Dialog JANEY: “The thought of all those vultures being at the service on Wednesday is almost too much to think about. Wait til you meet Aunt Charlotte.” mr.mercedes Page 78/108
79. Scene 12 Panel 14 Dialog She stops for a moment and looks at Hodges. mr.mercedes Page 79/108
80. Scene 12 Panel 15 Dialog JANEY: Please tell me you’ll come to the memorial service on Wednesday. mr.mercedes Page 80/108
81. Scene 12 Panel 16 Dialog JANEY: Say you will. Please. I need a friend. mr.mercedes Page 81/108
82. Scene 12 Panel 17 mr.mercedes Page 82/108
83. Scene 13 Panel 1 Dialog HODGES: “Of course. I’ll be at the viewing on Tuesday as well.” mr.mercedes Page 83/108
84. Scene 13 Panel 2 Dialog Janey looks surprised, but happily so. mr.mercedes Page 84/108
85. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog JANEY: “That seems above and beyond." HODGES: “It’s not out of the ordinary for the Perp to show up at one of these functions. Action Notes Hodges takes their drinks and puts them away mr.mercedes Page 85/108
86. Scene 15 Panel 1 Dialog Janey’s face shows a slight disappointment, mr.mercedes Page 86/108
87. Scene 15 Panel 2 Dialog but she quickly recovers. mr.mercedes Page 87/108
88. Scene 15 Panel 3 Dialog Even so, Hodges notices and takes Janey’s hand. mr.mercedes Page 88/108
89. Scene 15 Panel 4 Dialog HODGES: “I want to be there.” Action Notes takes Janey’s hand. mr.mercedes Page 89/108
90. Scene 15 Panel 5 mr.mercedes Page 90/108
91. Scene 15 Panel 6 mr.mercedes Page 91/108
92. Scene 15 Panel 7 mr.mercedes Page 92/108
93. Scene 15 Panel 8 Action Notes Janey pushes Hosges to bed. mr.mercedes Page 93/108
94. Scene 15 Panel 9 mr.mercedes Page 94/108
95. Scene 16 Panel 1 Dialog An uncomfortable silence lingers for a moment. mr.mercedes Page 95/108
96. Scene 16 Panel 2 Dialog HODGES: “What’s the deal with the ashes?” mr.mercedes Page 96/108
97. Scene 16 Panel 3 mr.mercedes Page 97/108
98. Scene 16 Panel 4 Dialog JANEY: “Oh, listen to this. The mortician called them the cremains. Is that the most disgusting thing you’ve ever heard. Sounds like that powdered shit you put in your coffee.” HODGES: “And now I’m swearing off coffee.” mr.mercedes Page 98/108
99. Scene 16 Panel 5 Action Notes That makes Janey smile a little. mr.mercedes Page 99/108
100. Scene 16 Panel 6 Dialog JANEY: “On the upside, I’m pretty sure I won’t have to fight Aunt Charlotte for them.” HODGES: “No, you won’t have to do that. Is there going to be a reception?” mr.mercedes Page 100/108
101. Scene 16 Panel 7 Action Notes Janey sighs. mr.mercedes Page 101/108
102. Scene 16 Panel 8 Action Notes Janey sighs. mr.mercedes Page 102/108
103. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog JANEY: “Charlotte insists. So, the service at ten, followed by a luncheon at the house in Sugar Heights. While we’re eating cucumber sandwiches and telling our favorite Olivia Trelawney stories, the funeral home people will take care of the cremation. I’ll decide what to do with the ashes after everyone leaves on Thursday. They’ll never even have to look at the urn.” HODGES: “That’s a good idea.” Action Notes Janey lays down next to Hodges Notes Camera moves from side to top. mr.mercedes Page 103/108
104. Scene 17 Panel 2 mr.mercedes Page 104/108
105. Scene 17 Panel 3 Dialog JANEY: ““Thanks, but I dread the luncheon. Not so much the few old friends Mom still has left, but If Aunt Charlotte freaks, I’m apt to have a fucking meltdown. You’ll come to lunch, too, won’t you? HODGES: “If you let me reach inside that shirt you’re wearing, I’ll do anything you want.” mr.mercedes Page 105/108
106. Scene 17 Panel 4 Dialog JANEY: “In that case, let me help you with the buttons.” mr.mercedes Page 106/108
107. Scene 17 Panel 5 Action Notes They fall asleep. mr.mercedes Page 107/108
108. Scene 17 Panel 6 Action Notes They fall back into bed as we FADE TO DARK. mr.mercedes Page 108/108