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Giovanni's Room Excerpt

EdG
August 28, 2024

Giovanni's Room Excerpt

EdG

August 28, 2024
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  1. Scene 7 Panel 1 Action Notes CAM tracks Dad walking

    towards bed over next 3 panels Page 29/130
  2. Scene 10 Panel 3 Dialog 2.DAD (CONT’D) You're going to

    be all right. Action Notes Dad reaches out hand Page 43/130
  3. Scene 11 Panel 3 Dialog 2.DAD (CONT’D) be all Action

    Notes Dad pulls back hand Page 46/130
  4. Scene 12 Panel 4 Dialog 3.DAD (CONT’D) You're the one

    got smashed up the most Page 51/130
  5. Scene 25 Panel 2 Dialog 5.DAD Don't you know better

    than to go driving around like that when you're drunk? You know better than that, why you could've all been killed. Page 73/130
  6. Scene 27 Panel 2 Dialog 7.DAD (CONT’D) Just be careful

    Action Notes Dad pulls out handkerchief Page 76/130
  7. Scene 27 Panel 3 Dialog 7.DAD (CONT’D) next time. Action

    Notes Dad pulls out handkerchief Page 77/130
  8. Scene 27 Panel 4 Dialog 7.DAD (CONT’D) You're all I've

    got, be careful. Action Notes Dad rubs David's head with handkerchief Page 78/130
  9. Scene 29 Panel 2 Dialog 9.DAD (CONT’D) There's nothing Action

    Notes CYCLE A + B hand next 5 panels Page 81/130
  10. Scene 29 Panel 6 Dialog 9.DAD (CONT’D) gonna be Action

    Notes Tear rolls down Dad's face Page 85/130
  11. Scene 30 Panel 1 Dialog 10.DAD There's no - Action

    Notes Dad wipes David's face with handkerchief over next 5 panels Page 87/130
  12. Scene 33 Panel 3 Action Notes Dad runs hand along

    bed while walking away Page 102/130
  13. Scene 34 Panel 1 Action Notes H.U. Dad’s hand running

    hand across foot of bed Page 104/130
  14. Scene 35 Panel 4 Dialog 13.DAD You got nothing against

    me, have you? Action Notes FX Dad's reflection in window Page 110/130
  15. Scene 35 Panel 5 Dialog 13. DAD (CONT’D) Tell me

    if you have? Action Notes Dad puts hand on glass Page 111/130
  16. Scene 35 Panel 6 Action Notes Rack focus to see

    David in reflection Page 112/130
  17. Scene 37 Panel 2 Dialog 15.DAD I did the best

    I could. Action Notes Rack focus back to Dad Page 116/130
  18. Scene 37 Panel 3 Dialog 15.DAD (CONT'D) I really did

    the best I could. Action Notes Dad turns around Page 117/130
  19. Scene 38 Panel 2 Dialog 16.DAD You're going to be

    on Action Notes Dad walk in from right Page 120/130
  20. Scene 38 Panel 5 Dialog 16.DAD (CONT'D) but when you

    come home, while you're lying around the house, we'll talk, huh? - Page 123/130
  21. Scene 39 Panel 1 Dialog 16.DAD (CONT’D) O.S. and try

    to figure out what the hell we're going to do with Page 124/130
  22. Scene 39 Panel 2 Dialog 16.DAD (CONT’D) O.S. you when

    you get on your feet. Okay? Page 125/130