Mistborn Extract WIP Scene 1

The opening part of an extract from Brandon Sanderson's first Mistborn book that I am adapting. We set the scene for a purposefully un-subtle heist...

Transcript

1. Mistborn sc01 ROUGH
6. Dialog KELSIER: Strange Creatures Like Me...
7. Dialog KELSIER: Strange Creatures Like Me...
8. Dialog DOCKSON: Kell...
9. Dialog KELSIER: hmm? DOCKSON: Do you have to stand on the ledge like that? Our plans may be a bit crazy, but I'd rather not have them end with you splattered across the cobblestones down there...
10. Dialog KELSIER: heh...
12. Dialog KELSIER: ... I suppose I don't HAVE to...
17. Dialog KELSIER: Alright...
19. Dialog KELSIER: You'll have to fill me in DOX...
21. Dialog KELSIER: Which house is the strongest right now?
22. Dialog KELSIER: Who would no one consider hitting?
23. Dialog DOCKSON: No one? KELSIER: No one sensible.
24. Dialog DOCKSON: Hmm...
25. Dialog DOCKSON: Hmm...
26. Dialog DOCKSON: Venture. They've been on top for the last few years
27. Dialog DOCKSON: Contin. They keep a standing force of several hundred men, and local house nobility includes a good two dozen mistings...
28. Dialog KELSIER: Well then...
29. Dialog KELSIER: ...that's where I'll go.
30. Dialog KELSIER: They're certain to have some...
31. Dialog KELSIER: Atium
32. Dialog VIN (whispered to herself): Atium...?
33. Dialog DOCKSON: Lord Venture supposedly has a safe in his study, that's where he'd probably keep at least some of his Atium stash... You'll find the study on the third floor, three rooms in from the upper southern balcony...
34. Dialog DOCKSON: ...But uh...
35. Dialog DOCKSON: You will need to be careful.
36. Dialog DOCKSON: In addition to regular troops, Venture keeps a dozen Hazekillers on top of it's usual Mistings... and uh
37. Dialog KELSIER: ... holy...
42. Dialog KELSIER: It's odd that you've never been up close to one of these before...
43. Dialog VIN (offscreen): What is it?
44. Dialog VIN: I've never seen anything... like it... DOCKSON: Well...
45. Dialog DOCKSON: It's a Mistborn cloak... They all wear the things- It's kind of like a... sign of membership in their club.
46. Dialog KELSIER: It's coloured and constructed to hide you in the Mist...
47. Dialog KELSIER: ...And it warns city guards and other Mistborn not to bother you...
53. Dialog KELSIER: and uh... I think it suits me
55. Dialog KELSIER: Don't you think?
56. Dialog KELSIER: Anyway... If that's all...
57. Dialog KELSIER: ... I'll be going...
58. Dialog KELSIER: I'll meet you back at Club's shop in a bit...
59. Dialog KELSIER: I'll meet you back at Club's shop in a bit...
60. Dialog KELSIER: I'll meet you back at Club's shop in a bit...