Treasure in the Desert

My first storyboard in way, way too long. Thanks to Jake Hollander and Allie Mertz for their feedback!

Original prompt by Jake Hollander: This month's challenge involves the desert! Your character must be in the desert surviving it or doing something in it. It can be anything from mad max to a survival story, your call.

Focus - Environment! The focus of this month is on how your character interacts with the environment and how you use the environment to push your story.

Transcript

1. Scene 01 Panel 1
2. Scene 01 Panel 2
3. Scene 01 Panel 3
4. Scene 01 Panel 4
5. Scene 01 Panel 5
6. Scene 01 Panel 6
7. Scene 01 Panel 7
8. Scene 01 Panel 8
9. Scene 02_A Panel 1 Dialog SFX: Hiss
10. Scene 02_A Panel 2 Dialog SFX: Hiss
11. Scene 02_A Panel 3
12. Scene 02_A Panel 4
13. Scene 02_B Panel 1
14. Scene 02_B Panel 2 Dialog SFX: Hiss
15. Scene 02_B Panel 3 Dialog SFX: Hiss
16. Scene 02 Panel 1 Dialog SFX: Hiss
17. Scene 02 Panel 2 Dialog Rebecca: AAHH
18. Scene 02 Panel 3 Dialog Rebecca: AAHH
19. Scene 02 Panel 4 Dialog Rebecca: AAHH
20. Scene 03 Panel 1
21. Scene 03 Panel 2 Dialog R: RRGH
22. Scene 03 Panel 3
23. Scene 03 Panel 4
24. Scene 03 Panel 5 Dialog R: [growl]
25. Scene 03 Panel 6 Dialog R: Okay, since we've been out here for seven hours...
26. Scene 04 Panel 1 Dialog R: now can you show me the treasure map?
27. Scene 04 Panel 2 Dialog R: now can you show me the treasure map?
28. Scene 04 Panel 3 Dialog R: now can you show me the treasure map?
29. Scene 04 Panel 4 Dialog Topher: Nope.
30. Scene 04 Panel 5 Dialog R: Why?
31. Scene 04 Panel 6 Dialog T: Not ready.
32. Scene 04 Panel 7 Dialog R: When will you be ready?!
33. Scene 04 Panel 8 Dialog R: When will you be ready?!
34. Scene 04 Panel 9 Dialog R: When will you be ready?!
35. Scene 04 Panel 10 Dialog T: Later.
36. Scene 05 Panel 1
37. Scene 05 Panel 2
38. Scene 05 Panel 3
39. Scene 05 Panel 4
40. Scene 05 Panel 5
41. Scene 05 Panel 6 Dialog R: RRGH Notes A-B cycle
42. Scene 05 Panel 7 Dialog R: RRGH Notes A-B cycle
43. Scene 05 Panel 8 Dialog R: [inhale]
44. Scene 05 Panel 9 Dialog R: In that case,
45. Scene 05 Panel 10 Dialog R: [grunts]
46. Scene 06 Panel 1 Notes HU
47. Scene 06 Panel 2 Dialog R: [grunts]
48. Scene 06 Panel 3 Dialog R: [grunts]
49. Scene 06 Panel 4 Dialog R: --Aaaagh!--
50. Scene 06 Panel 5 Dialog R: I'm heading home. Personally, I don't find scorpion attacks and burning off 3 layers of skin very enjoyable.
51. Scene 06 Panel 6 Dialog R: I'm heading home. Personally, I don't find scorpion attacks and burning off 3 layers of skin very enjoyable.
52. Scene 06 Panel 7 Dialog R: I'm heading home. Personally, I don't find scorpion attacks and burning off 3 layers of skin very enjoyable.
53. Scene 06 Panel 8 Dialog R: I'm heading home. Personally, I don't find scorpion attacks and burning off 3 layers of skin very enjoyable.
54. Scene 06 Panel 9 Dialog R: I'm heading home. Personally, I don't find scorpion attacks and burning off 3 layers of skin very enjoyable.
55. Scene 06 Panel 10 Dialog R: I'm heading home. Personally, I don't find scorpion attacks and burning off 3 layers of skin very enjoyable.
56. Scene 06 Panel 11 Dialog R: I'm heading home. Personally, I don't find scorpion attacks and burning off 3 layers of skin very enjoyable.
57. Scene 06 Panel 12 Dialog R: I'm heading home. Personally, I don't find scorpion attacks and burning off 3 layers of skin very enjoyable.
58. Scene 07 Panel 1 Dialog R: Have fun finding your way home at night.
59. Scene 07 Panel 2 Dialog R: Have fun finding your way home at night.
60. Scene 07 Panel 3
61. Scene 08 Panel 1
62. Scene 08 Panel 2 Dialog T: Wait!
63. Scene 08 Panel 3 Dialog R: [deep, loud inhale]
64. Scene 08 Panel 4 Dialog R: Topher, I am going ho--
65. Scene 08 Panel 5
66. Scene 09 Panel 1
67. Scene 09 Panel 2
68. Scene 09 Panel 3
69. Scene 09 Panel 4
70. Scene 09 Panel 5
71. Scene 09 Panel 6
72. Scene 10 Panel 1
73. Scene 10 Panel 2
74. Scene 10 Panel 3
75. Scene 10 Panel 4
76. Scene 10 Panel 5 Dialog R: Wha... where...?
77. Scene 11 Panel 1 Dialog T: The treasure is all the money we'll make when we're viral celebrities, which has a 100% chance of happening if I--
78. Scene 11 Panel 2 Dialog T: The treasure is all the money we'll make when we're viral celebrities, which has a 100% chance of happening if I--
79. Scene 11 Panel 3 Dialog T: --dig a hole a hundred feet deep and--
80. Scene 11 Panel 4 Dialog T: --film a YouTube video inside of it!!
81. Scene 11 Panel 5 Dialog T: They say the algorithm is an uncrackable code--
82. Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog T: --but I cracked it! We're gonna be rich, Rebecca, and all it took was--
83. Scene 13 Panel 1 Dialog T: --3 weeks of math and twenty hours of digging!!
84. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog T: Doesn't that sound wonderful honey?
85. Scene 14 Panel 2 Dialog R: Yes, Topher...
86. Scene 14 Panel 3 Dialog R: It sounds wonderful...
87. Scene 15 Panel 1 Dialog R: --but you look like you need some help and supplies to stay like this for the whole night...
88. Scene 15 Panel 2 Dialog R: I'm gonna drive to the store and get some food and water
89. Scene 15 Panel 3 Dialog T: Okay!
90. Scene 15 Panel 4 Dialog T: Thanks for being so supportive, honey!
91. Scene 15 Panel 5 Dialog T: Thanks for being so supportive, honey!
92. Scene 16 Panel 1 Dialog R: [panting] Action Notes Rebecca run cycle, BG dolly out
93. Scene 16 Panel 2 Dialog R: [panting] Action Notes Rebecca run cycle, BG dolly out
94. Scene 16 Panel 3 Dialog R: [panting] Action Notes Rebecca run cycle, BG dolly out
95. Scene 16 Panel 4 Dialog R: [panting] Action Notes Rebecca run cycle, BG dolly out
96. Scene 16 Panel 5 Dialog R: [panting] Action Notes Rebecca run cycle, BG dolly out
97. Scene 16 Panel 6 Dialog R: [panting] Action Notes Rebecca run cycle, BG dolly out
98. Scene 16 Panel 7 Dialog R: [panting] Action Notes Rebecca run cycle, BG dolly out
99. Scene 16 Panel 8 Dialog R: [panting] Action Notes Rebecca run cycle, BG dolly out
100. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog R: [panting]
101. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog R: [panting]
102. Scene 17 Panel 3 Dialog R: [panting]
103. Scene 17 Panel 4 Dialog R: [panting]
104. Scene 17 Panel 5 Dialog R: [panting]
105. Scene 18 Panel 1 Dialog R: [panting] Notes Start Pose
106. Scene 18 Panel 2 Dialog SFX: (Slam) R: GAH!
107. Scene 18 Panel 3 Dialog R: Ok, so your boyfriend lost his mind...
108. Scene 18 Panel 4 Dialog R: ...No big deal...
109. Scene 18 Panel 5 Dialog R: I'm sure any doctor would love to drive a hundred miles away from civilization to help him.
110. Scene 18 Panel 6 Dialog R: This is fine.
111. Scene 18 Panel 7 Dialog R: Heh heh heh, happy times.
112. Scene 19 Panel 1 Action Notes start pose
113. Scene 19 Panel 2
114. Scene 19 Panel 3
115. Scene 19 Panel 4 Dialog SFX: [revving]
116. Scene 20 Panel 1
117. Scene 20 Panel 2 Dialog R: Hmmmnnn... SFX: [revving]
118. Scene 20 Panel 3 Dialog R: Come on... SFX: [revving]
119. Scene 21 Panel 1 Dialog R: comeon Comeon COMEON COMEONNNN!!!! Action Notes a-b cycle
120. Scene 21 Panel 2 Dialog R: comeon Comeon COMEON COMEONNNN!!!! SFX: [revving on B panel only]
121. Scene 22 Panel 1 Dialog R: [worried moaning] SFX: [on-off revving]
122. Scene 22 Panel 2 Dialog R: [worried moaning] SFX: [on-off revving]
123. Scene 22 Panel 3 Dialog R: I gotta have a little bit of gas left.
124. Scene 22 Panel 4 Dialog R: PLEASE don't leave to die of thirst in the desert!
125. Scene 22_A Panel 1 Dialog R: No! No! No! NO!!
126. Scene 22_A Panel 2 Dialog R: No! No! No! NO!! SFX: [revving]
127. Scene 22_A Panel 3 Dialog R: No! No! No! NO!! SFX: [revving]
128. Scene 22_A Panel 4 Dialog R: No! No! No! NO!!
129. Scene 22_A Panel 5 Dialog R: No! No! No! NO!! SFX: [revving]
130. Scene 22_A Panel 6 Dialog R: No! No! No! NO!! SFX: [revving]
131. Scene 23 Panel 1 Action Notes start pose
132. Scene 23 Panel 2 Dialog R: AAAAGHH!!
133. Scene 23 Panel 3 Dialog R: AAAAGHH!!
134. Scene 23 Panel 4 Dialog R: [wailing, sobbing] Notes cycle a-b
135. Scene 23 Panel 5 Dialog R: [wailing, sobbing] Notes cycle a-b
136. Scene 23 Panel 6 Dialog R: [wailing, sobbing] Notes cycle a-b
137. Scene 23 Panel 7 Dialog R: [wailing, sobbing] T: [O.S., far away] Hey babe, I got another splinter. Could you bring me a tissue?
138. Scene 23 Panel 8 Dialog R: [wailing, sobbing] T: [O.S., far away] Hey babe, I got another splinter. Could you bring me a tissue?
139. Scene 24 Panel 1 Dialog R: [wailing] T: [O.S., far away] Babe? Rebecca?