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Shelly Phillinganes

January 12, 2021
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  1. Scene 1 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes The camera

    tracks the bird as it flys down towards the house. The bird is singing beautifully. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 1/150
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  3. Scene 1 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes The bird

    lands on a tree branch, camera pushes in towards window Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 3/150
  4. Scene 2 Panel 1 / 11 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes

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  5. Scene 2 Panel 2 / 11 Action Notes Darius's hands

    begin to pull curtains open Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 5/150
  6. Scene 2 Panel 3 / 11 Action Notes Darius opens

    the curtains Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 6/150
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  9. Scene 2 Panel 6 / 11 Action Notes Darius yawns

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  14. Scene 2 Panel 11 / 11 Action Notes Darius notices

    the bird Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 14/150
  15. Scene 3 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to

    a full shot of the bird singing beautifully. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 15/150
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  18. Scene 4 Panel 1 / 2 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes

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  19. Scene 4 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes Darius is

    amazed by the singing bird. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 19/150
  20. Scene 5 Panel 1 / 6 Action Notes Cut to

    a medium shot as Darius knocks on his chest and clears his throat Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 20/150
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  25. Scene 5 Panel 6 / 6 Action Notes push in

    as Darius breaths in Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 25/150
  26. Scene 6 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes Darius burst

    into song, his voice is very screechy and off pitch Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 26/150
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  30. Scene 7 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes cut to

    and over the shoulder shot as Darius tries to sing to the bird. push in as he sings. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 30/150
  31. Scene 8 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes the bird

    is alarmed Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 31/150
  32. Scene 8 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes the bird

    winces at how bad Darius sings Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 32/150
  33. Scene 9 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to

    a medium shot of Darius continuing to sing to the bird. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 33/150
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  35. Scene 10 Panel 1 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes

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  36. Scene 10 Panel 2 / 6 Action Notes the birds

    trys to hold back laughter Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 36/150
  37. Scene 10 Panel 3 / 6 Action Notes the bird

    burst into laughter Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 37/150
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  41. Scene 11 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to

    a medium shot on Darius still singing loudly Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 41/150
  42. Scene 11 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes Darius notices

    the bird laughing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 42/150
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  44. Scene 12 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes cut to

    a close-up of his upset face Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 44/150
  45. Scene 13 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes Darius swings

    the curtains closed Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 45/150
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  48. Scene 14 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes cut to

    an environmental shot as the bird flys away laughing. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 48/150
  49. Scene 15 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes Push in,

    we hear dishes being cleaned Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 49/150
  50. Scene 16 Panel 1 / 6 Action Notes cut to

    a shot of the fridge Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 50/150
  51. Scene 16 Panel 2 / 6 Action Notes Darius walks

    into the frame Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 51/150
  52. Scene 16 Panel 3 / 6 Action Notes Darius grabs

    the whiteboard marker Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 52/150
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  56. Scene 17 Panel 1 / 5 Action Notes cut to

    a close up as Darius checks off the saturday chores he has already finished Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 56/150
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  62. Scene 19 Panel 1 / 5 Action Notes cut to

    a broom leaning by the side of the fridge. boom up to the handle of the broom Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 62/150
  63. Scene 19 Panel 2 / 5 Action Notes Darius reaches

    for the broom handle Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 63/150
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  67. Scene 20 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to

    a medium shot of Darius with the broom Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 67/150
  68. Scene 20 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes Darius walks

    out of the frame towards the kitchen Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 68/150
  69. Scene 21 Panel 1 / 10 Action Notes Darius whistles

    as he begins to sweep the kitchen floor Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 69/150
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  71. Scene 21 Panel 3 / 10 Action Notes Darius breaks

    into dance as he sings loudly and very off-key Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 71/150
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  79. Scene 22 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to

    a full shot of Darius dancing and singing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 79/150
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  81. Scene 22 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes zoom out

    to see the entire window seal Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 81/150
  82. Scene 23 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Several birds

    fly down on the window frame. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 82/150
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  84. Scene 24 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to

    a full shot of the birds Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 84/150
  85. Scene 24 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes one birds

    nugdes another to look at Darius Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 85/150
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  87. Scene 25 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to

    Darius still singing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 87/150
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  89. Scene 26 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to

    full shot of birds bursting into laughter. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 89/150
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  92. Scene 27 Panel 1 / 5 Action Notes cut to

    a medium shot of Darius Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 92/150
  93. Scene 27 Panel 2 / 5 Action Notes Darius hears

    the birds laughter Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 93/150
  94. Scene 27 Panel 3 / 5 Action Notes the camera

    pushes in closer to Darius's puzzled face Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 94/150
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  96. Scene 27 Panel 5 / 5 Action Notes Dariua turns

    to looks at the bird and the camera uses rack focus to emphasis the laughing birds. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 96/150
  97. Scene 28 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to

    birds still laughing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 97/150
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  99. Scene 29 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Darius storms

    towards the window Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 99/150
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  101. Scene 30 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes eyeing the

    laughing birds Darius closes the blinds in their faces Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 101/150
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  104. Scene 31 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes Darius walks

    out of frame pleased that the birds are gone. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 104/150
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  107. Scene 32 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes Darius sings

    to himself as he folds his laundry Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 107/150
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  109. Scene 32 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes suddenly Dariushears

    a banging on the door. Camera pans to the front door Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 109/150
  110. Scene 33 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to

    an over the shoulder shot as the door shakes Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 110/150
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  113. Scene 34 Panel 1 / 5 Action Notes zoom into

    a close up as the door keeps shaking Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 113/150
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  115. Scene 34 Panel 3 / 5 Action Notes the door

    swings open Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 115/150
  116. Scene 34 Panel 4 / 5 Action Notes Lots of

    birds break open the door and fly inside Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 116/150
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  118. Scene 35 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes birds eye

    veiw as the birds fly around the room Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 118/150
  119. Scene 35 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes camera moves

    up to show even more of the room as the birds continue to fly. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 119/150
  120. Scene 36 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes over the

    shoulder shot. the birds flying around frames the fireplace. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 120/150
  121. Scene 37 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut closer

    to the fireplace as it too shakes Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 121/150
  122. Scene 37 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes more birds

    burst through the opening of the fireplace Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 122/150
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  124. Scene 38 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes close up

    shot to Darius's face. Birds fly by his face moving his hair in all directions Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 124/150
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  126. Scene 38 Panel 3 / 4 Action Notes the flying

    suddenly stops. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 126/150
  127. Scene 38 Panel 4 / 4 Action Notes Darius peeks

    out of one eye Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 127/150
  128. Scene 39 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes environmental shot

    as all the birds are laughing all around him . Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 128/150
  129. Scene 40 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Over the

    shoulder shot. Emphasising the birds in the foreground laughing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 129/150
  130. Scene 40 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes Over the

    shoulder shot. Emphasising the birds in the foreground laughing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 130/150
  131. Scene 41 Panel 1 / 7 Action Notes close-up of

    Darius's face. we see birds right next to him continuing to laugh uncontrollably. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 131/150
  132. Scene 41 Panel 2 / 7 Action Notes Darius is

    fed up and screams as loud as he can. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 132/150
  133. Scene 41 Panel 3 / 7 Action Notes Darius yells

    awfully loud and at a very high frequency. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 133/150
  134. Scene 41 Panel 4 / 7 Action Notes the camera

    zooms into an extreme close up of his mouth screaming Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 134/150
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  138. Scene 42 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes the camera

    pushes out at a birds eye veiw of Darius and the birds Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 138/150
  139. Scene 43 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes close up

    shot as the birds hold thier ears in pain, from the awful sound Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 139/150
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  141. Scene 44 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes Full shot

    as the birds begin to fly away from Darius Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 141/150
  142. Scene 45 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes birds eye

    veiw as the birds leave Darius's house in a hurry. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 142/150
  143. Scene 45 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes The door

    slams shut. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 143/150
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  145. Scene 46 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes Darius takes

    a breath Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 145/150
  146. Scene 47 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes Darius relaxes

    now that the birds are gone. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 146/150
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  148. Scene 47 Panel 3 / 4 Action Notes Darius sings

    happily to himself Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 148/150
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  151. Scene 1 Panel 1 / 1 The Perfect Marshmallow by

    Shelly Phillinganes Page 1/28
  152. Scene 2 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes Push in

    The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 2/28
  153. Scene 3 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Birds eye

    veiw straight down onto table. Childrens hands chaotically grab smore supplies. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 3/28
  154. Scene 3 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes Birds eye

    veiw straight down onto table. Childrens hands chaotically grab smore supplies. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 4/28
  155. Scene 4 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to

    a now empty table with one child left behind. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 5/28
  156. Scene 4 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes She reaches

    for a marshmellow The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 6/28
  157. Scene 5 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Track character

    through crowd The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 7/28
  158. Scene 5 Panel 2 / 2 The Perfect Marshmallow by

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  159. Scene 6 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes medium shot

    as she flinches away from the heat from the fire. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 9/28
  160. Scene 6 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes she begins

    to pull her hood over her hair The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 10/28
  161. Scene 6 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes She tightens

    the hood, so only a little bit of her face shows, shielding herself from the fire. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 11/28
  162. Scene 7 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes close-up shot

    as she moves her marshmellow into the fire. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 12/28
  163. Scene 7 Panel 2 / 4 Action Notes The marshmellow

    begins to cook The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 13/28
  164. Scene 7 Panel 3 / 4 The Perfect Marshmallow by

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  165. Scene 7 Panel 4 / 4 Action Notes The marshmellow

    is now charred black. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 15/28
  166. Scene 8 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes extreme close-up

    on her eyes. we see the reflection of the perfectly charred marshmellow in her hand. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 16/28
  167. Scene 9 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes meduim shot

    of bystanders looking digusted at her creation. She smiles admiring her work. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 17/28
  168. Scene 10 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Tracking pan

    on feet The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 18/28
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  170. Scene 11 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes cut to

    her back at the smore supply table. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 20/28
  171. Scene 12 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes close- up

    as she puts her smore together. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 21/28
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  175. Scene 13 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes medium shot.

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  176. Scene 13 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes she throws

    smore into mouth. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 26/28
  177. Scene 13 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes she happliy

    chows down on her perfect smore. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 27/28
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