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1. Scene 1 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes The camera tracks the bird as it flys down towards the house. The bird is singing beautifully. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 1/150
2. Scene 1 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 2/150
3. Scene 1 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes The bird lands on a tree branch, camera pushes in towards window Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 3/150
4. Scene 2 Panel 1 / 11 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 4/150
5. Scene 2 Panel 2 / 11 Action Notes Darius's hands begin to pull curtains open Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 5/150
6. Scene 2 Panel 3 / 11 Action Notes Darius opens the curtains Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 6/150
7. Scene 2 Panel 4 / 11 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 7/150
8. Scene 2 Panel 5 / 11 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 8/150
9. Scene 2 Panel 6 / 11 Action Notes Darius yawns Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 9/150
10. Scene 2 Panel 7 / 11 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 10/150
11. Scene 2 Panel 8 / 11 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 11/150
12. Scene 2 Panel 9 / 11 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 12/150
13. Scene 2 Panel 10 / 11 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 13/150
14. Scene 2 Panel 11 / 11 Action Notes Darius notices the bird Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 14/150
15. Scene 3 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to a full shot of the bird singing beautifully. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 15/150
16. Scene 3 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 16/150
17. Scene 3 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 17/150
18. Scene 4 Panel 1 / 2 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 18/150
19. Scene 4 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes Darius is amazed by the singing bird. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 19/150
20. Scene 5 Panel 1 / 6 Action Notes Cut to a medium shot as Darius knocks on his chest and clears his throat Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 20/150
21. Scene 5 Panel 2 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 21/150
22. Scene 5 Panel 3 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 22/150
23. Scene 5 Panel 4 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 23/150
24. Scene 5 Panel 5 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 24/150
25. Scene 5 Panel 6 / 6 Action Notes push in as Darius breaths in Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 25/150
26. Scene 6 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes Darius burst into song, his voice is very screechy and off pitch Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 26/150
27. Scene 6 Panel 2 / 4 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 27/150
28. Scene 6 Panel 3 / 4 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 28/150
29. Scene 6 Panel 4 / 4 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 29/150
30. Scene 7 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes cut to and over the shoulder shot as Darius tries to sing to the bird. push in as he sings. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 30/150
31. Scene 8 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes the bird is alarmed Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 31/150
32. Scene 8 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes the bird winces at how bad Darius sings Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 32/150
33. Scene 9 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to a medium shot of Darius continuing to sing to the bird. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 33/150
34. Scene 9 Panel 2 / 2 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 34/150
35. Scene 10 Panel 1 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 35/150
36. Scene 10 Panel 2 / 6 Action Notes the birds trys to hold back laughter Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 36/150
37. Scene 10 Panel 3 / 6 Action Notes the bird burst into laughter Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 37/150
38. Scene 10 Panel 4 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 38/150
39. Scene 10 Panel 5 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 39/150
40. Scene 10 Panel 6 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 40/150
41. Scene 11 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to a medium shot on Darius still singing loudly Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 41/150
42. Scene 11 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes Darius notices the bird laughing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 42/150
43. Scene 11 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 43/150
44. Scene 12 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes cut to a close-up of his upset face Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 44/150
45. Scene 13 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes Darius swings the curtains closed Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 45/150
46. Scene 13 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 46/150
47. Scene 13 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 47/150
48. Scene 14 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes cut to an environmental shot as the bird flys away laughing. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 48/150
49. Scene 15 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes Push in, we hear dishes being cleaned Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 49/150
50. Scene 16 Panel 1 / 6 Action Notes cut to a shot of the fridge Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 50/150
51. Scene 16 Panel 2 / 6 Action Notes Darius walks into the frame Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 51/150
52. Scene 16 Panel 3 / 6 Action Notes Darius grabs the whiteboard marker Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 52/150
53. Scene 16 Panel 4 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 53/150
54. Scene 16 Panel 5 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 54/150
55. Scene 16 Panel 6 / 6 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 55/150
56. Scene 17 Panel 1 / 5 Action Notes cut to a close up as Darius checks off the saturday chores he has already finished Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 56/150
57. Scene 17 Panel 2 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 57/150
58. Scene 17 Panel 3 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 58/150
59. Scene 17 Panel 4 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 59/150
60. Scene 17 Panel 5 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 60/150
61. Scene 18 Panel 1 / 1 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 61/150
62. Scene 19 Panel 1 / 5 Action Notes cut to a broom leaning by the side of the fridge. boom up to the handle of the broom Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 62/150
63. Scene 19 Panel 2 / 5 Action Notes Darius reaches for the broom handle Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 63/150
64. Scene 19 Panel 3 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 64/150
65. Scene 19 Panel 4 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 65/150
66. Scene 19 Panel 5 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 66/150
67. Scene 20 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to a medium shot of Darius with the broom Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 67/150
68. Scene 20 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes Darius walks out of the frame towards the kitchen Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 68/150
69. Scene 21 Panel 1 / 10 Action Notes Darius whistles as he begins to sweep the kitchen floor Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 69/150
70. Scene 21 Panel 2 / 10 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 70/150
71. Scene 21 Panel 3 / 10 Action Notes Darius breaks into dance as he sings loudly and very off-key Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 71/150
72. Scene 21 Panel 4 / 10 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 72/150
73. Scene 21 Panel 5 / 10 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 73/150
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75. Scene 21 Panel 7 / 10 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 75/150
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77. Scene 21 Panel 9 / 10 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 77/150
78. Scene 21 Panel 10 / 10 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 78/150
79. Scene 22 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to a full shot of Darius dancing and singing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 79/150
80. Scene 22 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 80/150
81. Scene 22 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes zoom out to see the entire window seal Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 81/150
82. Scene 23 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Several birds fly down on the window frame. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 82/150
83. Scene 23 Panel 2 / 2 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 83/150
84. Scene 24 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to a full shot of the birds Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 84/150
85. Scene 24 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes one birds nugdes another to look at Darius Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 85/150
86. Scene 24 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 86/150
87. Scene 25 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to Darius still singing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 87/150
88. Scene 25 Panel 2 / 2 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 88/150
89. Scene 26 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to full shot of birds bursting into laughter. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 89/150
90. Scene 26 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 90/150
91. Scene 26 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 91/150
92. Scene 27 Panel 1 / 5 Action Notes cut to a medium shot of Darius Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 92/150
93. Scene 27 Panel 2 / 5 Action Notes Darius hears the birds laughter Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 93/150
94. Scene 27 Panel 3 / 5 Action Notes the camera pushes in closer to Darius's puzzled face Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 94/150
95. Scene 27 Panel 4 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 95/150
96. Scene 27 Panel 5 / 5 Action Notes Dariua turns to looks at the bird and the camera uses rack focus to emphasis the laughing birds. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 96/150
97. Scene 28 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to birds still laughing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 97/150
98. Scene 28 Panel 2 / 2 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 98/150
99. Scene 29 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Darius storms towards the window Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 99/150
100. Scene 29 Panel 2 / 2 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 100/150
101. Scene 30 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes eyeing the laughing birds Darius closes the blinds in their faces Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 101/150
102. Scene 30 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 102/150
103. Scene 30 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 103/150
104. Scene 31 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes Darius walks out of frame pleased that the birds are gone. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 104/150
105. Scene 31 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 105/150
106. Scene 31 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 106/150
107. Scene 32 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes Darius sings to himself as he folds his laundry Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 107/150
108. Scene 32 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 108/150
109. Scene 32 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes suddenly Dariushears a banging on the door. Camera pans to the front door Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 109/150
110. Scene 33 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut to an over the shoulder shot as the door shakes Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 110/150
111. Scene 33 Panel 2 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 111/150
112. Scene 33 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 112/150
113. Scene 34 Panel 1 / 5 Action Notes zoom into a close up as the door keeps shaking Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 113/150
114. Scene 34 Panel 2 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 114/150
115. Scene 34 Panel 3 / 5 Action Notes the door swings open Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 115/150
116. Scene 34 Panel 4 / 5 Action Notes Lots of birds break open the door and fly inside Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 116/150
117. Scene 34 Panel 5 / 5 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 117/150
118. Scene 35 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes birds eye veiw as the birds fly around the room Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 118/150
119. Scene 35 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes camera moves up to show even more of the room as the birds continue to fly. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 119/150
120. Scene 36 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes over the shoulder shot. the birds flying around frames the fireplace. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 120/150
121. Scene 37 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes cut closer to the fireplace as it too shakes Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 121/150
122. Scene 37 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes more birds burst through the opening of the fireplace Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 122/150
123. Scene 37 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 123/150
124. Scene 38 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes close up shot to Darius's face. Birds fly by his face moving his hair in all directions Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 124/150
125. Scene 38 Panel 2 / 4 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 125/150
126. Scene 38 Panel 3 / 4 Action Notes the flying suddenly stops. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 126/150
127. Scene 38 Panel 4 / 4 Action Notes Darius peeks out of one eye Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 127/150
128. Scene 39 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes environmental shot as all the birds are laughing all around him . Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 128/150
129. Scene 40 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Over the shoulder shot. Emphasising the birds in the foreground laughing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 129/150
130. Scene 40 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes Over the shoulder shot. Emphasising the birds in the foreground laughing Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 130/150
131. Scene 41 Panel 1 / 7 Action Notes close-up of Darius's face. we see birds right next to him continuing to laugh uncontrollably. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 131/150
132. Scene 41 Panel 2 / 7 Action Notes Darius is fed up and screams as loud as he can. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 132/150
133. Scene 41 Panel 3 / 7 Action Notes Darius yells awfully loud and at a very high frequency. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 133/150
134. Scene 41 Panel 4 / 7 Action Notes the camera zooms into an extreme close up of his mouth screaming Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 134/150
135. Scene 41 Panel 5 / 7 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 135/150
136. Scene 41 Panel 6 / 7 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 136/150
137. Scene 41 Panel 7 / 7 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 137/150
138. Scene 42 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes the camera pushes out at a birds eye veiw of Darius and the birds Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 138/150
139. Scene 43 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes close up shot as the birds hold thier ears in pain, from the awful sound Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 139/150
140. Scene 43 Panel 2 / 2 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 140/150
141. Scene 44 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes Full shot as the birds begin to fly away from Darius Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 141/150
142. Scene 45 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes birds eye veiw as the birds leave Darius's house in a hurry. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 142/150
143. Scene 45 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes The door slams shut. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 143/150
144. Scene 45 Panel 3 / 3 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 144/150
145. Scene 46 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes Darius takes a breath Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 145/150
146. Scene 47 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes Darius relaxes now that the birds are gone. Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 146/150
147. Scene 47 Panel 2 / 4 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 147/150
148. Scene 47 Panel 3 / 4 Action Notes Darius sings happily to himself Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 148/150
149. Scene 47 Panel 4 / 4 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 149/150
150. Scene 47_A Panel 1 / 1 Off-Key by Shelly Phillinganes Page 150/150
151. Scene 1 Panel 1 / 1 The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 1/28
152. Scene 2 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes Push in The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 2/28
153. Scene 3 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Birds eye veiw straight down onto table. Childrens hands chaotically grab smore supplies. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 3/28
154. Scene 3 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes Birds eye veiw straight down onto table. Childrens hands chaotically grab smore supplies. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 4/28
155. Scene 4 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes cut to a now empty table with one child left behind. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 5/28
156. Scene 4 Panel 2 / 2 Action Notes She reaches for a marshmellow The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 6/28
157. Scene 5 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Track character through crowd The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 7/28
158. Scene 5 Panel 2 / 2 The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 8/28
159. Scene 6 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes medium shot as she flinches away from the heat from the fire. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 9/28
160. Scene 6 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes she begins to pull her hood over her hair The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 10/28
161. Scene 6 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes She tightens the hood, so only a little bit of her face shows, shielding herself from the fire. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 11/28
162. Scene 7 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes close-up shot as she moves her marshmellow into the fire. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 12/28
163. Scene 7 Panel 2 / 4 Action Notes The marshmellow begins to cook The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 13/28
164. Scene 7 Panel 3 / 4 The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 14/28
165. Scene 7 Panel 4 / 4 Action Notes The marshmellow is now charred black. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 15/28
166. Scene 8 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes extreme close-up on her eyes. we see the reflection of the perfectly charred marshmellow in her hand. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 16/28
167. Scene 9 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes meduim shot of bystanders looking digusted at her creation. She smiles admiring her work. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 17/28
168. Scene 10 Panel 1 / 2 Action Notes Tracking pan on feet The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 18/28
169. Scene 10 Panel 2 / 2 The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 19/28
170. Scene 11 Panel 1 / 1 Action Notes cut to her back at the smore supply table. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 20/28
171. Scene 12 Panel 1 / 4 Action Notes close- up as she puts her smore together. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 21/28
172. Scene 12 Panel 2 / 4 The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 22/28
173. Scene 12 Panel 3 / 4 The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 23/28
174. Scene 12 Panel 4 / 4 The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 24/28
175. Scene 13 Panel 1 / 3 Action Notes medium shot. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 25/28
176. Scene 13 Panel 2 / 3 Action Notes she throws smore into mouth. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 26/28
177. Scene 13 Panel 3 / 3 Action Notes she happliy chows down on her perfect smore. The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 27/28
178. Scene 14 Panel 1 / 1 The Perfect Marshmallow by Shelly Phillinganes Page 28/28