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Meadow Desparado Draft 1 (with captions)

Meadow Desparado Draft 1 (with captions)

Andrea Swenson

September 02, 2024
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  1. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 SFX *gunshot

    crack echoing* Meadow Desperado Page 1/93
  2. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 SFX *gunshot

    crack echoing* Meadow Desperado Page 2/93
  3. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    TIGER BANDIT BOSS slouches. Meadow Desperado Page 3/93
  4. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Blood drips onto the ground behind TIGER BANDIT BOSS, forming a pool on the ground. Meadow Desperado Page 4/93
  5. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Blood drips onto the ground behind TIGER BANDIT BOSS.Blood drips onto the ground behind TIGER BANDIT BOSS, forming a pool on the ground. Meadow Desperado Page 5/93
  6. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    TIGER BANDIT BOSS falls backwards and out of frame. Meadow Desperado Page 6/93
  7. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    TIGER BANDIT BOSS falls backwards and out of frame. Meadow Desperado Page 7/93
  8. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    TIGER BANDIT BOSS falls backwards and out of frame. Meadow Desperado Page 8/93
  9. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    A plume of dust flies up from where TIGER BANDIT BOSS fell. Meadow Desperado Page 10/93
  10. Scene 1 Duration 12:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    A plume of dust flies up from where TIGER BANDIT BOSS fell. Meadow Desperado Page 11/93
  11. Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY stands mysteriously, gun aloft. Meadow Desperado Page 13/93
  12. Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 SFX *wind

    whistling* Meadow Desperado Page 14/93
  13. Scene 2 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    camera rack focus onto COWBOY BUNNY Meadow Desperado Page 15/93
  14. Scene 3 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    The BANDIT GOONS stand frozen, all midway through dragging money bags. Meadow Desperado Page 16/93
  15. Scene 3 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog DONKEY

    BANDIT: "Boss?" Meadow Desperado Page 17/93
  16. Scene 4 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    TIGER BANDIT BOSS lies dead on the ground, already covered in vultures. Meadow Desperado Page 18/93
  17. Scene 5 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY stands, face obscured by the shadow if his hat. Meadow Desperado Page 21/93
  18. Scene 5 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    COWBOY BUNNY quickly look up menacingly Meadow Desperado Page 22/93
  19. Scene 6 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 SFX *coins

    hitting ground* Meadow Desperado Page 24/93
  20. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BANDIT GOONS make a break for it, climbing over each other loony toons style in their effort to escape. Meadow Desperado Page 25/93
  21. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BANDIT GOONS make a break for it, climbing over each other loony toons style in their effort to escape. Meadow Desperado Page 26/93
  22. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BANDIT GOONS make a break for it, climbing over each other loony toons style in their effort to escape. Meadow Desperado Page 27/93
  23. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BANDIT GOONS make a break for it, climbing over each other loony toons style in their effort to escape. Meadow Desperado Page 28/93
  24. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BANDIT GOONS make a break for it, climbing over each other loony toons style in their effort to escape. Meadow Desperado Page 29/93
  25. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BANDIT GOONS make a break for it, climbing over each other loony toons style in their effort to escape. Meadow Desperado Page 30/93
  26. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BANDIT GOONS make a break for it, climbing over each other loony toons style in their effort to escape. Meadow Desperado Page 31/93
  27. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BANDIT GOONS make a break for it, climbing over each other loony toons style in their effort to escape. Meadow Desperado Page 32/93
  28. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    A fourth BANDIT GOON appears from off screen, dragging the corpse of TIGER BANDIT BOSS. There is a vulture still on the corpse. Meadow Desperado Page 33/93
  29. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    A fourth BANDIT GOON appears from off screen, dragging the corpse of TIGER BANDIT BOSS. There is a vulture still on the corpse. Meadow Desperado Page 34/93
  30. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    A fourth BANDIT GOON appears from off screen, dragging the corpse of TIGER BANDIT BOSS. There is a vulture still on the corpse. Meadow Desperado Page 35/93
  31. Scene 7_A Duration 12:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    A fourth BANDIT GOON appears from off screen, dragging the corpse of TIGER BANDIT BOSS. There is a vulture still on the corpse. Meadow Desperado Page 36/93
  32. Scene 8_A Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    DONKEY BANDIT pulls himself around the corner of the building. Meadow Desperado Page 37/93
  33. Scene 8_A Duration 07:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    DONKEY BANDIT pulls himself around the corner of the building. Meadow Desperado Page 38/93
  34. Scene 8_A Duration 07:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog DONKEY

    BANDIT: "You'll pay for this rabbit! You'll pay-" Meadow Desperado Page 39/93
  35. Scene 8_A Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY fires three shots from off screen. Meadow Desperado Page 40/93
  36. Scene 8_A Duration 07:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog DONKEY

    BANDIT: "Alright! I'm leaving!" Meadow Desperado Page 41/93
  37. Scene 8_A Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog DONKEY

    BANDIT: "sheesh!" Meadow Desperado Page 42/93
  38. Scene 8_A Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    DONKEY BANDIT slips back behind the building. Meadow Desperado Page 43/93
  39. Scene 9 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY stands alone in the empty main street, wind whistling. Meadow Desperado Page 44/93
  40. Scene 9 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY stands alone in the empty main street, wind whistling. Meadow Desperado Page 45/93
  41. Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY peers into the distance. Meadow Desperado Page 47/93
  42. Scene 10 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY sighs in relief, tension leaving his body. Meadow Desperado Page 49/93
  43. Scene 11 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    From the POV of someone watching through a window - BUNNY COWBOY lowers his gun and puts it away in its holster. Meadow Desperado Page 50/93
  44. Scene 11 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    From the POV of someone watching through a window - BUNNY COWBOY lowers his gun and puts it away in its holster. Meadow Desperado Page 51/93
  45. Scene 12 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Residents of the town cautiously begin to come out of hiding. Meadow Desperado Page 52/93
  46. Scene 12 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Residents of the town cautiously begin to come out of hiding. Meadow Desperado Page 53/93
  47. Scene 12 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Residents of the town cautiously begin to come out of hiding. Meadow Desperado Page 54/93
  48. Scene 13 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Residents of the town cautiously begin to come out of hiding. Meadow Desperado Page 55/93
  49. Scene 13 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Residents of the town cautiously begin to come out of hiding. Meadow Desperado Page 56/93
  50. Scene 14 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    MAYOR MOLE rises up from his hiding place in a barrel. Meadow Desperado Page 58/93
  51. Scene 15 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE: "Is it over?" Meadow Desperado Page 59/93
  52. Scene 16 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE: "Oh!" Meadow Desperado Page 62/93
  53. Scene 17 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY waves at MAYOR MOLE. Meadow Desperado Page 63/93
  54. Scene 17 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY lifts MAYOR MOLE out of the barrel. Meadow Desperado Page 64/93
  55. Scene 17 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY lifts MAYOR MOLE out of the barrel. Meadow Desperado Page 65/93
  56. Scene 17 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY lifts MAYOR MOLE out of the barrel. Meadow Desperado Page 66/93
  57. Scene 17 Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY pulls MAYOR MOLE's walking cane out of the barrel. Meadow Desperado Page 67/93
  58. Scene 17 Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY pulls MAYOR MOLE's walking cane out of the barrel. Meadow Desperado Page 68/93
  59. Scene 17_A Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE: "Thank goodness you arrived when you did!" Meadow Desperado Page 70/93
  60. Scene 17_A Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE: "We were completely helpless against those bandits..." Meadow Desperado Page 71/93
  61. Scene 17_A Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE: "but that's in the past!" Meadow Desperado Page 72/93
  62. Scene 18 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE: "We should be talking about your reward!" Meadow Desperado Page 73/93
  63. Scene 18 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE: "We may not we a fancy town but we've got *proudly prattles on about town spirit and history*" Meadow Desperado Page 74/93
  64. Scene 18 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    MAYOR MOLE continues to prattle off screen, while BUNNY COWBOY greets a mouse child that has run up to gawk. Meadow Desperado Page 75/93
  65. Scene 18_A Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE: *still talking about the towns proud history in napkin crafting* Meadow Desperado Page 76/93
  66. Scene 18_A Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    MAYOR MOLE looks up to see BUNNY COWBOY is no longer with him and stops. Meadow Desperado Page 77/93
  67. Scene 18_A Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    MAYOR MOLE looks back for BUNNY COWBOY like "where the hell did you go I was talking to you" Meadow Desperado Page 78/93
  68. Scene 18_A Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Smiles warmly when he sees what BUNNY COWBOY is doing. Meadow Desperado Page 79/93
  69. Scene 19 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE (off screen): "So, Mr. hero," Meadow Desperado Page 80/93
  70. Scene 19 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE (off screen): "So, Mr. hero," Meadow Desperado Page 81/93
  71. Scene 19 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog MAYOR

    MOLE (off screen): "what are you gonna do now?" Meadow Desperado Page 82/93
  72. Scene 20 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY smiles and tilts his head slightly. Meadow Desperado Page 83/93
  73. Scene 20 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY smiles and tilts his head slightly. Meadow Desperado Page 84/93
  74. Scene 21 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY jumps onto the saddle from off screen. Meadow Desperado Page 85/93
  75. Scene 21 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY jumps onto the saddle from off screen. Meadow Desperado Page 86/93
  76. Scene 21 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY jumps onto the saddle from off screen. Meadow Desperado Page 87/93
  77. Scene 21_A Duration 02:02 Panel 1 Duration 02:02 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY waves his hat at the crowd as his stag beetle steed rears like a excited horse. Meadow Desperado Page 88/93
  78. Scene 22 Duration 08:01 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY rides off into the sunset on his stag beetle steed like the ending of a proper old western. Meadow Desperado Page 89/93
  79. Scene 22 Duration 08:01 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY rides off into the sunset on his stag beetle steed like the ending of a proper old western. Meadow Desperado Page 90/93
  80. Scene 22 Duration 08:01 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY rides off into the sunset on his stag beetle steed like the ending of a proper old western. Meadow Desperado Page 91/93
  81. Scene 22 Duration 08:01 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BUNNY COWBOY rides off into the sunset on his stag beetle steed like the ending of a proper old western. Meadow Desperado Page 92/93