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QINO VISITS GRANDPA

Sol
December 18, 2021

QINO VISITS GRANDPA

Qino goes to visit her Grandpa and ask for some help with a new spell!

Sol

December 18, 2021
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  1. Scene 6 Panel 7 Dialog GP: Begone whoever you are!

    I have no time for visitors! Dialog GP: Begone whoever you are! I have no time for visitors! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 30/260
  2. Scene 6 Panel 8 Dialog GP: Begone whoever you are!

    I have no time for visitors! Dialog GP: Begone whoever you are! I have no time for visitors! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 31/260
  3. Scene 9 Panel 2 Dialog Q: Grand Pa! It's me!

    How can you forget I was visiting! Dialog Q: Grand Pa! It's me! How can you forget I was visiting! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 37/260
  4. Scene 10 Panel 2 Dialog GP: Oh Dialog GP: Oh

    Qino Visits Grandpa Page 39/260
  5. Scene 10 Panel 4 Dialog GP: Hahahaha Qino it?s you!

    Dialog GP: Hahahaha Qino it?s you! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 41/260
  6. Scene 11 Panel 1 Dialog GP: I didn?t forget. Dialog

    GP: I didn?t forget. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 42/260
  7. Scene 11 Panel 2 Dialog GP: C?mon in! Dialog GP:

    C?mon in! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 43/260
  8. Scene 16 Panel 1 Dialog GP: QINO! Dialog GP: QINO!

    Qino Visits Grandpa Page 62/260
  9. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog GP: It?s good to see

    you, it's been a while. Dialog GP: It?s good to see you, it's been a while. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 63/260
  10. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog GP: It?s good to see

    you, it's been a while. Dialog GP: It?s good to see you, it's been a while. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 64/260
  11. Scene 18 Panel 1 Dialog GP: What brings you here

    today? Dialog GP: What brings you here today? Qino Visits Grandpa Page 66/260
  12. Scene 19 Panel 1 Dialog Q: Just wanted to ask

    you for some help with a Spell I?m Working on for school. Dialog Q: Just wanted to ask you for some help with a Spell I?m Working on for school. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 67/260
  13. Scene 21 Panel 1 Dialog Notes And the part where

    Qino takes out the flowers, I would have the flowers be inside a box or something so they won't get smushed inside the bag. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 72/260
  14. Scene 24 Panel 2 Dialog Q: Can I go visit

    grandma for a moment? Dialog Q: Can I go visit grandma for a moment? Qino Visits Grandpa Page 78/260
  15. Scene 30 Panel 1 Dialog GP: Let me show you

    how it's done. Dialog GP: Let me show you how it's done. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 95/260
  16. Scene 30 Panel 2 Dialog GP: Let me show you

    how it's done. Dialog GP: Let me show you how it's done. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 96/260
  17. Scene 30 Panel 3 Dialog GP: Let me show you

    how it's done. Dialog GP: Let me show you how it's done. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 97/260
  18. Scene 30 Panel 4 Dialog GP: Let me show you

    how it's done. Dialog GP: Let me show you how it's done. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 98/260
  19. Scene 31 Panel 1 Dialog GP: Let me show you

    how it's done. Dialog GP: Let me show you how it's done. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 99/260
  20. Scene 33 Panel 2 Dialog GP: Make sure you have

    a clear image in your mind of whatyou want to happen. Dialog GP: Make sure you have a clear image in your mind of whatyou want to happen. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 106/260
  21. Scene 34 Panel 1 Dialog GP: Focus on it as

    much as you can and visualize. Dialog GP: Focus on it as much as you can and visualize. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 107/260
  22. Scene 39 Panel 1 Dialog Q: That is AWESOME! Dialog

    Q: That is AWESOME! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 124/260
  23. Scene 39 Panel 2 Dialog Q: That is AWESOME! Dialog

    Q: That is AWESOME! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 125/260
  24. Scene 39 Panel 3 Dialog Q: That is AWESOME! Dialog

    Q: That is AWESOME! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 126/260
  25. Scene 40 Panel 1 Dialog Q: Okay now my turn

    again. Dialog Q: Okay now my turn again. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 127/260
  26. Scene 40 Panel 2 Dialog Q: Okay now my turn

    again. Dialog Q: Okay now my turn again. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 128/260
  27. Scene 40 Panel 3 Dialog Q: Okay now my turn

    again. Dialog Q: Okay now my turn again. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 129/260
  28. Scene 44 Panel 1 Dialog Notes 41-6 to 42-1: The

    arc of movement of that head isn't clear when you cut. Things should flow from one scene to the other imo to make it seem more readable when the action isn't too chaotic. Make Qino Visits Grandpa Page 146/260
  29. sure the head gets blown away in an arc that

    cuts naturally to the next shot. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 147/260
  30. Scene 46 Panel 1 Dialog Q: I just can?t seem

    to get it right. Dialog Q: I just can?t seem to get it right. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 155/260
  31. Scene 46 Panel 3 Dialog GP: Have You eaten yet?

    Maybe your just a bit hungry. Lets grab some food. Dialog GP: Have You eaten yet? Maybe your just a bit hungry. Lets grab some food. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 157/260
  32. Scene 48 Panel 1 Dialog Notes 46 to 52: Agree

    with B.C, try closing up or varying the shot to keep the visuals interesting. I really like the intention though. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 159/260
  33. Scene 49 Panel 1 Dialog Notes 46 to 52: Agree

    with B.C, try closing up or varying the shot to keep the visuals interesting. I really like the intention though. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 162/260
  34. Scene 57 Panel 4 Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! Dialog Q:

    IT HOPPED! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 185/260
  35. Scene 58 Panel 1 Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED!

    IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 186/260
  36. Scene 58 Panel 2 Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED!

    IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 187/260
  37. Scene 58 Panel 3 Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED!

    IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 188/260
  38. Scene 58 Panel 4 Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED!

    IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! IT HOPPED! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 189/260
  39. Scene 58 Panel 5 Dialog Q: Did you see that?!

    Dialog Q: Did you see that?! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 190/260
  40. Scene 59 Panel 1 Dialog Q: IT HOPPED! Dialog Q:

    IT HOPPED! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 191/260
  41. Scene 60 Panel 5 Dialog GP: You did it! It

    actually did hop! Dialog GP: You did it! It actually did hop! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 196/260
  42. Scene 61 Panel 6 Dialog GP: YOU DID IT! IT

    HOPPED! Dialog GP: YOU DID IT! IT HOPPED! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 202/260
  43. Scene 61 Panel 10 Dialog GP: Do it again concentrate,focus,

    visualize, you got it this time. Dialog GP: Do it again concentrate,focus, visualize, you got it this time. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 206/260
  44. Scene 61 Panel 11 Dialog GP: Do it again concentrate,focus,

    visualize, you got it this time. Dialog GP: Do it again concentrate,focus, visualize, you got it this time. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 207/260
  45. Scene 61 Panel 12 Dialog GP: Do it again concentrate,focus,

    visualize, you got it this time. Dialog GP: Do it again concentrate,focus, visualize, you got it this time. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 208/260
  46. Scene 61 Panel 13 Dialog GP: I believe in you.

    Dialog GP: I believe in you. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 209/260
  47. Scene 63 Panel 1 Dialog Notes 62 and 63: Agree

    with B.C. again, you could have it all be one continuous shot with a low angle for example to amplify a bit of tension, telling the viewer that this may be it. Add a bit more of Qino Visits Grandpa Page 214/260
  48. Scene 65 Panel 1 Dialog It didnt eplode this time!

    Dialog It didnt eplode this time! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 227/260
  49. Scene 66 Panel 1 Dialog Q: Thank you! Thank you!

    Dialog Q: Thank you! Thank you! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 229/260
  50. Scene 67 Panel 1 Dialog GP: No problem. It was

    all you. Dialog GP: No problem. It was all you. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 230/260
  51. Scene 70 Panel 2 Dialog Q: Oh no! Dialog Q:

    Oh no! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 235/260
  52. Scene 71 Panel 2 Dialog Q: The sun is starting

    to set. I should probably head home. Dialog Q: The sun is starting to set. I should probably head home. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 238/260
  53. Scene 71 Panel 3 Dialog GP: Yes you should and

    Dialog GP: Yes you should and Qino Visits Grandpa Page 239/260
  54. Scene 72 Panel 1 Dialog GP: You did good today.

    Dialog GP: You did good today. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 240/260
  55. Scene 73 Panel 1 Dialog GP: Now get going. Dialog

    GP: Now get going. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 242/260
  56. Scene 73 Panel 2 Dialog GP: I don't want to

    get an angry visit from my daughter. Dialog GP: I don't want to get an angry visit from my daughter. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 243/260
  57. Scene 74 Panel 1 Dialog Q: Thank you again grandpa!

    I?ll visit again really soon! Dialog Q: Thank you again grandpa! I?ll visit again really soon! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 244/260
  58. Scene 74 Panel 2 Dialog Q: Thank you again grandpa!

    I?ll visit again really soon! Dialog Q: Thank you again grandpa! I?ll visit again really soon! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 245/260
  59. Scene 74 Panel 3 Dialog Q: Thank you again grandpa!

    I?ll visit again really soon! Dialog Q: Thank you again grandpa! I?ll visit again really soon! Qino Visits Grandpa Page 246/260
  60. Scene 75 Panel 1 Dialog Notes 74 to 76: I'd

    probably use high angles and really ample views to end that board on a relaxing note. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 247/260
  61. Scene 76 Panel 1 Dialog Notes 74 to 76: I'd

    probably use high angles and really ample views to end that board on a relaxing note. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 253/260