you for some help with a Spell I?m Working on for school. Dialog Q: Just wanted to ask you for some help with a Spell I?m Working on for school. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 67/260
Qino takes out the flowers, I would have the flowers be inside a box or something so they won't get smushed inside the bag. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 72/260
a clear image in your mind of whatyou want to happen. Dialog GP: Make sure you have a clear image in your mind of whatyou want to happen. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 106/260
arc of movement of that head isn't clear when you cut. Things should flow from one scene to the other imo to make it seem more readable when the action isn't too chaotic. Make Qino Visits Grandpa Page 146/260
Maybe your just a bit hungry. Lets grab some food. Dialog GP: Have You eaten yet? Maybe your just a bit hungry. Lets grab some food. Qino Visits Grandpa Page 157/260
with B.C. again, you could have it all be one continuous shot with a low angle for example to amplify a bit of tension, telling the viewer that this may be it. Add a bit more of Qino Visits Grandpa Page 214/260