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ILLYM_Grumpy Art Teacher (Excerpt)

5c1aa8f171374b061b1a811f62568dc9?s=47 Angelo Caba
November 20, 2021

ILLYM_Grumpy Art Teacher (Excerpt)

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Angelo Caba

November 20, 2021
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  11. Scene 1 Panel 11 / 22 Dialog CLASSMATE “Where’s the

    other eye”
  12. Scene 1 Panel 12 / 22 Dialog ILLY “Uhhh im

    not there yet”
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  17. Scene 1 Panel 17 / 22 Dialog CLASSMATE “Is it

    a cyclops”
  18. Scene 1 Panel 18 / 22 Dialog ILLY “IT'S NOT-

  19. Scene 1 Panel 19 / 22 Dialog ILLY JUST-

  20. Scene 1 Panel 20 / 22 Dialog ILLY just gimme

    a second…
  21. Scene 1 Panel 21 / 22 Dialog ILLY just gimme

    a second…
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  25. Scene 2 Panel 3 / 9 Dialog ...

  26. Scene 2 Panel 4 / 9 Dialog CLASSMATE “Can you

    draw me--?”
  27. Scene 2 Panel 5 / 9 Dialog ILLY “NO!

  28. Scene 2 Panel 6 / 9 Dialog ILLY GET OUTTA

    HERE!”
  29. Scene 2 Panel 7 / 9 Dialog ILLY GET OUTTA

    HERE!”
  30. Scene 2 Panel 8 / 9 Dialog ILLY ...

  31. Scene 2 Panel 9 / 9 Dialog ILLY: Growing up,

    I was known as one of the art kids.
  32. Scene 1 Panel 1 / 2 Dialog ILLY VO: When

    there was a page to color..
  33. Scene 1 Panel 2 / 2 Dialog ILLY VO: When

    there was a page to color..
  34. Scene 2 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: the

    other kids would borrow my markers.
  35. Scene 3 Panel 1 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: When

    there was a poster to make..
  36. Scene 3 Panel 2 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: When

    there was a poster to make
  37. Scene 3 Panel 3 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: When

    there was a poster to make-
  38. Scene 5 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: that’s

    when people wanted me in their group.
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  41. Scene 6 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    when I wasn’t struggling to run the mile in gym class,
  42. Scene 7 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: I

    was drawing lion king fanart in my notebooks.
  43. Scene 8 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    when I felt my best,
  44. Scene 9 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog LLY VO: …

    I was in art class.
  45. Scene 11 Panel 1 / 4 Dialog ILLY: At my

    high school,
  46. Scene 11 Panel 2 / 4 Dialog ILLY: the art

    room was located-
  47. Scene 11 Panel 3 / 4 Dialog ILLY: the art

    room was located-
  48. Scene 11 Panel 4 / 4 Dialog ILLY: at the

    end, pushed off into a corner.
  49. Scene 12 Panel 1 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  50. Scene 12 Panel 2 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  51. Scene 12 Panel 3 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  52. Scene 12 Panel 4 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  53. Scene 12 Panel 5 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  54. Scene 12 Panel 6 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  55. Scene 12 Panel 7 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  56. Scene 12 Panel 8 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  57. Scene 12 Panel 9 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
  58. Scene 12 Panel 10 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria.
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  60. Scene 12 Panel 12 / 13 Dialog ILLY: I’m not

    gonna use his real name cuz I respect his privacy, so I’ll call him…
  61. Scene 12 Panel 13 / 13 Dialog ILLY VO: Mr

    Hudson.
  62. Scene 13 Panel 1 / 5 Dialog ILLY: Cuz, he

    was a lot like Doc Hudson.
  63. Scene 13 Panel 2 / 5 Dialog ILLY: Yknow, the

    Fabulous Hudson Hornet? From the Pixar movie CARS?
  64. Scene 13 Panel 3 / 5 Dialog ILLY: Yknow, the

    Fabulous Hudson Hornet? From the Pixar movie CARS?
  65. Scene 13 Panel 4 / 5 Dialog (BEAT)

  66. Scene 13 Panel 5 / 5 Dialog ILLY: (disappointed sigh)

    Y’all have no taste.
  67. Scene 14 Panel 1 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: Mr.

    Hudson was an older dude with a deep voice,
  68. Scene 14 Panel 2 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: Mr.

    Hudson was an older dude with a deep voice
  69. Scene 14 Panel 3 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: and

    he’d been working at this high school for years.
  70. Scene 14 Panel 4 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: and

    he’d been working at this high school for years.
  71. Scene 15 Panel 1 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: He

    was kinda quiet, and presumably grumpy
  72. Scene 15 Panel 2 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: He

    was kinda quiet, and presumably grumpy
  73. Scene 15 Panel 3 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: cuz

    he mostly kept to himself.
  74. Scene 16 Panel 1 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: But

    once he realized you took art seriously.
  75. Scene 16 Panel 2 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: But

    once he realized you took art seriously...
  76. Scene 16 Panel 3 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: But

    once he realized you took art seriously...
  77. Scene 16 Panel 4 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: He

    would become...
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  80. Scene 16 Panel 5 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: He

    would become...
  81. Scene 16 Panel 6 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: …

    kind of a mentor.
  82. Scene 16 Panel 7 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: …

    kind of a mentor.
  83. Scene 17 Panel 1 / 2 Dialog ILLY: When I

    was in school, art wasn’t a very popular class to take,
  84. Scene 17 Panel 2 / 2 Dialog ILLY: When I

    was in school, art wasn’t a very popular class to take,
  85. Scene 18 Panel 1 / 8 Dialog ILLY: so if

    you did want to take Art Two-
  86. Scene 18 Panel 2 / 8

  87. Scene 18 Panel 3 / 8 Dialog ILLY VO: Three,

  88. Scene 18 Panel 4 / 8

  89. Scene 18 Panel 5 / 8 Dialog ILLY VO: Or

    Four,
  90. Scene 18 Panel 6 / 8

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  92. Scene 18 Panel 8 / 8 Dialog ILLY VO: they’d

    often combine all the art classes together into the same period.
  93. Scene 19 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: they’d

    often combine all the art classes together into the same period.
  94. Scene 20 Panel 1 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: So

    on my first day of art 1,
  95. Scene 20 Panel 2 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: So

    on my first day of art 1.
  96. Scene 20 Panel 3 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: the

    art 2 kids warned me not to get on Mr. Hudson’s “bad side” or else he’d “bark” at you.
  97. Scene 20 Panel 4 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: the

    art 2 kids warned me not to get on Mr. Hudson’s “bad side” or else he’d “bark” at you.
  98. Scene 20 Panel 5 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: They

    assured me he can be really chill, and he’ll let you listen to your music with headphones on
  99. Scene 20 Panel 6 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: Just

    don’t talk once class starts.
  100. Scene 20 Panel 7 / 7 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    I thought they were just trying to scare me, so I didn’t listen. Which was mistake number 1!
  101. Clock Wipe

  102. Scene 21 Panel 1 / 6 Dialog ILLY VO: A

    few minutes into class, it’s quiet, I’m bored, and I didn’t have my headphones.
  103. Scene 21 Panel 2 / 6 Dialog ILLY VO: So

    I started talking to my friend.
  104. Scene 21 Panel 3 / 6 Dialog ILLY VO: We

    weren’t being loud, we were just talking. Which was mistake number 2!
  105. Scene 21 Panel 4 / 6 Dialog ILLY VO: The

    final mistake was when Mr. Hudson did his famous
  106. Scene 21 Panel 5 / 6 Dialog ILLY VO: The

    final mistake was when Mr. Hudson did his famous
  107. Scene 21 Panel 6 / 6 Dialog HUDSON: *COUGH COUGH

    CLEAR THROAT SOUND*
  108. Scene 22 Panel 1 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: and

    I was like…
  109. Scene 22 Panel 2 / 3 Dialog ILLY: well obviously

    that wasn’t directed at me--
  110. Scene 22 Panel 3 / 3 Dialog ILLY: well obviously

    that wasn’t directed at me--
  111. Scene 23 Panel 1 / 3 Dialog HUDSON: (loud, stern,

    monotone) “ENOUGH.”
  112. Scene 23 Panel 2 / 3 Dialog HUDSON: (loud, stern,

    monotone) “ENOUGH.”
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  114. Scene 23 Panel 3 / 3 Dialog HUDSON: (loud, stern,

    monotone) “ENOUGH.”
  115. Scene 24 Panel 1 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: So

    from that moment on,
  116. Scene 24 Panel 2 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: I

    did not speak a word until the bell rang.
  117. Scene 24 Panel 3 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: I

    did not speak a word until the bell rang.
  118. Scene 24 Panel 4 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    I was super intimidated by him.
  119. Scene 25 Panel 1 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: Especially

    during critique.
  120. Scene 25 Panel 2 / 4 Dialog ILLY: Every day,

    he’d check in, one-on-one, and give really good constructive criticism.
  121. Scene 25 Panel 3 / 4 Dialog ILLY: He wouldn’t

    just say..
  122. Scene 25 Panel 4 / 4 Dialog ILLY V.O: “that’s

    awful. what are you doing. you should quit art forever.” He would say something like,
  123. Scene 24 Panel 1 / 3 Dialog ILLY: He would

    say something like,
  124. Scene 24 Panel 2 / 3 Dialog HUDSON: “That’s looking

    a little muddy. Don’t forget to push the darks and pull in the lights for better contrast.”
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  126. Scene 24 Panel 3 / 3 Dialog HUDSON: “That’s looking

    a little muddy. Don’t forget to push the darks and pull in the lights for better contrast.”
  127. Scene 25 Panel 1 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: I

    remember I had a really bad habit of never knowing when to stop working on something.
  128. Scene 25 Panel 2 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: Like

    I’d be so obsessed with perfection that I wouldn't be turning things in on time,
  129. Scene 25 Panel 3 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: So

    he started checking in on me sooner…
  130. Scene 25 Panel 4 / 4 Dialog ILLY VO: though

    sometimes..
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  134. Scene 26 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: It

    was too late.
  135. Scene 27 Panel 1 / 11 Dialog ILLY: Aside from

    art advice, he would also offer..
  136. Scene 27 Panel 2 / 11 Dialog ILLY: life advice?

  137. Scene 27 Panel 3 / 11 Dialog ILLY: And by

    life advice, I mean-
  138. Scene 27 Panel 4 / 11 Dialog ILLY VO: He

    let us sneak into the teachers lounge to use the vending machine.
  139. Scene 27 Panel 5 / 11 Dialog ILLY VO: He

    let us sneak into the teachers lounge to use the vending machine.
  140. Scene 27 Panel 6 / 11 Dialog ILLY VO: He

    let us sneak into the teachers lounge to use the vending machine.
  141. Scene 27 Panel 7 / 11 Dialog ILLY VO: ALLEGEDLY-

  142. Scene 27 Panel 8 / 11 Dialog ILLY VO: (Slowly)

    Allegedly..
  143. Scene 27 Panel 9 / 11 Dialog ILLY: So if

    he says he doesn’t remember this,
  144. Scene 27 Panel 10 / 11 Dialog ILLY: I don’t

    either.
  145. Scene 27 Panel 11 / 11 Dialog ILLY: Must have

    been a dream.
  146. Scene 28 Panel 1 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    in that maybe-dream..
  147. Scene 28 Panel 2 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    in that maybe-dream..
  148. Scene 28 Panel 3 / 3 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    in that maybe-dream,,
  149. Scene 29 Panel 1 / 12 Dialog ILLY VO: Mr

    Hudson came into class w this HUGE bag and said
  150. Scene 29 Panel 2 / 12 Dialog (THUD)

  151. Scene 29 Panel 3 / 12 Dialog HUDSON: “Come get

    a snack.”
  152. Scene 29 Panel 4 / 12 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    it was STUFFED with vending machine food: the good kind!
  153. Scene 29 Panel 5 / 12 Dialog ILLY VO: Candy

    bars
  154. Scene 29 Panel 6 / 12 Dialog ILLY VO: Fruit

    snacks
  155. Scene 29 Panel 7 / 12 Dialog ILLY VO: Donuts

  156. Scene 29 Panel 8 / 12 Dialog ILLY VO: Guava

    juice, Giant snake, birthday cake, large fries, chocolate shake—!
  157. Scene 29 Panel 9 / 12 Dialog ILLY: Why did

    you spend so much money on snacks?
  158. Scene 29 Panel 10 / 12 Dialog HUDSON: I didn’t.

  159. Scene 29 Panel 11 / 12 Dialog ILLY VO: He

    slid his keys over to me.
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  163. Scene 29_A Panel 1 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: The machine

    says there’s 75 cents already in it.
  164. Scene 29_A Panel 2 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: Put five

    cents in.
  165. Scene 29_A Panel 3 / 11

  166. Scene 29_A Panel 4 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: Press 5

    0 1.
  167. Scene 29_A Panel 5 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: Press 5

    0 1.
  168. Scene 29_A Panel 6 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: Press 5

    0 1.
  169. Scene 29_A Panel 7 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: Get the

    snack.
  170. Scene 29_A Panel 8 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: Get the

    snack.
  171. Scene 29_A Panel 9 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: Wait 5

    seconds.
  172. Scene 29_A Panel 10 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: The machine

    will read 75 cents again.
  173. Scene 29_A Panel 11 / 11 Dialog HUDSON: Put another

    5 cents in,
  174. Scene 30 Panel 1 / 3 Dialog HUDSON (O.S): and

    bring back as much as you can before anyone sees you.
  175. Scene 30 Panel 2 / 3 Dialog ILLY: OH-

  176. Scene 30 Panel 3 / 3 Dialog ILLY: Ok…

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  181. Scene 31 Panel 3 / 6 Dialog HUDSON: “Don’t add

    more than 5 cents or it won’t work.”
  182. Scene 31 Panel 4 / 6 Dialog HUDSON: “Don’t add

    more than 5 cents or it won’t work.”
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  185. Scene 32 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: Turns

    out he was a chaotic good!
  186. Dissolve

  187. Scene 33 Panel 1 / 1 Dialog ILLY VO: And

    I was lawful good.
  188. Scene 40 Panel 1 / 3 Dialog HUDSON: Why didn’t

    you get more???
  189. Scene 40 Panel 2 / 3 Dialog HUDSON: Why didn’t

    you get more???
  190. Scene 40 Panel 3 / 3 Dialog ILLY: I felt

    bad