ILLYM_Grumpy Art Teacher (Excerpt)

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11. Scene 1 Panel 11 Dialog CLASSMATE “Where’s the other eye” Page 11/188
12. Scene 1 Panel 12 Dialog ILLY “Uhhh im not there yet” Page 12/188
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17. Scene 1 Panel 17 Dialog CLASSMATE “Is it a cyclops” Page 17/188
18. Scene 1 Panel 18 Dialog ILLY “IT'S NOT- Page 18/188
19. Scene 1 Panel 19 Dialog ILLY JUST- Page 19/188
20. Scene 1 Panel 20 Dialog ILLY just gimme a second… Page 20/188
21. Scene 1 Panel 21 Dialog ILLY just gimme a second… Page 21/188
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25. Scene 2 Panel 3 Dialog ... Page 25/188
26. Scene 2 Panel 4 Dialog CLASSMATE “Can you draw me--?” Page 26/188
27. Scene 2 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY “NO! Page 27/188
28. Scene 2 Panel 6 Dialog ILLY GET OUTTA HERE!” Page 28/188
29. Scene 2 Panel 7 Dialog ILLY GET OUTTA HERE!” Page 29/188
30. Scene 2 Panel 8 Dialog ILLY ... Page 30/188
31. Scene 2 Panel 9 Dialog ILLY: Growing up, I was known as one of the art kids. Page 31/188
32. Scene 3 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: When there was a page to color.. Page 32/188
33. Scene 3 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: When there was a page to color.. Page 33/188
34. Scene 4 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: the other kids would borrow my markers. Page 34/188
35. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: When there was a poster to make.. Page 35/188
36. Scene 5 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: When there was a poster to make Page 36/188
37. Scene 5 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: When there was a poster to make- Page 37/188
38. Scene 6 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: that’s when people wanted me in their group. Page 38/188
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41. Scene 7 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: And when I wasn’t struggling to run the mile in gym class, Page 41/188
42. Scene 8 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: I was drawing lion king fanart in my notebooks. Page 42/188
43. Scene 9 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: And when I felt my best, Page 43/188
44. Scene 10 Panel 1 Dialog LLY VO: … I was in art class. Page 44/188
45. Scene 11 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY: At my high school, Page 45/188
46. Scene 11 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY: the art room was located- Page 46/188
47. Scene 11 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY: the art room was located- Page 47/188
48. Scene 11 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY: at the end, pushed off into a corner. Page 48/188
49. Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 49/188
50. Scene 12 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 50/188
51. Scene 12 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 51/188
52. Scene 12 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 52/188
53. Scene 12 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 53/188
54. Scene 12 Panel 6 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 54/188
55. Scene 12 Panel 7 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 55/188
56. Scene 12 Panel 8 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 56/188
57. Scene 12 Panel 9 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 57/188
58. Scene 12 Panel 10 Dialog ILLY VO: And my teacher would let me and all the other art kids eat lunch in there instead of in the loud, busy cafeteria. Page 58/188
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60. Scene 12 Panel 12 Dialog ILLY: I’m not gonna use his real name cuz I respect his privacy, so I’ll call him… Page 60/188
61. Scene 12 Panel 13 Dialog ILLY VO: Mr Hudson. Page 61/188
62. Scene 13 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY: Cuz, he was a lot like Doc Hudson. Page 62/188
63. Scene 13 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY: Yknow, the Fabulous Hudson Hornet? From the Pixar movie CARS? Page 63/188
64. Scene 13 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY: Yknow, the Fabulous Hudson Hornet? From the Pixar movie CARS? Page 64/188
65. Scene 13 Panel 4 Dialog (BEAT) Page 65/188
66. Scene 13 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY: (disappointed sigh) Y’all have no taste. Page 66/188
67. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: Mr. Hudson was an older dude with a deep voice, Page 67/188
68. Scene 14 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: Mr. Hudson was an older dude with a deep voice Page 68/188
69. Scene 14 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: and he’d been working at this high school for years. Page 69/188
70. Scene 14 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: and he’d been working at this high school for years. Page 70/188
71. Scene 15 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: He was kinda quiet, and presumably grumpy Page 71/188
72. Scene 15 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: He was kinda quiet, and presumably grumpy Page 72/188
73. Scene 15 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: cuz he mostly kept to himself. Page 73/188
74. Scene 16 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: But once he realized you took art seriously. Page 74/188
75. Scene 16 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: But once he realized you took art seriously... Page 75/188
76. Scene 16 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: But once he realized you took art seriously... Page 76/188
77. Scene 16 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: He would become... Page 77/188
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80. Scene 16 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY VO: He would become... Page 80/188
81. Scene 16 Panel 6 Dialog ILLY VO: … kind of a mentor. Page 81/188
82. Scene 16 Panel 7 Dialog ILLY VO: … kind of a mentor. Page 82/188
83. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY: When I was in school, art wasn’t a very popular class to take, Page 83/188
84. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY: When I was in school, art wasn’t a very popular class to take, Page 84/188
85. Scene 18 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY: so if you did want to take Art Two- Page 85/188
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87. Scene 18 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: Three, Page 87/188
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89. Scene 18 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY VO: Or Four, Page 89/188
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92. Scene 18 Panel 8 Dialog ILLY VO: they’d often combine all the art classes together into the same period. Page 92/188
93. Scene 19 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: they’d often combine all the art classes together into the same period. Page 93/188
94. Scene 20 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: So on my first day of art 1, Page 94/188
95. Scene 20 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: So on my first day of art 1. Page 95/188
96. Scene 20 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: the art 2 kids warned me not to get on Mr. Hudson’s “bad side” or else he’d “bark” at you. Page 96/188
97. Scene 20 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: the art 2 kids warned me not to get on Mr. Hudson’s “bad side” or else he’d “bark” at you. Page 97/188
98. Scene 20 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY VO: They assured me he can be really chill, and he’ll let you listen to your music with headphones on Page 98/188
99. Scene 20 Panel 6 Dialog ILLY VO: Just don’t talk once class starts. Page 99/188
100. Scene 20 Panel 7 Dialog ILLY VO: And I thought they were just trying to scare me, so I didn’t listen. Which was mistake number 1! Page 100/188
101. Scene 21 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: A few minutes into class, it’s quiet, I’m bored, and I didn’t have my headphones. Page 101/188
102. Scene 21 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: So I started talking to my friend. Page 102/188
103. Scene 21 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: We weren’t being loud, we were just talking. Which was mistake number 2! Page 103/188
104. Scene 21 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: The final mistake was when Mr. Hudson did his famous Page 104/188
105. Scene 21 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY VO: The final mistake was when Mr. Hudson did his famous Page 105/188
106. Scene 21 Panel 6 Dialog HUDSON: *COUGH COUGH CLEAR THROAT SOUND* Page 106/188
107. Scene 22 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: and I was like… Page 107/188
108. Scene 22 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY: well obviously that wasn’t directed at me-- Page 108/188
109. Scene 22 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY: well obviously that wasn’t directed at me-- Page 109/188
110. Scene 23 Panel 1 Dialog HUDSON: (loud, stern, monotone) “ENOUGH.” Page 110/188
111. Scene 23 Panel 2 Dialog HUDSON: (loud, stern, monotone) “ENOUGH.” Page 111/188
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113. Scene 23 Panel 3 Dialog HUDSON: (loud, stern, monotone) “ENOUGH.” Page 113/188
114. Scene 24 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: So from that moment on, Page 114/188
115. Scene 24 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: I did not speak a word until the bell rang. Page 115/188
116. Scene 24 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: I did not speak a word until the bell rang. Page 116/188
117. Scene 24 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: And I was super intimidated by him. Page 117/188
118. Scene 25 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: Especially during critique. Page 118/188
119. Scene 25 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY: Every day, he’d check in, one-on-one, and give really good constructive criticism. Page 119/188
120. Scene 25 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY: He wouldn’t just say.. Page 120/188
121. Scene 25 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY V.O: “that’s awful. what are you doing. you should quit art forever.” He would say something like, Page 121/188
122. Scene 26 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY: He would say something like, Page 122/188
123. Scene 26 Panel 2 Dialog HUDSON: “That’s looking a little muddy. Don’t forget to push the darks and pull in the lights for better contrast.” Page 123/188
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125. Scene 26 Panel 3 Dialog HUDSON: “That’s looking a little muddy. Don’t forget to push the darks and pull in the lights for better contrast.” Page 125/188
126. Scene 27 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: I remember I had a really bad habit of never knowing when to stop working on something. Page 126/188
127. Scene 27 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: Like I’d be so obsessed with perfection that I wouldn't be turning things in on time, Page 127/188
128. Scene 27 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: So he started checking in on me sooner… Page 128/188
129. Scene 27 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: though sometimes.. Page 129/188
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133. Scene 28 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: It was too late. Page 133/188
134. Scene 29 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY: Aside from art advice, he would also offer.. Page 134/188
135. Scene 29 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY: life advice? Page 135/188
136. Scene 29 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY: And by life advice, I mean- Page 136/188
137. Scene 29 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: He let us sneak into the teachers lounge to use the vending machine. Page 137/188
138. Scene 29 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY VO: He let us sneak into the teachers lounge to use the vending machine. Page 138/188
139. Scene 29 Panel 6 Dialog ILLY VO: He let us sneak into the teachers lounge to use the vending machine. Page 139/188
140. Scene 29 Panel 7 Dialog ILLY VO: ALLEGEDLY- Page 140/188
141. Scene 29 Panel 8 Dialog ILLY VO: (Slowly) Allegedly.. Page 141/188
142. Scene 29 Panel 9 Dialog ILLY: So if he says he doesn’t remember this, Page 142/188
143. Scene 29 Panel 10 Dialog ILLY: I don’t either. Page 143/188
144. Scene 29 Panel 11 Dialog ILLY: Must have been a dream. Page 144/188
145. Scene 30 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: And in that maybe-dream.. Page 145/188
146. Scene 30 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY VO: And in that maybe-dream.. Page 146/188
147. Scene 30 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY VO: And in that maybe-dream,, Page 147/188
148. Scene 31 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: Mr Hudson came into class w this HUGE bag and said Page 148/188
149. Scene 31 Panel 2 Dialog (THUD) Page 149/188
150. Scene 31 Panel 3 Dialog HUDSON: “Come get a snack.” Page 150/188
151. Scene 31 Panel 4 Dialog ILLY VO: And it was STUFFED with vending machine food: the good kind! Page 151/188
152. Scene 31 Panel 5 Dialog ILLY VO: Candy bars Page 152/188
153. Scene 31 Panel 6 Dialog ILLY VO: Fruit snacks Page 153/188
154. Scene 31 Panel 7 Dialog ILLY VO: Donuts Page 154/188
155. Scene 31 Panel 8 Dialog ILLY VO: Guava juice, Giant snake, birthday cake, large fries, chocolate shake—! Page 155/188
156. Scene 31 Panel 9 Dialog ILLY: Why did you spend so much money on snacks? Page 156/188
157. Scene 31 Panel 10 Dialog HUDSON: I didn’t. Page 157/188
158. Scene 31 Panel 11 Dialog ILLY VO: He slid his keys over to me. Page 158/188
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162. Scene 32 Panel 1 Dialog HUDSON: The machine says there’s 75 cents already in it. Page 162/188
163. Scene 32 Panel 2 Dialog HUDSON: Put five cents in. Page 163/188
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165. Scene 32 Panel 4 Dialog HUDSON: Press 5 0 1. Page 165/188
166. Scene 32 Panel 5 Dialog HUDSON: Press 5 0 1. Page 166/188
167. Scene 32 Panel 6 Dialog HUDSON: Press 5 0 1. Page 167/188
168. Scene 32 Panel 7 Dialog HUDSON: Get the snack. Page 168/188
169. Scene 32 Panel 8 Dialog HUDSON: Get the snack. Page 169/188
170. Scene 32 Panel 9 Dialog HUDSON: Wait 5 seconds. Page 170/188
171. Scene 32 Panel 10 Dialog HUDSON: The machine will read 75 cents again. Page 171/188
172. Scene 32 Panel 11 Dialog HUDSON: Put another 5 cents in, Page 172/188
173. Scene 33 Panel 1 Dialog HUDSON (O.S): and bring back as much as you can before anyone sees you. Page 173/188
174. Scene 33 Panel 2 Dialog ILLY: OH- Page 174/188
175. Scene 33 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY: Ok… Page 175/188
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180. Scene 34 Panel 3 Dialog HUDSON: “Don’t add more than 5 cents or it won’t work.” Page 180/188
181. Scene 34 Panel 4 Dialog HUDSON: “Don’t add more than 5 cents or it won’t work.” Page 181/188
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184. Scene 35 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: Turns out he was a chaotic good! Page 184/188
185. Scene 36 Panel 1 Dialog ILLY VO: And I was lawful good. Page 185/188
186. Scene 37 Panel 1 Dialog HUDSON: Why didn’t you get more??? Page 186/188
187. Scene 37 Panel 2 Dialog HUDSON: Why didn’t you get more??? Page 187/188
188. Scene 37 Panel 3 Dialog ILLY: I felt bad Page 188/188