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Ballroom Escape WIP

Ballroom Escape WIP

Work in progress of a personal board sequence

Maggie Dybas 2021
maggiedybas@gmail.com

92b3363a39c1ec6bdd825516e5b32810?s=128

applefix

July 06, 2021
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Transcript

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  65. Scene 12 Panel 4 Dialog SEB: May I have this

    dance, my lady?
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  67. Scene 13 Panel 2 Dialog WRIN: Actually, I was just

    about to retire for...
  68. Scene 13 Panel 3 Dialog WRIN: ...the night.

  69. Scene 13 Panel 4 Dialog WRIN: Actually, I was just

    about to retire for the night.
  70. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog SEB: Nonsense!

  71. Scene 14 Panel 2 Dialog SEB: Nonsense!

  72. Scene 14 Panel 3 Dialog SEB: the fun has only

  73. Scene 14 Panel 4 Dialog SEB: just begun!

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  76. Scene 15 Panel 2 Dialog SEB: Besides,

  77. Scene 15 Panel 3 Dialog SEB: you wouldn't want to

    miss your chance to dance with the best. WRIN: (awkward laughter)
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  111. Scene 21 Panel 6 Dialog VIRGIL: Its rude to keep

    your next partner waiting.
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  115. Scene 24 Panel 1 Dialog SEB: hmph

  116. Scene 25 Panel 1 Dialog SEB: Fine, fine

  117. Scene 25 Panel 2 Dialog SEB: Don't miss me too

    much...
  118. Scene 25 Panel 3 Dialog SEB: ... my lady.

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  124. Scene 25 Panel 9 Dialog VIRGIL: Hey there.

  125. Scene 25 Panel 10 Dialog Virgil: Are you alright?

  126. Scene 25 Panel 11 Dialog Wrin: It seems that I

    missed my chance to leave
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  130. Scene 27 Panel 1 Dialog VIRGIL: Not necessarily...

  131. Scene 27 Panel 2 Dialog VIRGIL: Follow my lead.

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  144. Scene 30 Panel 3 Dialog MOTHER: What are you doing,

    child?
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  151. Scene 31 Panel 4 Dialog MOTHER: You should be dancing

    with Sebastian.
  152. Scene 31 Panel 5 Dialog WRIN: I know, mother but..

  153. Scene 31 Panel 6 Dialog MOTHER: Tsk, I will not

    listen to any excuses.
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  155. Scene 31 Panel 8 Dialog MOTHER: I know you have

    reservations but
  156. Scene 32 Panel 1 Dialog MOTHER: you may find that

    you will enjoy his company
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  159. Scene 33 Panel 1 Dialog MOTHER: Do you think I

    will continue to invest in your future if you act this way?
  160. Scene 34 Panel 1 Dialog MOTHER: you have become an

    embarrassment to this family.
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  162. Scene 35 Panel 2 Dialog WRIN (SFX sounds of distress)

  163. Scene 35 Panel 3 Dialog WRIN: What-

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  165. Scene 36 Panel 2 Dialog WRIN: Hold on-

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  167. Scene 37 Panel 1 Dialog WRIN: Wait-

  168. Scene 37 Panel 2 Dialog WRIN (SFX sounds of struggle)

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  173. Scene 37 Panel 7 Dialog WRIN (SFX UGH)

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  178. Scene 38 Panel 1 Dialog MOTHER: start growing up.

  179. Scene 39 Panel 1 Dialog MOTHER (OS): This childish behavior

  180. Scene 39 Panel 2 Dialog MOTHER: has been unacceptable.

  181. Scene 40 Panel 1 Dialog WRIN: (yelling) I'm not a

    child!
  182. Scene 40 Panel 2 Dialog WRIN: (yelling) I'm not a

    child!
  183. Scene 40 Panel 3 Dialog WRIN: (yelling) I'm not a

    child!
  184. Scene 41 Panel 1 Dialog WRIN: I can make my

    own choices! I don't need
  185. Scene 41 Panel 2 Dialog WRIN: YOU to arrange my

    future FOR ME!
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  189. Scene 42 Panel 3 Dialog MOTHER: People are staring, child.

  190. Scene 42 Panel 4 Dialog MOTHER: Calm yourself.

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  196. Scene 43 Panel 6 Dialog Virgil: Wrin...

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