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CHANGED - Scenes 3-4

CHANGED - Scenes 3-4

Ian Crovella

March 02, 2022
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  1. Scene 1 Panel 2 Action Notes Cut from black. Phone

    still rings. changed 3 Page 2/21
  2. Scene 1 Panel 3 Action Notes Ambulance and police sirens

    are heard as the scene illuminates. changed 3 Page 3/21
  3. Scene 2 Panel 2 Action Notes Road shows signs of

    damage and tire tracks. changed 3 Page 5/21
  4. Scene 3 Panel 3 Action Notes ...Alerting the officer to

    the wounded man. changed 3 Page 9/21
  5. Scene 4 Panel 3 Action Notes EMT hand reaches out

    and places oxygen mask on Jesse. changed 3 Page 13/21
  6. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog Medic: Just relax, dear. You're

    going to be alright. Action Notes changed 3 Page 15/21
  7. Sky moves slightly to indicate carrier being pushed forward; camera

    is fixed to Jesse's head. changed 3 Page 16/21
  8. Scene 6 Panel 1 Action Notes The camera shakes slightly

    to match the shaky movement of the stretcher across the ground. changed 3 Page 17/21
  9. Scene 6 Panel 2 Action Notes Jesse closes his eyes

    in exhaustion. changed 3 Page 18/21
  10. Scene 7 Panel 3 Action Notes ...But runs out of

    battery. This aligns with the music cutting off. changed 3 Page 21/21
  11. Scene 2 Panel 1 Notes Hoffman and Jesse are shown

    from behind, seated in the foreground. changed 4 Page 2/13
  12. Scene 3 Panel 1 Dialog Hoffman: Donahue, there's no kind

    way to say this. changed 4 Page 3/13
  13. Scene 4 Panel 1 Dialog Hoffman: Thought I might finally

    get a break from that joker, Palmer, and see what a real officer's like. But in your condition, it's just not possible anymore. A job in the filing room is the best I can offer you. changed 4 Page 4/13
  14. Scene 5 Panel 1 Action Notes Jesse digs his nails

    into the chair. changed 4 Page 5/13
  15. Scene 5 Panel 2 Dialog Jesse: I see. Because the

    crippled kid couldn't be as valuable as one of your able-bodied officers, right? changed 4 Page 6/13
  16. Scene 6 Panel 2 Action Notes Camera moves down slightly.

    Hoffman shakes his head in defeat. changed 4 Page 8/13
  17. Scene 7 Panel 1 Dialog Jesse: You never wanted me

    on the force, did you? Even when I was all together, you didn't support me. changed 4 Page 9/13
  18. Scene 8 Panel 1 Dialog Hoffman: You know that's not

    true, Donahue! changed 4 Page 10/13
  19. Scene 8 Panel 2 Dialog Hoffman: And I still do

    want you. That's what makes this so hard. changed 4 Page 11/13
  20. Scene 9 Panel 1 Dialog Jesse: ...Whatever helps you sleep

    at night, chief. changed 4 Page 12/13
  21. Scene 9 Panel 2 Action Notes Jesse leaves by rolling

    his wheelchair. changed 4 Page 13/13