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Drumbo's Big Break (part 1)

A1f12e862e83260e52dfd82a2b977741?s=47 Ian Crovella
December 03, 2020

Drumbo's Big Break (part 1)

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Ian Crovella

December 03, 2020
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  1. Scene 1 Duration 01:19 Panel 1 Duration 01:19 Notes Exterior

    of Cradenza's studio. Drumbo's Big Break Page 1/38
  2. Scene 2 Duration 06:17 Panel 1 Duration 04:13 Dialogue Drumbo:

    Come on, Axel! Can we please do another take? Please? Action Notes Axel scuffs his feet across the ground to move forward, as Drumbo hangs onto his right leg. Drumbo's Big Break Page 2/38
  3. Scene 2 Duration 06:17 Panel 2 Duration 02:04 Dialogue Axel:

    Get off of me, you beater! Drumbo's Big Break Page 3/38
  4. Scene 3 Duration 15:08 Panel 1 Duration 00:11 Action Notes

    Axel collapses into the seat. Drumbo's Big Break Page 4/38
  5. Scene 3 Duration 15:08 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Drumbo's Big

    Break Page 5/38
  6. Scene 3 Duration 15:08 Panel 3 Duration 07:17 Dialogue Axel:

    Ugh... We've been workshopping songs for a week, and they're all shoddy! How're we gonna be ready for the show on Friday? Drumbo's Big Break Page 6/38
  7. Scene 3 Duration 15:08 Panel 4 Duration 02:05 Dialogue Drumbo:

    We could always try some new drum lines! Drumbo's Big Break Page 7/38
  8. Scene 3 Duration 15:08 Panel 5 Duration 01:11 Dialogue Axel:

    THAT WON'T WORK! Drumbo's Big Break Page 8/38
  9. Scene 3 Duration 15:08 Panel 6 Duration 01:12 Dialogue Axel:

    These songs are flawed... Drumbo's Big Break Page 9/38
  10. Scene 3 Duration 15:08 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialogue Axel:

    ...at the core. Action Notes Axel throws the crumpled up sheet music. Drumbo's Big Break Page 10/38
  11. Scene 4 Duration 07:20 Panel 1 Duration 00:18 Action Notes

    Gibbs catches the paper. Drumbo's Big Break Page 11/38
  12. Scene 4 Duration 07:20 Panel 2 Duration 03:06 Dialogue Gibbs:

    Well, Axel, what'd you expect? You wrote them. Drumbo's Big Break Page 12/38
  13. Scene 4 Duration 07:20 Panel 3 Duration 01:10 Dialogue Simon:

    Hahaha!! Drumbo's Big Break Page 13/38
  14. Scene 4 Duration 07:20 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    The mug pushes down on Simon's cymbal hat, making a sound like a hi-hat crash. Drumbo's Big Break Page 14/38
  15. Scene 4 Duration 07:20 Panel 5 Duration 01:10 Drumbo's Big

    Break Page 15/38
  16. Scene 5 Duration 06:09 Panel 1 Duration 02:19 Dialogue Axel:

    Maybe I should just quit the music business. Drumbo's Big Break Page 16/38
  17. Scene 5 Duration 06:09 Panel 2 Duration 00:10 Drumbo's Big

    Break Page 17/38
  18. Scene 5 Duration 06:09 Panel 3 Duration 03:04 Dialogue Axel:

    Spare myself from the plague of mediocrity! Drumbo's Big Break Page 18/38
  19. Scene 6 Duration 04:02 Panel 1 Duration 00:12 Drumbo's Big

    Break Page 19/38
  20. Scene 6 Duration 04:02 Panel 2 Duration 02:17 Dialogue Drumbo:

    Axel, you're no medi-ocriter! Drumbo's Big Break Page 20/38
  21. Scene 6 Duration 04:02 Panel 3 Duration 00:08 Drumbo's Big

    Break Page 21/38
  22. Scene 6 Duration 04:02 Panel 4 Duration 00:13 Drumbo's Big

    Break Page 22/38
  23. Scene 7 Duration 02:11 Panel 1 Duration 02:11 Dialogue Drumbo:

    We just gotta find our Yeah-Factor! Drumbo's Big Break Page 23/38
  24. Scene 8 Duration 00:22 Panel 1 Duration 00:22 Dialogue Axel:

    Our what? Drumbo's Big Break Page 24/38
  25. Scene 9 Duration 09:12 Panel 1 Duration 01:16 Dialogue Drumbo:

    Our Yeah-Factor! Drumbo's Big Break Page 25/38
  26. Scene 9 Duration 09:12 Panel 2 Duration 03:20 Dialogue Drumbo:

    When Yeah started out, they were just like any other rock band. Drumbo's Big Break Page 26/38
  27. Scene 9 Duration 09:12 Panel 3 Duration 04:00 Dialogue Drumbo:

    But one day, they found a way to set themselves apart from everyone else! Drumbo's Big Break Page 27/38
  28. Scene 10 Duration 02:13 Panel 1 Duration 02:13 Dialogue Simon:

    Making their songs really long and pretentious? Action Notes Gibbs and Simon walk in from left and stop where they're drawn. Drumbo's Big Break Page 28/38
  29. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 1 Duration 02:19 Dialogue Drumbo:

    Exactly! So you see, guys? Drumbo's Big Break Page 29/38
  30. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 2 Duration 03:18 Dialogue Drumbo:

    We just have to find that one special, secret thing about Hedbang. Drumbo's Big Break Page 30/38
  31. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 3 Duration 02:23 Dialogue Drumbo:

    And once we do, we're gonna become the greatest rock stars... Action Notes Fades to a background of various objects. Drumbo appears to be floating through it. Drumbo's Big Break Page 31/38
  32. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 4 Duration 01:22 Dialogue Drumbo:

    ...Of all time! Action Notes Fades to a matching shot of Drumbo on a massive band poster. Drumbo's Big Break Page 32/38
  33. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 5 Duration 01:20 Dialogue Gibbs:

    Check your ego, Drumbo. Drumbo's Big Break Page 33/38
  34. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 6 Duration 00:11 Action Notes

    Gibbs flicks the giant poster, cracking it; Drumbo's expression changes. Drumbo's Big Break Page 34/38
  35. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 7 Duration 00:19 Action Notes

    The entire screen shatters and falls away; Drumbo's delusion is broken. Drumbo's Big Break Page 35/38
  36. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 8 Duration 00:17 Action Notes

    Drumbo remains in the air for a moment... Drumbo's Big Break Page 36/38
  37. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 9 Duration 00:21 Action Notes

    ...then falls. Drumbo's Big Break Page 37/38
  38. Scene 11 Duration 19:05 Panel 10 Duration 03:03 Dialogue Gibbs:

    If we aren't gonna work, I'm watchin' TV. Action Notes Gibbs sits down and pulls out the TV remote from behind him. Drumbo's Big Break Page 38/38