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You're It

Fredkq1
September 26, 2023

You're It

A story about two children trying to escape hell

Fredkq1

September 26, 2023
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  1. Scene 2 Duration 02 00 Panel 1 Duration 02 00

    Action Notes ZURUI age 13 and DEE, age 14 stand before DION, a creepy looking being, confused You're It Page 2/265
  2. Scene 3 Duration 02 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    Action Notes Dion sits at a high desk reading a gaudy magazine You're It Page 3/265
  3. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    Dialog ZURUI Ugh You're It Page 7/265
  4. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 4 Duration 01 21

    Dialog ZURUI It's so hot in here You're It Page 8/265
  5. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 5 Duration 01 00

    Dialog ZURUI Wait You're It Page 9/265
  6. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 6 Duration 00 14

    Action Notes Zuriu looks around You're It Page 10/265
  7. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 8 Duration 03 12

    Dialog ZURIU Where am I? You're It Page 12/265
  8. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 10 Duration 00 17

    Dialog DEE Hey.. You're It Page 14/265
  9. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 11 Duration 00 20

    Dialog DEE ..bone head You're It Page 15/265
  10. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 12 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DEE What the fuck is this place? You're It Page 16/265
  11. Scene 4 Duration 15 11 Panel 13 Duration 01 07

    Dialog DEE What the fuck is this place? You're It Page 17/265
  12. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    Action Notes A dust cloud passes by You're It Page 19/265
  13. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 6 Duration 01 00

    Action Notes Dion Sneezes Dion drops newspaper You're It Page 23/265
  14. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 7 Duration 01 00

    Action Notes Then rubs nose You're It Page 24/265
  15. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 8 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION Stupid dust You're It Page 25/265
  16. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 10 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION guests? You're It Page 27/265
  17. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 11 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION Amazing! You're It Page 28/265
  18. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 12 Duration 00 21

    Dialog DION I gotta tell ya.. You're It Page 29/265
  19. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 13 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION Iʼve been literally You're It Page 30/265
  20. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 14 Duration 00 18

    Dialog DION dying You're It Page 31/265
  21. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 15 Duration 00 22

    Dialog DION of boredom over here You're It Page 32/265
  22. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 16 Duration 00 16

    Action Notes He laughs You're It Page 33/265
  23. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 17 Duration 00 17

    Action Notes and slaps his knee You're It Page 34/265
  24. Scene 5 Duration 17 02 Panel 18 Duration 01 11

    Dialog DION let's have some fun You're It Page 35/265
  25. Scene 6 Duration 03 13 Panel 1 Duration 01 16

    Dialog DEE Ugh, I donʼt have time for this. You're It Page 36/265
  26. Scene 6 Duration 03 13 Panel 3 Duration 01 08

    Dialog DEE where the hell is the exit You're It Page 38/265
  27. Scene 7 Duration 00 21 Panel 2 Duration 00 12

    Action Notes Dion chuckles at the mention of the word “hell”.. You're It Page 40/265
  28. Scene 8 Duration 02 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DEE You better show us the exit.. You're It Page 41/265
  29. Scene 8 Duration 02 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DEE ..or i'm gonna kick your ass You're It Page 42/265
  30. Scene 9 Duration 02 10 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    Dialog ZURIU W- wait You're It Page 43/265
  31. Scene 9 Duration 02 10 Panel 2 Duration 01 10

    Dialog ZURUI Shut up for one second You're It Page 44/265
  32. Scene 10 Duration 02 08 Panel 1 Duration 00 11

    Dialog DEE The fuck did you just say to me four eyes? You're It Page 45/265
  33. Scene 10 Duration 02 08 Panel 2 Duration 00 10

    Dialog DEE The fuck did you just say to me four eyes? You're It Page 46/265
  34. Scene 10 Duration 02 08 Panel 3 Duration 00 17

    Dialog DEE The fuck did you just say to me four eyes? You're It Page 47/265
  35. Scene 10 Duration 02 08 Panel 4 Duration 00 18

    Dialog DEE The fuck did you just say to me four eyes? You're It Page 48/265
  36. Scene 12 Duration 04 07 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    Dialog ZURIU Hell... You're It Page 55/265
  37. Scene 12 Duration 04 07 Panel 4 Duration 01 00

    Dialog ZURIU ..Thatʼs where we are, right? You're It Page 56/265
  38. Scene 12 Duration 04 07 Panel 5 Duration 01 00

    Dialog ZURIU ..Thatʼs where we are, right? You're It Page 57/265
  39. Scene 13 Duration 02 22 Panel 3 Duration 00 12

    Action Notes Dion jumps down You're It Page 60/265
  40. Scene 14 Duration 01 19 Panel 3 Duration 00 15

    Action Notes Dion You're It Page 66/265
  41. Scene 15 Duration 08 05 Panel 2 Duration 00 20

    Dialog DION You two were sent here for being snot nose delinquents during your.. You're It Page 68/265
  42. Scene 15 Duration 08 05 Panel 3 Duration 02 20

    Dialog DION You two were sent here for being snot nose delinquents during your.. You're It Page 69/265
  43. Scene 15 Duration 08 05 Panel 4 Duration 01 12

    Dialog DION uh..*short* time on earth You're It Page 70/265
  44. Scene 15 Duration 08 05 Panel 5 Duration 02 05

    Dialog DION uh..*short* time on earth You're It Page 71/265
  45. Scene 16 Duration 02 08 Panel 2 Duration 01 08

    Action Notes EXT. SCHOOL -DAY Scene of Dee bullying a kid with her gang You're It Page 73/265
  46. Scene 17 Duration 08 13 Panel 1 Duration 01 17

    Dialog DEE Thatʼs what u get for messing with us You're It Page 74/265
  47. Scene 17 Duration 08 13 Panel 2 Duration 01 17

    Dialog DEE Thatʼs what u get for messing with us You're It Page 75/265
  48. Scene 17 Duration 08 13 Panel 3 Duration 01 17

    Dialog DEE Thatʼs what u get for messing with us You're It Page 76/265
  49. Scene 17 Duration 08 13 Panel 4 Duration 01 17

    Dialog DEE ..now scram You're It Page 77/265
  50. Scene 17 Duration 08 13 Panel 5 Duration 01 17

    Dialog FROEND heh heh You're It Page 78/265
  51. Scene 18 Duration 02 15 Panel 1 Duration 00 21

    Action Notes EXT. STREET -DAY Zuriu is staring off screen You're It Page 79/265
  52. Scene 18 Duration 02 15 Panel 2 Duration 00 21

    Action Notes EXT. STREET -DAY Zuriu is staring off screen You're It Page 81/265
  53. Scene 18 Duration 02 15 Panel 3 Duration 00 21

    Action Notes EXT. STREET -DAY Zuriu is staring off screen You're It Page 83/265
  54. Scene 18_A_0 Duration 02 15 Panel 2 Duration 00 21

    Dialog ZURIU huh? You're It Page 94/265
  55. Scene 18_A_0 Duration 02 15 Panel 3 Duration 00 21

    Action Notes The old man stops to check his phone You're It Page 95/265
  56. Scene 18_A_0_A_0 Duration 01 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    Action Notes Zuriu notices the old man's wallet You're It Page 96/265
  57. Scene 18_A_0_A Duration 00 21 Panel 1 Duration 00 21

    Dialog ZURIU heh heh heh You're It Page 97/265
  58. Scene 20 Duration 00 10 Panel 1 Duration 00 10

    Action Notes Zuriu walks up to the old man without him noticing You're It Page 98/265
  59. Scene 22 Duration 04 07 Panel 1 Duration 01 11

    Dialog ZURIU Score! Guess i earned myself a milkshake You're It Page 101/265
  60. Scene 22 Duration 04 07 Panel 2 Duration 01 11

    Dialog ZURIU Score! Guess i earned myself a milkshake You're It Page 102/265
  61. Scene 22 Duration 04 07 Panel 3 Duration 01 09

    Dialog ZURIU Score! Guess i earned myself a milkshake You're It Page 103/265
  62. Scene 23 Duration 02 07 Panel 1 Duration 00 13

    Action Notes INT. HELL -DAY Dion laughs You're It Page 105/265
  63. Scene 23 Duration 02 07 Panel 2 Duration 00 13

    Dialog DION *exaggerated malicious laughter* You're It Page 106/265
  64. Scene 23 Duration 02 07 Panel 3 Duration 00 15

    Dialog DION *exaggerated malicious laughter* You're It Page 108/265
  65. Scene 23 Duration 02 07 Panel 4 Duration 00 14

    Dialog DION *exaggerated malicious laughter* You're It Page 109/265
  66. Scene 24 Duration 01 11 Panel 1 Duration 00 17

    Dialog DEE What do you want from us? You're It Page 110/265
  67. Scene 24 Duration 01 11 Panel 2 Duration 00 18

    Dialog DEE What do you want from us? You're It Page 111/265
  68. Scene 25 Duration 02 11 Panel 1 Duration 00 14

    Dialog DION Well.. You're It Page 112/265
  69. Scene 25 Duration 02 11 Panel 2 Duration 00 14

    Action Notes Dion rubs his chin You're It Page 113/265
  70. Scene 25 Duration 02 11 Panel 3 Duration 01 07

    Dialog DION ..iʼm just here to have fun. You're It Page 114/265
  71. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 2 Duration 00 17

    Dialog DION Oh You're It Page 117/265
  72. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 3 Duration 01 04

    Dialog DION I got it You're It Page 118/265
  73. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 4 Duration 01 06

    Dialog DION We'll let one of you live You're It Page 119/265
  74. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 5 Duration 01 04

    Dialog DION Let's see who's better You're It Page 120/265
  75. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 6 Duration 00 08

    Dialog DION Let's see who's better You're It Page 122/265
  76. Action Notes You might both run out of time before

    those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 123/265
  77. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 7 Duration 00 09

    Action Notes You might both run out of time before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 124/265
  78. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 8 Duration 00 09

    Dialog DION Your brains You're It Page 125/265
  79. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 9 Duration 00 13

    Dialog DION Your brains You're It Page 127/265
  80. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 10 Duration 00 11

    Dialog DION ..or your brawns You're It Page 128/265
  81. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 11 Duration 00 21

    Dialog DION ..or your brawns You're It Page 130/265
  82. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 12 Duration 00 05

    Action Notes You might both run out of time before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 131/265
  83. Scene 27 Duration 08 18 Panel 13 Duration 00 07

    Action Notes Dion's head lands back in its socket You're It Page 132/265
  84. Scene 28 Duration 05 13 Panel 1 Duration 05 13

    Dialog DION We'll do a game of tag. The first one that catches me wins and can return back to their body You're It Page 134/265
  85. Scene 29 Duration 04 22 Panel 1 Duration 02 22

    Dialog DION But of course. You might run out of time.. You're It Page 135/265
  86. Scene 29 Duration 04 22 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION ..before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 136/265
  87. Scene 29 Duration 04 22 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION ..before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 138/265
  88. Scene 30 Duration 01 04 Panel 1 Duration 00 14

    Dialog DION ..before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 139/265
  89. Scene 30 Duration 01 04 Panel 2 Duration 00 14

    Dialog DION ..before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 140/265
  90. Scene 31 Duration 03 00 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION ..before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 141/265
  91. Scene 31 Duration 03 00 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION ..before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 142/265
  92. Scene 31 Duration 03 00 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION ..before those flesh-bags of yours wonʼt be able to house your souls anymore! You're It Page 143/265
  93. Scene 34 Duration 06 20 Panel 3 Duration 00 20

    Dialog ZURIU I'm not strong enough to throw that far but.. You're It Page 150/265
  94. Scene 34 Duration 06 20 Panel 4 Duration 01 00

    Dialog ZURIU I'm not strong enough to throw that far but.. You're It Page 151/265
  95. Scene 34 Duration 06 20 Panel 6 Duration 01 00

    Dialog ZURIU I've got a plan You're It Page 153/265
  96. Scene 36 Duration 01 10 Panel 2 Duration 00 11

    Dialog ZURIU How's your throwing arm You're It Page 158/265
  97. Scene 36 Duration 01 10 Panel 3 Duration 00 11

    Dialog ZURIU How's your throwing arm You're It Page 159/265
  98. Scene 37 Duration 05 22 Panel 5 Duration 00 05

    Action Notes Dee catches the rock You're It Page 164/265
  99. Scene 37 Duration 05 22 Panel 6 Duration 04 23

    Dialog DEE You're only talking to the best pitcher of the Little rock Middle baseball team You're It Page 165/265
  100. Scene 38 Duration 01 08 Panel 4 Duration 00 09

    Action Notes De give's a pitcher's throw You're It Page 170/265
  101. Scene 39 Duration 08 07 Panel 5 Duration 00 06

    Action Notes The rock hit's the boulder The rock bounces off You're It Page 175/265
  102. Scene 39 Duration 08 07 Panel 9 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION Yikes You're It Page 180/265
  103. Scene 39 Duration 08 07 Panel 12 Duration 01 13

    Dialog DION Huh? You're It Page 184/265
  104. Scene 39 Duration 08 07 Panel 14 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION heh heh You're It Page 187/265
  105. Scene 40 Duration 03 17 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION Pathetic You're It Page 189/265
  106. Scene 40 Duration 03 17 Panel 3 Duration 01 00

    Action Notes Itʼs almost too late before he notices something is off You're It Page 190/265
  107. Scene 40 Duration 03 17 Panel 4 Duration 01 00

    Action Notes he looks left You're It Page 191/265
  108. Scene 41 Duration 03 15 Panel 3 Duration 00 09

    Dialog Dion Whatt You're It Page 194/265
  109. Scene 41 Duration 03 15 Panel 4 Duration 00 09

    Dialog Dion Whatt You're It Page 195/265
  110. Scene 41 Duration 03 15 Panel 5 Duration 00 11

    Dialog Dion Whatt You're It Page 196/265
  111. Scene 42 Duration 02 12 Panel 5 Duration 00 10

    Action Notes Rock falls Rock causes dust to fly You're It Page 203/265
  112. Scene 43 Duration 01 07 Panel 1 Duration 00 14

    Dialog Dion coughs You're It Page 206/265
  113. Scene 44 Duration 03 13 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION Asthma You're It Page 208/265
  114. Scene 44 Duration 03 13 Panel 2 Duration 01 00

    Dialog DION Asthma You're It Page 209/265
  115. Scene 46 Duration 02 08 Panel 1 Duration 01 00

    Action Notes Dee and Zuriu loom over Dion You're It Page 218/265
  116. Scene 46 Duration 02 08 Panel 2 Duration 01 08

    Dialog DEE and ZURUI You're It You're It Page 219/265
  117. Scene 47 Duration 01 12 Panel 1 Duration 00 12

    Action Notes Dee and Zuriu step on Dion repeatedly You're It Page 220/265
  118. Scene 47 Duration 01 12 Panel 3 Duration 00 10

    Dialog DION help me You're It Page 222/265
  119. Scene 47 Duration 01 12 Panel 4 Duration 00 07

    Dialog DION help me You're It Page 223/265
  120. Scene 48 Duration 05 01 Panel 7 Duration 00 10

    Dialog DION please stop You're It Page 230/265
  121. Scene 48 Duration 05 01 Panel 8 Duration 00 09

    Dialog DION please stop You're It Page 231/265
  122. Scene 48 Duration 05 01 Panel 10 Duration 00 10

    Dialog DION please stop You're It Page 233/265
  123. Scene 51 Duration 01 14 Panel 1 Duration 00 21

    Dialog DION Fine.. I'm it You're It Page 240/265
  124. Scene 51 Duration 01 14 Panel 2 Duration 00 11

    Dialog DION I'm it You're It Page 241/265
  125. Scene 51 Duration 01 14 Panel 3 Duration 00 06

    Dialog DION I'm it You're It Page 242/265
  126. Scene 52 Duration 03 04 Panel 3 Duration 00 06

    Dialog DEE pleasure doing business with you You're It Page 245/265
  127. Scene 52 Duration 03 04 Panel 4 Duration 01 08

    Dialog DEE pleasure doing business with you You're It Page 246/265
  128. Scene 52 Duration 03 04 Panel 5 Duration 00 22

    Dialog ZURIU heh heh heh You're It Page 247/265
  129. Scene 55 Duration 03 21 Panel 1 Duration 01 14

    Dialog DION Defeated! And by some.. You're It Page 258/265
  130. Scene 55 Duration 03 21 Panel 2 Duration 02 07

    Dialog DION ..underdeveloped embryos too? You're It Page 259/265
  131. Scene 56 Duration 07 02 Panel 2 Duration 01 03

    Dialog DEE Later loser! You're It Page 261/265
  132. Scene 56 Duration 07 02 Panel 3 Duration 00 20

    Dialog ZURIU Bleghhhhh You're It Page 262/265