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MoonshotWIP

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June 17, 2026
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 MoonshotWIP

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Geo

June 17, 2026

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  1. Scene 2 Panel 2 Dialog (Voice Over) I know away

    in. Notes dancer looks bald here bc i was still designing her wig
  2. Scene 3 Panel 5 Dialog (voice over) I just need

    you to keep Johnny at the casino
  3. Scene 3 Panel 6 Dialog (voice over) I just need

    you to keep Johnny at the casino
  4. Scene 3 Panel 7 Dialog (voice over) I just need

    you to keep Johnny at the casino
  5. Scene 3 Panel 8 Dialog (voice over) I just need

    you to keep Johnny at the casino
  6. Scene 3 Panel 9 Action Notes instead of diagetic sound,

    snapping compact shut should be edited to a beat in the music. Which doesnt exist because this is storyboards. but imagine there was free improv style jazz drum solos basically the whole time.
  7. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog (voice over) He's not hard

    to find. He's peacock. And a douche.
  8. Scene 5 Panel 2 Dialog (voice over) He's not hard

    to find. He's peacock. And a douche.
  9. Scene 6 Panel 1 Action Notes instead of diagetic sound

    for sneeze, edit to cymbal crash in the imaginary jazz soundtrack
  10. Scene 2_A Panel 1 Dialog Daddy gave my mother a

    key to his penthouse years ago, even if she was only his worst kept secret.
  11. Scene 2_A Panel 2 Dialog Daddy gave my mother a

    key to his penthouse years ago, even if she was only his worst kept secret.
  12. Scene 2_A Panel 3 Dialog Daddy gave my mother a

    key to his penthouse years ago, even if she was only his worst kept secret.
  13. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog V.O. But they all know

    the big boss's type. Notes is this clear? the idea is that she looks like her mother, and that the mob boss is skeezy enough people believe he'd sleep with someone young enough to be his daughter.
  14. Scene 32 Panel 3 Dialog (barking continues) Action Notes little

    squares of film of the dog barking pop in one by one, the animatoin slightly offset from eachother so it resembles a film strip or praxiniscope
  15. Scene 35 Panel 3 Dialog The thief appears to be

    woman. Lean but athletic, built like a dancer.
  16. Scene 35 Panel 4 Dialog The thief is a woman,

    probably. But very athletic, built like a dancer.
  17. Scene 38 Panel 3 Dialog You know about this? You

    think just because you know how to count cards you can come into my casino and screw me?!
  18. Scene 38 Panel 4 Dialog You know about this? You

    think just because you know how to count cards you can come into my casino and screw me?!
  19. Scene 38 Panel 5 Dialog You know about this? You

    think just because you know how to count cards you can come into my casino and screw me?!
  20. Scene 39 Panel 1 Dialog Gambler: You don't have time

    to act this way. Once that thief is out of the building, your father is cutting you out of the business.
  21. Scene 40 Panel 1 Dialog Gambler: and this won't be

    'your casino' any more. Johny: The hell are you trying to pull? Gambler: Nothing.
  22. Scene 41 Panel 1 Dialog This isn't my scheme. I'm

    here because I'm in the kind of debt that will get me killed. Let me help you.
  23. Scene 52 Panel 1 Dialog Johnny: You're just buying time

    for your little dancer. Gambler: It's not like that. I'm on your side.
  24. Scene 52 Panel 2 Dialog Johnny: You're just buying time

    for your little dancer. Gambler: It's not like that. I'm on your side.
  25. Scene 52 Panel 3 Dialog Johnny: Are you gonna throw

    away your life for this girl or are you gonna talk? Gambler: you're not listening to me. I'm trying to tell you that-
  26. Scene 52 Panel 4 Dialog Johnny: Are you gonna throw

    away your life for this girl or are you gonna talk? Gambler: you're not listening to me. I'm trying to tell you that-