The Red Line by Ashley Lam

An original story about an artist named Logan looking for human connection on a crowded subway ride.

Transcript

2. Scene 002 Panel 001 Slugging INT. SUBWAY STATION - MORNING Red Line Page 2/231
3. Scene 002 Panel 002 Red Line Page 3/231
4. Scene 002 Panel 003 Red Line Page 4/231
5. Scene 002 Panel 004 Red Line Page 5/231
6. Scene 002 Panel 005 Red Line Page 6/231
7. Scene 002 Panel 006 Red Line Page 7/231
8. Scene 002 Panel 007 Red Line Page 8/231
9. Scene 002 Panel 008 Red Line Page 9/231
10. Scene 002 Panel 009 Red Line Page 10/231
11. Scene 003 Panel 001 Red Line Page 11/231
12. Scene 003 Panel 002 Red Line Page 12/231
13. Scene 003 Panel 003 Dialog Stranger 1: Watch it! Red Line Page 13/231
14. Scene 003 Panel 004 Red Line Page 14/231
15. Scene 003 Panel 005 Dialog PA System: Doors are closing. Red Line Page 15/231
16. Scene 003 Panel 006 Dialog PA System: Doors are closing. Red Line Page 16/231
17. Scene 004 Panel 001 Red Line Page 17/231
18. Scene 004 Panel 002 Red Line Page 18/231
19. Scene 004 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Wup! Action Notes The train lurches. Red Line Page 19/231
20. Scene 004 Panel 004 Red Line Page 20/231
21. Scene 004 Panel 005 Dialog Stranger 2: HEY! LOGAN: Sorry! Red Line Page 21/231
22. Scene 004 Panel 006 Red Line Page 22/231
23. Scene 004 Panel 007 Red Line Page 23/231
24. Scene 004 Panel 008 Dialog LOGAN: Yeagh! Red Line Page 24/231
25. Scene 004 Panel 009 Red Line Page 25/231
26. Scene 004 Panel 010 Dialog LOGAN: OOF. Red Line Page 26/231
27. Scene 004 Panel 011 Red Line Page 27/231
28. Scene 004 Panel 012 Dialog LOGAN: Hoo... Red Line Page 28/231
29. Scene 004 Panel 013 Red Line Page 29/231
30. Scene 004 Panel 014 Dialog LOGAN: Rough train, huh? Red Line Page 30/231
31. Scene 004 Panel 015 Red Line Page 31/231
32. Scene 004 Panel 016 Red Line Page 32/231
33. Scene 004 Panel 017 Dialog SFX: <Zipp!> Red Line Page 33/231
34. Scene 004 Panel 018 Red Line Page 34/231
35. Scene 004 Panel 019 Red Line Page 35/231
36. Scene 004 Panel 020 Red Line Page 36/231
37. Scene 005 Panel 001 Red Line Page 37/231
38. Scene 005 Panel 002 Red Line Page 38/231
39. Scene 005 Panel 003 Red Line Page 39/231
40. Scene 005 Panel 004 Red Line Page 40/231
41. Scene 005 Panel 005 Red Line Page 41/231
42. Scene 005 Panel 006 Red Line Page 42/231
43. Scene 006 Panel 001 Red Line Page 43/231
44. Scene 006 Panel 002 Red Line Page 44/231
45. Scene 006 Panel 003 Red Line Page 45/231
46. Scene 006 Panel 004 Red Line Page 46/231
47. Scene 007 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Hmm. Red Line Page 47/231
48. Scene 007 Panel 002 Red Line Page 48/231
49. Scene 007 Panel 003 Red Line Page 49/231
50. Scene 008 Panel 001 Red Line Page 50/231
51. Scene 008 Panel 002 Red Line Page 51/231
52. Scene 008 Panel 003 Red Line Page 52/231
53. Scene 009 Panel 001 Red Line Page 53/231
54. Scene 009 Panel 002 Red Line Page 54/231
55. Scene 009 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: <Sigh.> Red Line Page 55/231
56. Scene 010 Panel 001 Red Line Page 56/231
57. Scene 010 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): Excuse me... Red Line Page 57/231
58. Scene 010 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): Excuse me... Red Line Page 58/231
59. Scene 011 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL: Oops, right behind you. Red Line Page 59/231
60. Scene 011 Panel 002 Red Line Page 60/231
61. Scene 011 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: S'cuse me. Red Line Page 61/231
62. Scene 011 Panel 004 Red Line Page 62/231
63. Scene 011 Panel 005 Red Line Page 63/231
64. Scene 011 Panel 006 Red Line Page 64/231
65. Scene 011 Panel 007 Red Line Page 65/231
66. Scene 012 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: <Gasp.> Red Line Page 66/231
67. Scene 012 Panel 002 Red Line Page 67/231
68. Scene 012 Panel 003 Red Line Page 68/231
69. Scene 012 Panel 004 Red Line Page 69/231
70. Scene 013 Panel 001 Red Line Page 70/231
71. Scene 013 Panel 002 Red Line Page 71/231
72. Scene 013 Panel 003 Red Line Page 72/231
73. Scene 014 Panel 001 Red Line Page 73/231
74. Scene 014 Panel 002 Red Line Page 74/231
75. Scene 014 Panel 003 Red Line Page 75/231
76. Scene 015 Panel 001 Red Line Page 76/231
77. Scene 015 Panel 002 Red Line Page 77/231
78. Scene 015 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: Oh! Red Line Page 78/231
79. Scene 015 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: Pardon me. Red Line Page 79/231
80. Scene 015 Panel 005 Red Line Page 80/231
81. Scene 015 Panel 006 Dialog PA System: Arriving at Marienplatz Station. Red Line Page 81/231
82. Scene 015 Panel 007 Dialog PA System: Arriving at Marienplatz Station. Action Notes The train rumbles as it brakes. Red Line Page 82/231
83. Scene 015 Panel 008 Dialog RACHEL: Weagh!! LOGAN: Careful! Red Line Page 83/231
84. Scene 015 Panel 009 Red Line Page 84/231
85. Scene 015 Panel 010 Dialog LOGAN: I got you! Red Line Page 85/231
86. Scene 015 Panel 011 Dialog LOGAN: I got you! Red Line Page 86/231
87. Scene 016 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Hoo... Red Line Page 87/231
88. Scene 016 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Hey... Red Line Page 88/231
89. Scene 016 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: You okay? Red Line Page 89/231
90. Scene 017 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL: Yeah... Red Line Page 90/231
91. Scene 017 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: I'm... Red Line Page 91/231
92. Scene 017 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: <GASP!> Red Line Page 92/231
93. Scene 017 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: What... Red Line Page 93/231
94. Scene 018 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Sorry. Did I hurt you? Red Line Page 94/231
95. Scene 018 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Sorry. Did I hurt you? Red Line Page 95/231
96. Scene 018 Panel 003 Red Line Page 96/231
97. Scene 018 Panel 004 Red Line Page 97/231
98. Scene 018 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Huh... Red Line Page 98/231
99. Scene 018 Panel 006 Red Line Page 99/231
100. Scene 018 Panel 007 Dialog LOGAN: HEY! WAIT! Red Line Page 100/231
101. Scene 018 Panel 008 Dialog LOGAN: Your purse! Red Line Page 101/231
102. Scene 018 Panel 009 Red Line Page 102/231
103. Scene 019 Panel 001 Red Line Page 103/231
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109. Scene 019 Panel 007 Dialog PA System: The doors are closing. Action Notes The doors start to close. Red Line Page 109/231
110. Scene 019 Panel 008 Dialog PA System: The doors are closing. LOGAN: Wha--?! Action Notes Something pulls Logan back. Red Line Page 110/231
111. Scene 019 Panel 009 Dialog PA System: The doors are closing. LOGAN: Where -- Red Line Page 111/231
112. Scene 019 Panel 010 Action Notes The train starts to leave the station. Red Line Page 112/231
113. Scene 019 Panel 011 Red Line Page 113/231
114. Scene 019 Panel 012 Red Line Page 114/231
115. Scene 020 Panel 001 Red Line Page 115/231
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119. Scene 021 Panel 001 Red Line Page 119/231
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123. Scene 022 Panel 001 Red Line Page 123/231
124. Scene 022 Panel 002 Red Line Page 124/231
125. Scene 022 Panel 003 Red Line Page 125/231
126. Scene 023 Panel 001 Red Line Page 126/231
127. Scene 023 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Hmm. Red Line Page 127/231
128. Scene 023 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Hmm. Red Line Page 128/231
129. Scene 024 Panel 001 Red Line Page 129/231
130. Scene 024 Panel 002 Red Line Page 130/231
131. Scene 024 Panel 003 Red Line Page 131/231
132. Scene 025 Panel 001 Red Line Page 132/231
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135. Scene 026 Panel 001 Red Line Page 135/231
136. Scene 026 Panel 002 Red Line Page 136/231
137. Scene 026 Panel 003 Red Line Page 137/231
138. Scene 026 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: Hi. Red Line Page 138/231
139. Scene 026 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Oh! Red Line Page 139/231
140. Scene 026 Panel 006 Red Line Page 140/231
141. Scene 027 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Hi... Red Line Page 141/231
142. Scene 027 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: I'm Rachel. Red Line Page 142/231
143. Scene 027 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: I'm Logan! Red Line Page 143/231
144. Scene 027 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: I saw that you... you draw? Red Line Page 144/231
145. Scene 027 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Oh! Red Line Page 145/231
146. Scene 027 Panel 006 Dialog LOGAN: Here, take a look. Red Line Page 146/231
147. Scene 028 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: I try to draw the people around me... Red Line Page 147/231
148. Scene 028 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: I try to draw the people around me... Red Line Page 148/231
149. Scene 028 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: But they all look... Red Line Page 149/231
150. Scene 028 Panel 004 Dialog LOGAN: But they all look... Red Line Page 150/231
151. Scene 028 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Unhappy. Red Line Page 151/231
152. Scene 028 Panel 006 Dialog LOGAN: Unhappy. Red Line Page 152/231
153. Scene 028 Panel 007 Dialog LOGAN: And then... Red Line Page 153/231
154. Scene 029 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: You. Red Line Page 154/231
155. Scene 029 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: Oh! Red Line Page 155/231
156. Scene 029 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: You need to finish! Red Line Page 156/231
157. Scene 029 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: You need to finish! Red Line Page 157/231
158. Scene 029 Panel 005 Dialog RACHEL: You need to finish! Red Line Page 158/231
159. Scene 029 Panel 006 Red Line Page 159/231
160. Scene 030 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: R-- Red Line Page 160/231
161. Scene 030 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Really? Red Line Page 161/231
162. Scene 030 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Okay! Red Line Page 162/231
163. Scene 030 Panel 004 Dialog LOGAN: Thanks! Red Line Page 163/231
164. Scene 030 Panel 005 Red Line Page 164/231
165. Scene 030 Panel 006 Red Line Page 165/231
166. Scene 031 Panel 001 Red Line Page 166/231
167. Scene 031 Panel 002 Red Line Page 167/231
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169. Scene 032 Panel 001 Red Line Page 169/231
170. Scene 032 Panel 002 Red Line Page 170/231
171. Scene 032 Panel 003 Dialog PA System: Arriving at Laim Station. Red Line Page 171/231
172. Scene 032 Panel 004 Dialog PA System: Arriving at Laim Station. Red Line Page 172/231
173. Scene 032 Panel 005 Action Notes The train braking causes Logan's hand to shake. Red Line Page 173/231
174. Scene 032 Panel 006 Red Line Page 174/231
175. Scene 032 Panel 007 Red Line Page 175/231
176. Scene 033 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Tch. Red Line Page 176/231
177. Scene 033 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Well... Red Line Page 177/231
178. Scene 033 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Maybe next time? Red Line Page 178/231
179. Scene 033 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: Okay! Red Line Page 179/231
180. Scene 033 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Great! Red Line Page 180/231
181. Scene 033 Panel 006 Dialog LOGAN: This is my usual commute. Red Line Page 181/231
182. Scene 033 Panel 007 Dialog LOGAN: This is my usual commute. Red Line Page 182/231
183. Scene 033 Panel 008 Dialog LOGAN: This is my usual commute. Red Line Page 183/231
184. Scene 034 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: So I guess I'll see you later then. Red Line Page 184/231
185. Scene 034 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: So I guess I'll see you later then. Red Line Page 185/231
186. Scene 034 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: So I guess I'll see you later then. Red Line Page 186/231
187. Scene 034 Panel 004 Dialog LOGAN: So I guess I'll see you later then. Red Line Page 187/231
188. Scene 034 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Bye, Rachel! Red Line Page 188/231
189. Scene 034 Panel 006 Red Line Page 189/231
190. Scene 034 Panel 007 Red Line Page 190/231
191. Scene 035 Panel 001 Red Line Page 191/231
192. Scene 035 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: Uh! Red Line Page 192/231
193. Scene 035 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: WAIT! Red Line Page 193/231
194. Scene 036 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL: Your bag! Red Line Page 194/231
195. Scene 036 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: Your bag! Red Line Page 195/231
196. Scene 036 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: Excuse me! Red Line Page 196/231
197. Scene 036 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: WAIT! Red Line Page 197/231
198. Scene 037 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): WAIT! Red Line Page 198/231
199. Scene 037 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): WAIT! Red Line Page 199/231
200. Scene 037 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): WAIT! Red Line Page 200/231
201. Scene 037 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): WAIT! Red Line Page 201/231
202. Scene 037 Panel 005 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): LOGAN! Red Line Page 202/231
203. Scene 037 Panel 006 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): YOUR BAG! Red Line Page 203/231
204. Scene 037 Panel 007 Dialog LOGAN: Oh! Red Line Page 204/231
205. Scene 038 Panel 001 Dialog PA System: The doors are closing. Red Line Page 205/231
206. Scene 038 Panel 002 Dialog PA System: The doors are closing. Red Line Page 206/231
207. Scene 038 Panel 003 Dialog PA System: The doors are closing. Action Notes The doors close on Rachel's arm. Red Line Page 207/231
208. Scene 038 Panel 004 Dialog SFX: <Puff!> Action Notes And her arm effervesces into a sparkly smoke. Red Line Page 208/231
209. Scene 038 Panel 005 Red Line Page 209/231
210. Scene 038 Panel 006 Red Line Page 210/231
211. Scene 038 Panel 007 Red Line Page 211/231
212. Scene 038 Panel 008 Red Line Page 212/231
213. Scene 038 Panel 009 Action Notes The train moves to leave the station. Red Line Page 213/231
214. Scene 039 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Wha-- Red Line Page 214/231
215. Scene 039 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Uh. Red Line Page 215/231
216. Scene 039 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Rachel?! Red Line Page 216/231
217. Scene 040 Panel 001 Red Line Page 217/231
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223. Scene 040 Panel 007 Red Line Page 223/231
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225. Scene 040 Panel 009 Red Line Page 225/231
226. Scene 040 Panel 010 Red Line Page 226/231
227. Scene 041 Panel 001 Red Line Page 227/231
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